Make Your Wife Equal? Madam Hou Men and Li Remarry Their Brother-In-Law

After reading the synopsis, I thought the plot was crazy. In order to take revenge, should I pretend to be my sister and become someone else's wife? She obviously has a great background and saved the eldest princess. In short, it was contradictory and she had to promote her eventual marriage to her brother-in-law. Isn't this unethical?

Author, I think you need to reflect on why your novel started so high but failed so badly? ! The monthly ticket is either dead or alive, and the ranking is sometimes high and sometimes low. Have you ever thought about what the problem is? ! When I read your novel, I roughly understand that you want to create a career-oriented heroine who is clear-headed and rational, knows what she wants, and is not swayed by emotions. OK, this is very good, and it is also what current readers like to read. However, reading the whole novel of yours makes people feel very tired. Why? ! Because except for the heroine and the hero, all the characters here seem to not use their brains to do anything. The "villains" except the emperor, the eldest princess and the like are all stupid and bad. They are either quarreling or on the way to quarreling and doing things basically like "Qi Fei's real-name poisoning and doing bad things". The word "bad guy" is written directly on the face. There are very few high-energy scenes where the pros and cons use their brains to play games. Wherever the tense and exciting places are either quarreling or fighting, it is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. Your villain cannot be established, the dramatic tension is not enough, and the decent description does not look so exciting. I understand that you really want to establish the heroine as a clear-headed and intelligent person who can think independently, but the ruin is that the description of the heroine's high IQ is always described with various adjectives in a large space, and repeated, for example: lightly said , said calmly, smiled slightly, chuckled, smiled lightly and other similar adjectives. If you want to describe her as confident and measured and sure in her actions, do you have to use a large number of similar adjectives to describe her vividly? To be honest, such sentences are very tiring to read. They have almost no variation, are rigid and stereotyped. And the most important thing is that you basically followed your own thoughts and intentions to portray an unreal and down-to-earth image of the heroine. You can't see the character's emotions, the character's strengths and weaknesses, and there is no emotion. Just as you described in the book, you are a boring person, how could the male protagonist fall in love with you. Not only the heroine is confused, but I am also confused. I believe everyone is confused. The male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are inexplicable. Although there is a foreshadowing of the past, the love is so hasty and inexplicable that it is difficult to believe. A deputy commander of the Jin Yiwei sat in his current position, but then gradually disintegrated like a paper tiger, and his personality gradually collapsed. He knew that his brother would be angry, but he still appeared in his sister-in-law's boudoir openly. I don't understand what you want to express? At that time, they were clearly avoiding suspicion. Do you want to express that even if the female protagonist is not the Huainan Princess, the male protagonist will still be attracted to her? Okay, if that's the case, what's going on with the male protagonist's crazy pursuit of the southwest princess pretending to be the female protagonist? ! What's the point of breaking a red plum for my sister-in-law on a snowy night? ! You clearly love the southwest princess, why do you keep jumping between different identities? No matter how much you want to express your love for the heroine, you shouldn't just fall in love with someone who looks like the heroine, right? ! Generally speaking, the characters' emotions come suddenly, without reversal, change, or hierarchy. Everything comes out of nowhere, and it is forcedly described for the purpose of describing love. The heroine's character has always been a cold and snowy beauty, always weighing the pros and cons, without any changes or reversals, without any emotional pull or change of rhythm. It makes people feel emotionless. Although it is a novel about strong women fighting in palaces and houses, the heroine does not look like a girl in her twenties, but more like a mature woman in her thirties who sees everything and looks down on everything. This is a failure. No matter how wise or smart you are, you are also a human being and you have shortcomings. It cannot be perfect. In the famous scene of this novel, the heroine always looks like a winner. When she really can't solve the problem, the hero descends from the sky like God and helps the heroine solve all the difficult problems. This routine is very boring. Think about it for yourself, no matter how smart Zhen Huan is, she has reversed and changed and grown before and after entering the palace. This is a romance novel, but you wrote the heroine as if she has no change or growth. She is just a middle-aged woman in her thirties who has no food or salt, and does not eat soft and hard things. Then she found a male protagonist who is similar to herself, and then the male protagonist inexplicably fell in love with her. The two got together, and everything happened inexplicably. At first I thought the story was very grand, similar to Nirvana in Fire, but Mei Changsu in Nirvana in Fire also has weaknesses and emotions and can't help himself. I don't know if you want to write a cool story or something else. I only saw the heroine going through five levels and killing six generals, but you haven't set up these basic elements and basic emotions of being a human being. She doesn't seem to have any weaknesses, just mechanical revenge and revenge, and no love between children. You know, this is not only a Machiavellian novel, but also a romance novel. Your audience is not only young people but also slightly older people. Without emotional rendering, it is just a digital oil painting that looks good. And the most terrible thing is that in the overall story, a lot of space is devoted to the description and rendering of the scene. It seems to be trying to use the scene to describe the emotion, but the description is very artificial, the repetitive sentences are repeated over and over, and the description method is not clever at all, giving people the impression that there is a lot of nonsense. All the plots and plans are laid out on the surface, without any eye-catching or breathtaking feeling, and there are basically no rival villains on the opposite side. The villains are all stupid and bad like Guarja. There is no blank space in the content and no room for imagination. Why should I evaluate you? Because I am also an author. Your novels are very attractive when I first read them. Your text can be better, but I don't know if you are lazy or impatient. Many places are not described in more detail, and there are many typos and typos. It is really tiring to read.

2026, 2.3, 01:14 After a long time, the scumbag who killed my sister is still alive, so he killed the mistress who the scumbag hooked up with, and the mistress's mother, the mistress's brother can kill the mistress, alas, the heroine was let go, saying that she is the eldest heroine, After the male protagonist appeared, I basically relied on him to kill the emperor but not to death, and even saved him. There was no family blood feud, my sister's death was not important, the most important thing was not to embarrass my husband. It can be seen that the author really wanted to make the heroine tall, but it still didn't work.

I have read so many articles, and there has never been any article that made me want to curse so much. It is completely obscene, completely self-pleasant, and completely verbose. The parents are so short-sighted that they just want to give birth to a child. It's almost twenty chapters. Is this what you are pregnant with? It's nonsense, what does this maid think, what does that maid think, how can her mother bother you with a chapter, I'm getting more and more angry as I read it, I want to be on par with Langya Bang, but I only have a life, and I don't have the wisdom of the other author Hai Yan. What I wrote is all the nonsense of my mother-in-law and parents, and there is no plot. It's all rubbish plots about women with long hair and short knowledge. There is not a single wise woman in sight. The male and female protagonists are like the author's collective wisdom from half a lifetime. Yes, that is, it takes a middle-aged woman half a lifetime to realize the tragic truth and wisdom. She just lived until she was twenty years old. The young men and women don't look like young men and women in love, but like a middle-aged couple. The old woman and the old man are hiding at home, doing good things and nagging. They talk about this person's business today and that person's business tomorrow. They really have that serious disease. Rubbish, failure!

It's been 10 years and I'm still living with the CEO's stand-in ex-wife. What should I do?

Alas, I have followed many books, but this one is so boring that it would be a pity to abandon it.

Things that can be explained clearly in one or two sentences are described to you over and over again, the psychological activities of the characters, making you look like you are very intelligent. All kinds of adjectives are piled up, and all kinds of ideas are extremely artificial. A child has given birth to a mother who cannot survive for more than ten chapters, and all kinds of trivial descriptions are endless. If you insist on lingering here, are you trying to count the words? It's really enough.

Not enough, Xiaoxiao, can you update three chapters every day 🌹🌹🌹

The character is constantly contradicting himself. The author may have wanted to write about the complexity of human nature and inner struggle, but failed and only wrote about the sense of separation.