Dreaming Back to 1983: A Life of Fishing and Hunting

The background of the story is well written, and there are no messy cheats. I give it a thumbs up. But the conception of the protagonist is very poor. A person who has lived for more than 60 years and been reborn is actually described in such a rubbish manner. He has no ability to deal with people, lacks basic common sense, and fights desperately like child's play. . . Withdrawn!

Rubbish, the writing was unpleasant, I wanted to relax while reading, not to be criticized.

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First of all, there is the name issue. When you click on the homepage, you can see that the author said that many people said that the protagonist's name is too vulgar and they want to change it. But when you look at the character column, it has not been changed In fact, it doesn't matter whether you change it or not. What I don't understand is why you put this post on the top of the homepage if you don't change it? Are you afraid that others will point it in? Didn't you know that many people complained about the protagonist's name? I clicked on this book several times, but I always quit after seeing this post and found it inexplicable Then I read some today. The protagonist is a rich man in his 70s or 80s, but he was like a young man in time travel. He couldn't come up with any solution to any problem, and he was always stunned. Either his wife or his father would fall for him, he was just a loser How did such a person become a rich boss in the Demon City? Why did the demolition later move to the protagonist's small mountain village? Then the hunting master who had been a master for more than ten years in his previous life did not show it at all. Marksmanship? Track? Trap? I even saw the protagonist in the back acting like he didn't even recognize the fifth or sixth grade. Then what did you do after hunting for more than ten years in your last life? Have you never seen anyone else use it? Dialects are also ridiculous. Are all the readers by default locals? There are many comments suggesting reducing dialects. The author actively responded to thank the suggestions and will improve them in the future. The result is not at all There are too many dialects and the whole chapter is full of dialogues. To be honest, the author is not at this level. Dialogues are to advance the plot and enrich the characters, not to improve the number of words. The plot is ridiculously slow. Almost 40 chapters of "Catch a Pheasant" are too much. I read the comments in the middle and some people said that the plot of "Catch a Pheasant" is too long. I also responded positively that they will speed up the story later, but the result is still so long. If it really speeds up, I can't even think how long the author originally wanted to write. In that era, you could get married and borrow a loan shark of 1,500? Then I borrowed so much money and had no idea where to spend it. The cave dwelling I lived in collapsed. Before time travel, my family was so poor that they could hardly afford to eat porridge. Then in the previous life, I had to pay off the loan sharks at high interest rates for more than 20 years. It is equivalent to the protagonist being in his forties after paying off the loan. With this kind of family situation, the protagonist is in his seventies. I have become a rich man living in a magical city. I have no culture, no capital, and nothing. To be honest, I can't climb out of this hole even if I am demolished and demolished in the mountains There are many comments, but the author explained it later It almost makes me sick, don't think it's great to leave a suspense

A loan of 1,500 five years ago in 1983? What do you think

The author's writing feels very awkward. Every aspect of the protagonist seems to be reborn, but he actually looks like a second-rate child. Dealing with things like a idiot without any life experience

In the eyes of this author, households in the western and northwestern areas are all worth ten thousand yuan. In the 1970s and 1980s, it cost two thousand yuan to build a cave dwelling, one to two thousand yuan to marry a wife, and 30,000 yuan to host a banquet.

When writing about time travel, I don't know what prices were at that time. How would you describe it? A kiln with bare bricks cost more than 1,000 yuan? How much does it cost to build a two-story house? Stop writing.

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Spending money to read a book, the subject matter and concept are all very good, I really don't want to give up, but I can't hold on anymore, it's too uncomfortable! I can't help but complain! Author, are you trying to discredit the people over there? Although it's not particularly obvious, the main and supporting characters in it always have the feeling of being annoying and trying to create a big competition! The author may have wanted to highlight the character's personality traits and reduce the number of words, but it seems that he tried too hard and had the opposite effect! It makes people feel that everyone inside is stubborn and will not listen to advice! Silly, ignorant! Damn, so much thought! It gives people the impression that people in the Northwest regard being stubborn and selfish as their advantages! Even if this was a characteristic of the northwest rural areas of that era, there are too many descriptions and it goes off topic!