This Star Is Very Good at Cooking

I caught up on the latest chapter today, and I see that there are no comments, so I would like to briefly share my opinion for everyone's reference! In terms of advantages, the author's creativity is pretty good. The story is set on a blue star that lacks many famous dishes. As a former chef who traveled through time and became a star, he "invented" various dishes and became popular. In addition to the improvement of recipes and cooking skills before the character traveled through time, there is no so-called system. Friends who don't like systems can take a look. Let's talk about the areas that I personally feel need to be improved. First of all, the character is a bit confusing. Let's talk about the protagonist first. According to the current situation, he is a trafficker who was exposed by his old club because his contract expired and was not renewed. As a result, he was banned in various ways and wanted to be confused. But let's say it's a top-tier company (it doesn't have an operations department but has a dedicated black man). Currently, the company only has one agent (who's not very good at it) helping him manage it, and there are no rival companies that want to take over. Let's just say it's little Camilla. She's almost confused herself. If you want to quit, you can quit. Why does the company use such a huge favor to block you in various ways? Then why should they bother to talk to you? Then after the character time traveled, the protagonist began to lie down in various ways (the mentality is that he is a cook, not a trafficker, and he doesn't want to be a star). Since he is lying, he shouldn't participate in any show. But when he did, he didn't fit in with the show and the other guests. The reason for disrespecting and ignoring you is because that group of people want to step on you (all the people you meet are bad people). The problem is that when people step on you, you also have interactive plots with others to give feedback. This is not the reason for you to show off as soon as you go (you can write it as indisputable). It seems that the protagonist has no structure. In addition, for this kind of idiot, other celebrities' feedback is more to hide, don't get in trouble, and say every day that people step on you and are too low-level (did you mention any personal grudges before, others insist on messing with you), and there is no obvious slap in the face plot (they are written directly about the inner activities of other stars, rather than various inadvertent behaviors during the filming of the show). Then there are the agent and the director who participated in the show. The agent has no positioning and no plan for the protagonist. There is no communication about the protagonist's status when everyone leaves the meeting alone (the reason is that he doesn't like meetings) (the director asked you to participate in the show, and then behave like this). Then the show became popular because of the protagonist's skills, but he gave up after encountering a group of vegetarians (what the show wants is to be hot and controversial, and you also ordered the people, but the director gave up immediately... Why did you invite the protagonist)? Then he opened a shop with another guest on the show to make money. On the show, he was looked down upon by others because the protagonist's cooking skills improved but there was no in-depth communication. Then others came to him and agreed to cooperate just for some rice. Earlier, he said that he quit the circle because he had rice and didn't want to play. Now, he cooperates for the sake of rice? Since you decided to cooperate to make more money, shouldn't you show a few dishes and shock the partners, only to end up teaching a few cooks and giving them a slap in the face before being dismissed as a shopkeeper? So it has nothing to do with you whether the diners eat well or not. If your reputation is bad, your partners will take the blame. If the food on the show is bad, it's because you were hacked. You can't change other people's problems, but you should still work on it. It's okay to say you want to leave the industry and not force yourself to do it, but the chef came from time travel, where is the basic spirit of craftsmanship? The supporting characters also need to be carefully set up. If the character of the original protagonist is okay, the supporting characters you encounter should not be ignored. There should be some that are pity and some that are ignored. They are not the tool people that exist now, with a lot of names and no one can be remembered. As the female protagonist, the characters of the female star and the female boss are not specific enough. Why the female star (a good person) helps him and why the female boss (a strong one) forces him are all unclear. Of course, it may have something to do with the fact that she just appeared on the scene, but at least it feels a bit inexplicable so far. The plot design is also recommended to be strengthened. Character conflicts are expressed more through behavioral dialogue (other people face the protagonist), rather than what everyone thinks in their hearts. The protagonist's inadvertent behavior and dialogue are the essence. Then there are some logical problems, such as the audience cooking according to the first program, but in fact the program does not show the complete cooking process (not a highlight), let alone the specific dosage of various seasonings. The dishes can only appear to be dishes with various strange flavors. There should be this hot spot here, and then find the protagonist to film a complete cooking process. The dish video was played and everyone recognized it, and at the same time it could maintain its popularity. As a result, the plot had nothing to do with the protagonist. It was really 😅 The creative ideas of this book are good, and the updates are on time, but the writing level needs to be strengthened and the outline needs to be re-polished. Here is a thumbs up to the author!

How many novels like this does your studio publish at a time?

I don't understand the author's mentality! I was blackmailed and teased by women, and while threatening to quit the industry, I felt disgusted by my former company. As a result, they neither accomplished anything nor simply quit the circle. What are you trying to do? Shake M?

In fact, I really don't understand, why do you people who write books write about celebrities finding evidence on their own? Just take the screenshot of the black material posted and report it to the police and sue him for spreading rumors and defamation. Others will have to provide evidence to prove that you did it, otherwise you will be sued directly

As a trainee, if the contract expires and is not renewed, there is no problem in itself. Call the police directly. Also go to the so-called ex-girlfriends to ask them to clarify? Why do I feel like this book was written by someone from the Little Fairy fan club? .

Idle, pure entertainment, neither entertainment nor food

Can you stop having to find an opponent for the protagonist everywhere? You just need to make a normal comparison to highlight the protagonist's abilities. It's strange that people who live like this are so sick. People feel disgusted with themselves wherever they go. Isn't this a disease? What you wear must be comfortable. Who the hell wants to fight for air every day?

Will the president break the law now? Men break the law, and women also break the law. The president has offended you 😁😁

The introduction says that it is not a copy of Wen Gong, but the recipes and dishes are also copied.

The book is super stupid, the dishes have no fish flavor, and I don't know about Wensi Tofu. It's so ridiculous that I can't stand it!

There is no logic at all, it feels like I just wrote it out of thin air.

The protagonist is Cai Kun, who gave up, gave up.

The latest chapter is too ridiculous. Goodbye!

I don't know if you can persevere in writing content like this, so that you don't become a eunuch again in the end.

Celebrity Cooking Chef Huang?

Goodbye, you

I quit after reading Chapter 4. Ban (Huang) wanted the protagonist to make a fool of himself so he asked him to cook a dish. The protagonist wanted to make a fish-flavored shredded pork dish. Then, there was no such dish in the world 🙂🙂🙂

The same routine, pig's feet never want to do anything, and then are always forced to do it (all kinds of sex, 360 degrees, no blind spots), the main character is a different from ordinary people, awkward, and has no idea what to watch.

I suggest that the theme line of He Ruoyan be removed. Originally, if you want to create a character of a chef for a star who has withdrawn from the industry, you can write the theme line of cooking skills. There is no need to put such a strong girl here, and it is kidnapping. What makes me think that this star has no ability at all. What I wrote before was quite good, but suddenly I added a personal setting and it suddenly became bad. Of course, this is a personal feeling. Um