Football: I'm Only 16, and You Want Me to Retire and Come Back?

The more I watch, the more boring I become

The protagonist of this book is Kanter's combination of removing all the bad qualities and then adding them.

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Among the midfielders I have watched personally, I think: Li Kang's "Destructive Midfielder" > Su Ke's "All-round Center" > Zhou Yi's "Champion's Heart" > Tang Ye's "This Book", the specific ages of the protagonists are not much different Li Kang: 17 years old (Leverkusen, 1 million euros), Bundesliga champion 🥇, Champions League semi-finals, European Cup champion 🥇 18 years old (Arsenal, 200 million euros), Premier League champion🥇, Champions League champion🥇, FA Cup champion🥇 19 years old (Chelsea, 250 million euros), Premier League champion🥇, Champions League champion🥇, FA Cup champion🥇, World Cup champion🥇 Zhouyi: 18 years old (Dortmund), Bundesliga champion 🥇, German Cup champion 🥇, Champions League quarter-finals 19 years old (Dortmund), Bundesliga champion 🥇, German Cup champion 🥇, Champions League champion 🥇 20 years old (Dortmund), Bundesliga champion 🥇, German Cup champion 🥇, Champions League champion 🥇, World Cup semi-finals 18 years old (AC Milan, 30 million euros), Serie A champion🥇, Champions League champion🥇 19 years old (AC Milan), Serie A champion🥇, Champions League champion🥇 20 years old (Real Madrid, 100 million euros), La Liga champion🥇, Champions League semi-finals, World Cup third place🥉 21 years old (Real Madrid), La Liga champion🥇, Champions League champion🥇 Tang Ye: 17 years old (Utrecht), Eredivisie champion🥇, Dutch Cup champion🥇 19 years old (Manchester United), second in the Premier League 🥈, FA Cup champion 🥇, League Cup champion 🥇, World Cup top 16   20 years old (Manchester United), Premier League champion 🥇, Asian Cup champion 🥇, FA Cup champion 🥇, Champions League quarter-finals

There has to be a reason for showing off, right? How could a 17-year-old boy behave badly for no reason? Since you play football, it means you like it, but if you like something, you will mess it up for no reason. The body's hormones don't allow it, either. Young people are always full of energy.

You can't lose the fire. If you have a broken system, it's fine. Isn't the problem? And then you start to mess up at the age of 16. What kind of athlete do you think you are?

I would like to ask if the protagonist of this book really takes the national football team to the quarterfinals of the World Cup. I really feel that even if the protagonist is the best in football, he will barely make it to the World Cup at best.

Those who have never eaten shit can read this book.

For the sake of a low word count and poor money, I forced myself to suppress the main character's strength and destroy the logic of the novel without even trying. Each chapter was too expensive, so I gave up!

It gives me the feeling that Tenhahe is the protagonist. The protagonist of the novel is just a marionette in the opponent's hands, or in other words, a silly and cute dog

There are currently 1.62 Million words, can it still be called the early stage? Let me ask you, the author, with the way you write more than 500,000 words per season, now is the time to produce results. If you keep writing like this, do you want to win the Champions League next season? That's more than two million words. The protagonist wins his first Champions League at the age of 20. Then I would like to ask you how many words you plan to write in this book? How many words should you write during the golden period from 20 to 27? Can your outline really last you this long? Or can you still suppress the strengthened protagonist after winning the Champions League? Then everything takes off, how much more content can you write? In the structure of this book, doesn't it seem like you're in front of something? The content of your growth period should be compressed within 1 million. Normally, 1.2 To 1.5 Million words will produce results at this time (UEFA Champions League, World Cup), and it will be delayed to 2 million words. Your protagonist is 2 million words when he is 20 years old. If not, I'll book it all. (Except for that kind of AI writing and meaningless content)

Yes, I used a template, and then succeeded, and then I continued to use it over and over again. The strength was all there. I treated other people as fools. According to the level of the protagonist he wrote, he treated the people in the novel as fools. I couldn't tell. Then he treated the readers as fools. It's not like he couldn't write well and his ideas were OK, but he fell into a devilish obstacle. Compared with the one who carries a knife on a rainy night and writes about behind-the-scenes stories, when readers read the novel, they bring their perspective into the protagonist, not into you. If you delete comments like this, isn't that just purification? Dog training? The Galaxy Market where you write novels, you can't be disgusting. I guess your editor told you not to listen to the readers' opinions. Write according to your own ideas. I can screw it. Tell me, which opinion of mine was random? When I read a novel, I am introduced to the protagonist. Am I introduced to Ten Hahe? You keep writing about Ten Ha He Ten Ha He. Do you think I enjoy reading it? Are you the kind of slow writer? You are a novice Shuangwen system writer. You make it seem like everything the protagonist has is Ten Ha He Ten Ha He. I can only say it is poisonous.

This book was quite interesting at the beginning, but to be honest, it is easy to get tired of reading, fall behind, have troubles with homework, and even lose a game that was originally a draw but lost after the protagonist. This is what a book that was originally very enjoyable and a bit funny has to do. I also said in the paragraph review that this is a cool article. The basic requirement of a cool article should be that it is better than reality. Otherwise, why do you write a cool article? Don't be a literary youth. My friend, do you really think what you write is so reasonable or logical. Also, does the author have any obsession with Manchester United or Tenghai? He must finish writing with Tenghai in the Eredivisie before continuing writing in the Premier League. In the middle, La Liga is almost described as another Eredivisie, and the head coach is described as an idiot. Can you not underestimate others so much? In short, I can only describe this book in two words: tasteless.

Is it difficult for you to write a protagonist with a normal personality? You can say that you are ignorant when you are 16, but you are almost 18 when you are 19, and you are still alone in a foreign country. As for the protagonist's condition, even after he was cured, he still drooled. The surname Tang is not the real Tang.

1. Generally speaking, winning all over the world with one trick will not go far. La Liga has become more and more homogeneous since the beginning of the competition, and the life of the protagonist is too dull. 2. The protagonist lacks growth elements. From the perspective of character and character image: At the beginning of the book, the protagonist appears as a 16-year-old adolescent kid from a wealthy family, lazy, playful, and unambitious. Relying on the skills and talents given by plug-ins, he is cared for and doted on by almost everyone around him. Therefore, he can play as he pleases with peace of mind, which has also become the initial selling point of the book. However, it is very unreasonable for the protagonist's "naive", "unacquainted" and "undesired" style of painting to continue until he enters the five major leagues. As a professional athlete who lives an independent life, has won two Eredivisie titles, is famous both at home and abroad, and is surrounded by adult men, the protagonist does not reflect any of his goals and desires at all. This is too divorced from reality. From the technical characteristics of the protagonist: It can be said that what style the protagonist has when he debuts will be the same style after two hundred chapters. Finding gaps + precise passing, speed, breakthrough, confrontation, shooting, and physical strength have not been significantly improved. 3. The highlights of competitive sports are victory and personal heroism. When you pursue the absurd comedy effect of going too far, you risk losing readers who love competitive sports itself.

I wonder if I have to write about this week... Tonic puts the author's favorite celebrities here. It's really quite yy. Can't a sports article be written without a female protagonist? Do you have to use this to show the charm of the male protagonist?

Although it is a fun article, at least it should be reasonable. Utrecht's asking price of 100 million is too much, and the pure reality is distorted.

It's not that you can't lose, but there must be a reason. You can't see much fault with the tailwind, but you can't write against the headwind at all. The first game between the Champions League and Juventus ended in a 3:3 draw. It was written well. The loss in the second game was also normal, but I didn't write down the specific method of loss. I just brushed it off. When we lost to Bournemouth in the last few rounds of the league championship, we only talked about the backcourt and set-piece issues. There were no details at all and we relied entirely on game report comments. In addition, the author's writing skills are limited, and he relies on the childish character of the protagonist to get votes. Now the situation is serious that the protagonist pretends to be stupid to fill the plot (the murderer and the mouse toss and turn, the Fujijia army never stops, and the humor is over). The actual quality is completely different from the monthly votes. If you want to read more professional football articles or cool articles, I suggest you give up. It is only suitable for those who are outside the novice circle or those who want to read casually without thinking.

Foreign football teammates have won. I don't know what their real level is, but I can imagine. The protagonist leads the Chinese team to win all by himself. I can't imagine it. I feel a huge sense of fragmentation. I don't have the ability, you know.

The protagonist of 100,000 words may not have grown up, the protagonist of 500,000 words may not make obvious progress, the protagonist of 1 million words may not have a deep understanding of victory, but now it is 1.5 Million words and still laughing, I don't know what to think...

The protagonist tied with Real Madrid before the upgrade, and lost to Barcelona after the upgrade. The key protagonist's team had tied with Barcelona in the two years in the real world, and the protagonist lost directly. I blindly guessed that there must be dozens of chapters written around the protagonist. In the end, Messi secretly won the championship and the Golden Ball. I will not comment on the author. It depends on what you can accept. Anyway, I can't accept it.

Just look at two or three hundred pictures. The people in the back are just plain disgusting.

This book is really bad. After reading the free chapter, I don't need to read it anymore. There are so many flaws that I'm too lazy to complain about it.

It looks a bit disgusting! This coach takes all the abilities and achievements of the protagonist and puts them into himself! And then the protagonist didn't say a word, and no one else questioned it at all? The protagonist is not under this coach, and many of the skills that the protagonist has obtained through plug-ins are all taught by this coach before. No one questions such a ridiculous and shameless statement. They keep writing about Teng Sheng and Teng Sheng, and also say that the protagonist can only be the most powerful under Teng Sheng? The protagonist defeated Manchester United led by this coach, but Tenglai said that he was defeated by the protagonist, and all the skills of the protagonist were taught by him! So Huang Qian's hard work for a season, the coach's efforts for a season, and the protagonist's training and plug-ins for a season, are they all due to Tenghai? Are everyone else clowns? No one questions this shameless garbage! And when he received the invitation from Manchester United, he thought the protagonist was too weak and didn't want the protagonist! And the protagonist is not interested in money or fame. Tenghai takes all the credit for everyone, and no one says anything. The protagonist also tacitly acknowledges that all his skills were taught to him by Tenghai! Wenger sold so many young players, but he didn't say that he taught them all their subsequent achievements, right? Ferguson didn't say that Ronaldo's subsequent achievements were his credit, right? As a result, your supporting role coach, whatever skills the protagonist acquires, and whatever achievements he gets, are all attributed to his own training! The protagonist in question only played under him for one season when he was 16 years old. If he continues to play under him for a few seasons after that, then the protagonist will become the world champion. This coach is probably not going to go to heaven, and the protagonist is only worthy of squatting behind such a shameless person.

From the second chapter 😰😰 What kind of garbage character does the protagonist have?

What a hook stone thing, wasting my time

Describe the protagonist. Please describe it to me! Wouldn't it be nice to have a lazy personality at the beginning? Later on, the writing becomes more childish, and you can go to the baby garden. Are you trying to find a mother fan for the protagonist?

Teng Hai actually took the kickback 😅. This is no longer a question of ability, but a question of principle and professional ethics.

Why do sports novels like to have an idiot protagonist?