Mystery: Destiny Is Long and Wild

I started writing, rubbing my brows, sighing, my buff was full, I was like a eunuch, and my writing was even worse than talking to myself.

Is there a complete sequence? I want to see the subsequent sequence names.

After reading it, I have a few questions. There are too many flaws in the names of the two animals. It is not impossible for animals to become extraordinary creatures. But you have come up with two and they have succeeded. And they did it suddenly and suddenly. They were not even raised since childhood. Why are these two extraordinary creatures so friendly to people and obedient? Moreover, the interaction between the two animals is really real. It's embarrassing. Isn't the protagonist treating these two too equally? These two are at most subordinates and pets. It's okay to have a showdown with Huang Tao, but if nothing else, there are high-sequences and even true gods staring at Huang Tao right now. You are tantamount to exploding in front of all the high-sequences here in Intis In addition, you are laying the groundwork ahead. There seems to be some secrets in the protagonist's family, but the protagonist was sent away directly. Then it seems that the family is still in a precarious situation. They don't know anything about what is going on in the family. What are you doing with so much foreshadowing? It makes people think that it is another family of extraordinary people or even an angel family. The result is suddenly stopped. I cut off some of the same uncomfortable batches in the middle of the shit, OK, now that the question is over, I feel that it is quite acceptable among novice authors, even better than among a bunch of mysterious fans now. It is just some wording and sentence making that I saw someone has pointed out in the book review. It does not need to appear, which may give people a better feeling.

The beginning is good, but it's a little lacking. I hope the author can finish it without being a eunuch.

I take it too much for granted, the protagonist and the author don't read comments.

Sanhua Empress. When did it appear? Why didn't I find it?

Oh destiny, like the ever-changing moon, where blessings and misfortunes depend, a life of misery is followed by sweetness, manipulated as you please, poverty and power, all melting like ice and snow, destiny is scary and empty, turns vicious and cruel in thousands of turns, all prayers are in vain..."

This is an interesting start, I look forward to the follow-up

At present, I personally think it's good, don't be a eunuch.

White space is more suitable for sequence 0, just like doors and errors. The strange traveler is more suitable for the mysterious.

It's pretty good, I just hope the author doesn't use eunuchs

Not very good, there's a lot of inner drama, and there's also a lot of nonsense

It's been eight days, he should be dead