Douluo: This Black Dragon Is Not Serious

One of the most disgusting people in Douluo Dalu 2 to me is this Zhou Xiaogang, who is exactly like Yu Xiaoan from Douluo Dalu 2.

Little Huo Niang

Why do you want to transform a good protagonist into a girl? I still can't accept it psychologically. Either you will rebel or your companion will be marginalized if you are no longer good, and you will have to become a girl and accept them. I feel like Xiao Nanliang, and I feel uncomfortable 😅😅

The character of the protagonist is not very well developed, a bit awkward, and there are many descriptions of broken characters, and the author's key level is not good either. If this was a Japanese comic, I would think it's normal, but this is a men's online novel. All I can say is that your JZ and political skills need to be improved.

This book has 100,000 words. The author is a complete novice and has been learning during the writing process. Before it is irreversible, I would like to seek the opinions of book friends. What do you think are the poisonous points of this book? If you put it forward, if more than 10 people agree, I will try my best to modify it.

It's okay for the original protagonist to be transformed into a female protagonist. As long as you don't change your gender to a woman in the middle, but you are a woman from the beginning, you can accept it. Just remember not to let other men take advantage of you. Write according to your own ideas. Come on!

Do you have to risk your life? I want the protagonist to reach level 80 or 90 in the jungle before he dares to show his face.

Damn me, I never expected that the most criticized thing in this book would be Huo Yuhao's transformation into a girl. But now it's done and there's no way to change it. We can only let the protagonist give up on her Arrange for her to change back into a man later? How do you feel?

Writing Dou Er does not restrict Tang Fozu. Basically all of them are gone. Because Buddha is a villain. This little move is so disgusting

Okay, the collision between the sewer and the floor, our Mario applies to fight

Except that the little Huo Nianghua is a bit difficult to accept, the rest is very consistent with what I have in mind. I have been waiting for a novel about the collision between the dragon clan and Dou Er. I hope the author will stop being a fan. I will feel uncomfortable if I can't read the chapter on raising children again☹️.

If you don't like watching girly movies, just don't read them. If you come in and say a few words to disgust others, the book Peerless Light is also very good.

It doesn't matter if you become a girl, tell me what you wrote in Chapter 24?

Is your Black King fake? Weak, really weak, with no expressive power, what kind of soul guide train can go against the sky? So far, I have never seen any article written about Dragon Family Douluo, just like Shi 💩

Isn't it okay to ignore the main character if he doesn't look like a girl?

There's no point in having a effeminate protagonist. It's not that there are no female characters in the original work. The inherent impression of the protagonist in the original work will make readers feel that she is still the same person. There may be a small number of people who like this kind of fun, but the vast majority of readers are indifferent to it.

I hope your next book will have a single heroine named Huo Niang

No, bro, you write fan fiction and you are so disrespectful to others.

Please follow up on reading and comment. The best support for newbies is following up on reading. Only those who follow up on reading can get recommendations! ! The first phase of the plot is almost over, and the protagonist will leave Shrek Academy later! By the way, kidnap the little Huo Niang 🤓

Based on the feedback from book friends, the following changes have been made to Chapter 9: 1. Explain why the protagonist told Wang Donger and Huo Yutong the secret of his martial spirit. (Originally I wanted to make a foreshadowing, but my poor writing skills caused book friends to misunderstand my meaning. Now I will withdraw the foreshadowing, simply and clearly) 2. Regarding Zhou Yi, I really didn't mean to whitewash Zhou Yi. I just made some objective evaluations, (but now it seems a bit redundant) So, some changes were made to the paragraphs about Zhou Yi. ... I will debug the contents of Chapter 23 and Chapter 24 in the next period of time. When I first wrote it, I didn't feel it when I read it. After a while, when I looked back, I found that the protagonist was really stupid and his character was broken. But this content has a big impact on the subsequent plot. I need to adjust the content carefully and try to make the protagonist fit the character without ruining the plot.

Huo Yuhao has become a girl, but Tian Meng is not. I can't stand it anymore and run away.