Bian Shui: My Identity Will Be Refreshed

No matter how strong the underground forces are, they cannot be exposed to the light. In chaotic places, those who cross the line must be dealt with. This is the case in Nuokang, and it is also the case in Kokang Old Street, which proves that those who cross the line will be chopped off. Zaotai's team is also a team. The power on the surface naturally has legitimacy. The main thing I want to say is that it is reasonable to be happy and not 404. Reality can be illogical, and there is no logic in the sewer industries in Southeast Asia. However, novels and stories cannot be illogical. It's fucked up, but be careful.

Get away from this subject and I'm so depressed. It's so difficult.

It's interesting to write about San Biangpo, but one identity and a new trouble for seven days. The first one is a defected member of a killer organization and then a core member of a multinational conglomerate. You can write several more identities after writing like this. The plots are one after another. It feels like the protagonist has never stopped to rest. Your development of power relies on inheritance of identity. It's a big scene at the beginning. I thought I could watch you develop slowly since you were a bastard.

Is there anything else similar to this one and Wanqian?

It's well written, and you can tell that you put your heart into it, and it's not a cookie-cutter article.

The switching rhythm is a bit fast and feels quite stiff. Original owner, previous life, killer, mini-boss. Bian Shui is a relatively realistic story that can be told in detail, but when the killer organization and the villains of Hong Kong movies are included, it becomes somewhat disconnected. Moreover, these stories of criminal organizations fighting against the villain's younger brother are not too new. Of course, it all depends on how the author thinks about the direction of the story. Where the conflict is stuck, opening the protagonist's eyes is also a way to continue.

The identity is too fast and you can't grasp it. It's better to say that you are a novice. The novice period is currently over. What tasks need to be completed before the next new identity can be unlocked. Or the novice area is 7 days, now 1 month Or the time is different for different levels of status, A, B, C, D, one week, one month, half a year, one year, etc.

It gets more confusing as it goes on. I can't watch it after the third episode.

The creativity is quite good, and the writing in the front is indeed good, but the second identity in the back is very fragmented, and there is no sense of substitution anymore, and the logic starts to become confusing😕

After the third episode, I felt shattered and couldn't watch anymore.

That's right. In fact, the most important thing is that the cool-down time is too short, and identities change frequently. When a new identity comes out, everyone has not yet understood it. They are immersed in this identity and immediately start the next one, and the next one, and the next one. Secondly, the troubles of low-level identities are no trouble at all for high-level identities. The author writes some low-level identities too carefully.

Not bad, very interesting, especially picturesque

After reading the third chapter, I couldn't help but comment. Regardless of anything else, based on the author's fighting descriptions, as long as the author does not seek death, he will definitely be a great god.

Did the author know that the book "Thousands of Hearts" that had gone away had collapsed?

Limit the golden fingers and open a new book.

Let's be honest, why should we inherit the experience of identity? Each one is worse than the last, especially the latest identity, which makes me have no interest in pursuing it.

Hurry up and update, you don't have to read it

The three-sided slope reflects the reality of JSJ. However, the drama version vividly expands many details to show the background, leaving a lot of blank space, language, text, clothing, about those sewer industries, about geography, ethnic groups, Bo tribe, Mo tribe, those big groups, warlords, and the chaotic and abnormal prosperous economy. It seems that although the author used the story Bian Shui on a whim, this story is relatively rarely used in online novels. If it is well written, it will be brilliant.

Is this a small size? Are there any other works? 😁

This book is quite good. It is very comfortable to read. The writing is good and the plot is also good. IQ is online. Why are so few people reading it?

But I felt that the plot would collapse. I originally thought that each time I unlocked an identity, I would only gain abilities and at most one or two loyal subordinates, and then I would form my own force and expand it step by step. In the third volume, the force organization was directly organized. Although it was just a department, it belonged to a multinational group, so there were many more resources that could be used. The second identity was already so strong after unlocking it. Later, it could only be organized by a larger force. The people and things in Bianshui were not enough for the protagonist. I really doubt that the author can write 500 chapters, and I blindly guess that he won't be able to write more than 300 chapters. The author can take a look at "Gale Wind". Although the direction given by Golden Finger is different, the main reason is that the plot of the story is reasonably arranged.

After solving one identity and one province, move on to the next one! The subject matter is good, a monthly ticket will encourage me

It has that flavor and is interesting. Expectations to stay level!

Why is the economy so collapsed? The rough stone in the jade market will be worth two to three hundred thousand when it is opened ten years later. Now it becomes thirteen million. And when Wu Haishan dug up a piece of pigeon blood red worth several million, he had to be chased and intercepted by the minister of the federal Ministry of Mining. So your thirteen million jade cannot come to the regular army?

It feels like the author is serious about writing a novel. The subject matter starts from Bianshui, which is indeed a bit niche, but looking at the introduction, it is interesting to see that there is a Hong Kong variety show at the end. However, one identity per week is a bit too fast, and Ten Thousand Hearts will feel like it is collapsing in the middle. In fact, it may be better to change it to one identity per month or year. (I say casually, the author's own outline is the most important)

I feel like the author's writing is really good, the writing is very strong, and the pace is fast and not draggy.

Suggestion: Slow down and take your time. I have already integrated a bunch of movies right now. You can write branch plots, plots, characters, etc. It feels good at the beginning. These chapters are too fast. Don't let the battle power and background collapse later.

The background of the Golden Triangle combines the classic characters and elements of Hong Kong films. It is quite interesting to read this after being tired of Hong Kong variety themes. The main reason is that Golden Finger is used very well. But I was too young when I discovered this book and the story has not been fully developed.