Peninsula: My Idol Girlfriend Died at the Beginning

Warm reminder, the following content contains spoilers, read with caution.      This book was serialized to Chapter 64 on December 30, 2024, and is currently in a suspended state. After reading all the chapters, I couldn't help but secretly say it was a pity. The poor results may prove that brain-burning is not suitable for Korean entertainment? This book is cleverly conceived and has a lot of imagination. But the author really tried too hard, making the book not easy to understand. Let's discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this book. The shortcomings are explained a bit too much, but that doesn't mean the book isn't good enough. As long as you have the patience to read the previous content, the subsequent development will still be very exciting. Advantages: The writing is good and the characters are vividly depicted. The heroine Kim Ji-soo in the book is so lovable that the author wrote her into Bai Yueguang. Rich in suspense. People are always curious about which point in time the male protagonist will travel to, what situations he will encounter, and what plot will happen with Kim Ji Soo. Golden chapter. The novel setting is eye-catching. After reading the first chapter, it's hard not to want to read the second. So what about after reading Chapter 2? This inevitably leads to the many regrets in this book. First of all, this book gets off to a bad start. The title of the book looks a bit scary, but at least it has a gimmick and is barely acceptable. The introduction directly exposes the problem. The author reveals his own shortcomings, "If you feel irritable at the beginning of the book, it means you have entered the protagonist state of this book." The introduction will dissuade readers before they even start reading. I appreciate the author's honesty, but could you please make some changes and change the previous chapters? The first twenty-one chapters are indeed a threshold, which plays a role in screening the audience. There are too many puzzles that make it difficult for readers to clarify and make them confused. Moderate suspense can be fascinating, but excessive suspense can create confusion. Secondly, the main tone of this book is too sad. The male protagonist is always in a state of feeling lost and confused, which makes it particularly uncomfortable for readers to feel like they are involved. There are too many female characters introduced, all of whom are Riddlers. Especially the female characters know everything. No matter how the male protagonist asks, they can't answer. This makes people feel very uncomfortable to read, as if they are stuck in the throat and feel uncomfortable. Again, too little fun. If you want to raise something, suppress it first. Suppression is quite depressing, and raising something is not high enough. The obviously enjoyable love harem plot cannot offset the negative emotions that will soon be lost. The male protagonist obviously made a lot of money, but it didn't feel like he enjoyed anything. In the end, the male protagonist was too passive and did not fight enough. Contemporary online novels are essentially enjoyable novels. Shuangwen is like an RPG game, and the male protagonist levels up too slowly. The author should give readers a hope and let them know that the male protagonist has a way to break the situation and cannot always let him pass through time passively. Faced with the uncontrollable time-travel problem, the male protagonist seems too powerless. Even when the hero is angry, it is incompetent rage. Readers' comments may not necessarily be good words. It can be seen that this book is the result of the author's careful thinking. It's a pity that all this ingenuity was wasted. A lot of typing is not in vain if the author can come back and update. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot, which has just begun! But the eunuch can understand his poor grades.

Two things I like very much

It's like traveling in reverse time. At the beginning, the hero kills Ji-soo but the male protagonist doesn't recognize her. Then the male protagonist goes against the current and gradually likes Ji-soo. Then when he likes Ji-soo the most, he meets Ji-soo who didn't know him at that time. It's a bit like the structure of an ancient lovesickness song. When you love the other person the most, the other person doesn't know you. Goodbyes are all farewells.

This book really makes you unable to understand it unless you read it from the beginning. Even if you read the foreshadowing and the main plot separately, you will not be able to understand it. Does the male protagonist have the ability to time travel at any time? That's pretty mind-boggling. I feel like if your book was raised and read by someone else, it would probably kill a lot of brain cells.

I just read the first two or three chapters, and I feel that the male protagonist is similar to the movie "The Time Traveler's Wife" where time travel occurs from time to time. The two timelines of the male protagonist and the female protagonist continue to intersect. I don't know if my guess is correct, but from the perspective of content arrangement, I think it will be difficult to write.

Xiao Pei

It's great, to be honest, the author's timeline when he started writing was very, well, how should I put it? Confused, when I read it, I really felt a sense of irritability that I felt with the protagonist. I'm not saying it's not good. It's well known that the words of a novel can arouse people's emotions. I think it is successful in every aspect. I hope that some readers who have just started reading will be patient, and there will be surprises later. Congratulations to the author, and I hope you will continue writing and bring us better plot development

The writing is very good. I won't write it next time. My head hurts from reading it back and forth. I would rather read a simpler novel that captures all my favorite female idols.