Xianhu Asked

The author's writing is good, the Golden Finger setting is also classic, and the plot rhythm is also good. After saving a woman, it's like changing the book. It's really a pity. I feel that many people are turned away by this plot.

The only drawback is that the protagonist is too weak, and even his own pets can't suppress him. This is a new type of useless protagonist.

There is too much text about interacting with pets, taking up at least 30% of the page. There isn't much content left in After Water Pets, which doesn't help advance the plot. It's okay to watch intermittently to pass the time.

The dog-licking protagonist saves an old man. If it weren't for the beauty, the protagonist wouldn't have saved him at all.

An immortal's Tao is noble, Tao or opportunity, but you can't share it with others. It's your own. Journey to the West tells that Patriarch Bodhi gave Sun Wukong a way to avoid three disasters and six disasters, and warned him not to let him talk nonsense. If you let others know, you don't tell others that people have a good heart and don't say anything. But if someone has a bad heart, he will blame you and hate you, or someone has murderous intentions and wants to rob you. This is causing trouble for yourself. The two immortals are worthy of being born. There is nothing to say about all kinds of opportunities. Life is the most important. If life is gone, it means nothing. Three immortals arrived to fight. I heard you have good things, let me take a look. I heard you have good opportunities, let me take a look. I heard you have a treasure gourd to lend me. Remember that when you come out of the cave, you have to be invincible, and you have to be merciful. Sun Wukong is like this. He doesn't have invincible hands, but he has a good master. Otherwise, you can try someone else. So what does the author's protagonist have.

Why does Goldfinger have to be given to mink? Why did you give that woman a drink?

Mortals have their own opportunities to cultivate immortality. This is what every cultivator should know. Only by hiding your strongest trump card can you go further. Do you understand the principle of keeping wealth hidden? Why don't you like books with female protagonists 1. In the final analysis, cultivating immortals is about immortality 2. Taoist couples can be masters and apprentices, Taoist friends, partners, friends and brothers, Zhang Tie, Li Feiyu, Doctor Mo 3. Immortal cultivators should be well-matched emotionally. 4. If the writing is not good, I can't write a good heroine 5. It's okay to have a heroine. There is a mortal heroine named Princess Dongyang in the Immortal Way. There is also a scene in Chapter 560 (confiding one's heart before the grave, firm Taoist heart), you can refer to it 6. It's okay to open a harem in your Nascent Soul stage👌

If you just accept it, no one will accuse you of being a licker.

This protagonist relied on luck and soft rice to build the foundation all the way. After completing the foundation building, he had no real source of income and relied entirely on gifts from God?

Hidden here and there, can you live in hiding? The common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of carrying the jade. The protagonist is too weak. He can hide whenever he wants. This is not a proficiency panel. The cat is stronger than the protagonist, that is, it is not violent in nature, and only steals but not robs. Otherwise, the protagonist would have been dead. Fortunately, it can't smell any beast. The third-level bloodline monster beast can't feel it before his eyes. This is how the fate between the protagonist and the cat is fulfilled. As for the heroine, she is a foundation-building monk who has personally passed down the golden elixir. Zizi knows cats, and you will die if you don't save her. Anyone who has a problem with the golden elixir will be beaten to the door, and the young monk who practices Qi will easily finish it. This book is well handled. It is not like some books that talk about being stubborn and more promiscuous than anyone else. There are also supporting characters who are inconsistent. In the early stage, their character was not good and they were frustrated but then they became old-fashioned. The sect punished and forfeited the reward for resisting demons. Merits are merits and sins are sins. The master said that he was good at protecting his shortcomings and did not even give a shit. It seemed to have a strong sense of fragmentation and no logic.

As long as prices do not collapse, it means that we still have some control over the entire system.

The writing is really good, the writing style is very good, the thinking is very clear, fairy grass!

The Foundation Establishment Pill is too cheap. According to your price, it should be around 8000-1000. The main ingredient for refining the Foundation Establishment Pill should not be Chinese cabbage.

The author's writing skills are amazing, far beyond the average starting point master!

First, the protagonist does not have any exciting and powerful magical weapons, such as the Green Bamboo Bee Cloud Sword in Mortal, which is a natal magical weapon that is used from beginning to end. The second is that nothing was missed in the auction. There are none of these exciting and intriguing plots.

I have fully ordered this book of yours. Brother, when will you update it?

Are there too many pets? This is the foundation building

Raise a spirit animal that can travel for you

I saw it was going to be released soon. What I wrote before is okay. There is no bitterness or hatred. The protagonist is not like a disaster star causing trouble everywhere, and then involves a lot of plots. The writing is also okay.

Full order

Although there are only over a hundred reviews, the novel is really good and I almost missed it

I have read nearly twenty pictures, but I haven't finished the rest yet. I can only say that many details in this book stand up to scrutiny. The author is an experienced author and I haven't found any poisonous points.

If you don't farm well, you will be beaten and killed every day.

Not bad, I almost didn't recognize it

This is also the first time I have a monthly pass

A foundation-building consciousness can reach 40 meters. . .

Except for the main character who looks like a pervert, the rest of the writing is okay

No, why isn't there one on the 26th?

The chapter is tied and opened on the first floor alone. Some ideas for the author to listen to.

Everything else is good, but the protagonist breaks through too quickly after forming the alchemy. This is a bit too dramatic. Is it so easy to break through small realms one by one? You have followed the path of others for hundreds or thousands of years in ten or eight years? The pace can be fast, but when you write, you can practice a little longer each time. Isn't it okay to practice for ten or eight years?