Celebrating More Than One Year of Time Travel: Revealing the Identity of the Time Traveler at the Beginning

Rubbish article, burying the hole without filling it, has no strategy, can only shovel the table, the original character has been forcibly reduced to intelligence

I chased you from there, come on, author

The author is too lighthearted. The author's Qingchao and the protagonist's Qingchao are two different concepts. If the protagonist only picks things up lightly, the world will still operate according to normal logic, and correct positive and negative feedback will be obtained. But if the author makes a light choice, all the protagonist's transgressions will be positive feedback, which will make the readers confused.

In the description of women or the plot about women, it is better to appear less frequently, because the author is really not good at it. I don't hate the author's description of the protagonist as a pig brother, but I hate the way the author describes it.

If you reveal yourself, a bunch of robots will come over and kill you.

Since you have chosen a woman, don't be ambiguous. Since you want to be ambiguous, don't be unique. Moreover, according to the behavior of men in modern society, since in ancient times, it was impossible to have only one woman.

From Chapter 90 onwards, you will become a disgusting person

Is this systematic? Is this time travel? Is this multiple heroines? So this is a cool article, right? In Kanshuang Wen, you ask people to write about tactics, so can you readers just read about tactics? Why bother trolling the author here! Of course, after reading some posts, I was reminded rationally that some masterpieces should not appear in that era. Didn't the author also correct them? As long as the plot direction is not too magical, then almost anyone who reads the novel can accept it. So you will know what kind of novel it is after reading it. If you like it, keep reading it. If you don't like it, just read what you like and start talking about it. If you are an old bookworm, you have read it all these years in vain.

The writing is really rubbish, and the protagonist is made to look stupid.

I'm really speechless about this book. Don't buy it.

It's good. I've seen it before, but I don't know why it disappeared later. I'm still sorry. The author must have saved a lot, otherwise he would just send it out 😃

Tomato goes to the starting point and I can finally write with peace of mind. Please update better.

It is recommended that the author use less "~". It is very uncomfortable to read after each paragraph. It feels like every paragraph is too cute.

Chapters 93 and 94 are very unpleasant to watch like this. Is this poisonous just after it was released?

When I read Chapter 2, there are two inconsistencies. It can't be AI, right?

After 19 chapters, it's still a bit slow. Come on.

That's it. Is this how you ended up writing it? Refund money

In the previous book, Fan Xian blew himself up, and he was able to smoke Doraemon props. Your system is a little slow

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

The author hasn't read Qing Yunian's original work, has he? Why does it seem more wrong the more I look at it? And there is no way to watch it later, the crowd is so smart! Not recommended.

Has this book been published before? Does the protagonist want to help Fan Jian train a small team of Tiger Guards?