Honglou: I Have a Lot of Confidence

The writing and plot are like shit. You can wear it with an air show. Why don't you wear it with the earth? You can wear it with your mother.

It's a bit hard to think about. What's not good to bring? I'm going to wear it to an air show. Most of the exhibits at the air show are models. The rest have guns but no bullets. I'm just asking if you're in a hurry.

I've read a few chapters and don't know what to write. I feel like I haven't read them yet. I'm just depressed along with the pig's feet.

The protagonist looks like an outsider in civil war and an expert in fighting outside. Modern history and alien invasions are mentioned every few chapters. Shouldn't you just kneel down when you see the emperor? What's the use of opening such a big hook for the protagonist? Just the temperament of being a slave. When the protagonist fights the aliens, the emperor will say two words about you: "You are a good dog."

What did you write? It's a mess. You are a senior citizen of the Duke's palace, and you are thinking about doing business all day long. I am really convinced, but your words are not fluent, so I deleted it.

I watched it for Wang Xifeng, but after about ten chapters, I really couldn't understand what the protagonist was going to do. It is probably just a stream of consciousness, without an outline. I write where I think and where I write, leaving the reader confused. And I always feel like I have a petty attitude, and I don't know if I am too open-minded. I can obviously use my advantage to suppress others, but I am always thinking about making some inexplicable things all day long, such as milk tea and fried chicken.

What a pretentious protagonist. He played such a big trick. As a result, there were several chapters full of ink and I didn't know what to do.

When I saw that Wang Xifeng was one of the female protagonists in the introduction, it didn't seem like it. Wang Xifeng had little but no big ideas, and was a jealous person. She was a master at house fighting, and her own man couldn't even control a girl who was in the same room with him (in a wealthy family like the Duke's Mansion). (And he is the inheritor), Jia Lian was forced to steal food, and he had not yet given birth to a son for Jia Lian. If an heir does not have a son, the title will be lost. He cannot even see this clearly, so Wang Xifeng is only a little smart, not a good wife.

After reading ten chapters, here's a summary 1. There are a lot of mental descriptions, various speculations, and very few dialogues 2. There are many words in each paragraph, which makes me feel uncomfortable. Is there no editor? 3. The text is not white enough, it is obscure, and I find it unpleasant to read. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

Rubbish is rubbish. I didn't write much about the garden drama. I went to construction every day. The emperor was not anxious no matter how many civilians died. The protagonist, the eunuch, was very anxious.

Mo Mo Chi does not advance the plot, especially the first three chapters.

I don't know what I wrote, I'm confused

It's full of loopholes, and I'm willing to add my own conjectures. Historical novels at least abide by the basic rules first, and then they are more capable of breaking the rules. You can't even play the basic game and you still want to know how to make a game.

The writing about the fight with Wang Xifeng and the fight with Sister Lin are both well written. When I was writing about Xue Baochai at the end, I straightened my hips. It felt like the soup in the front was delicious and the soup in the back was so cold.

It's really painful to watch. Why don't you do everything that's ahead of its time? I read it as an urban novel! Is yours integrating first? Do everything using modern methods? Are you sure it works? Brother, is this an ancient text? Not a city? I don't have any sense of immersion, and I'm so stupid that I can't tell the difference.

The quality has seriously declined since Chapter 140. Prince Zhongshun and the Emperor act like fools, and the protagonist does whatever he says! From the beginning to the end, the protagonist met the emperor twice and talked for a while. However, after the protagonist offered advice through Prince Zhongshun's eunuch, he did not wait for the emperor's reaction at all, and took it upon himself to show off by informing Qin's father in advance that Jia Zheng was going to be promoted. I personally think it is unreasonable. , The protagonist has never had a sense of confidentiality. He talks about dragon slaying at home, and then always wants to rebel. Personally, I feel that such a childish plot is not worth the money I spent. In the end, it completely collapsed in Werewolf. The first 140 chapters are indeed well written, but it is a pity, so let's leave it like this.

What can I say about this book? It seems that it treats subordinates and political opponents softly and lacks strength.

So when traveling through the Red Mansions, do we have to kill Jia Zhen first? This bitch is so disgusting.

Very well written, a different Red Mansion

Because there is no such thing in Yongle Dadian. I also built a generator... I thought that with a generator I could turn on a light bulb... I have never studied physics.

The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes. It feels like a liberal arts student in a parallel space, the kind that Wu Gu can't figure out at all.

I think the author's writing is quite good, but I'm tired of the routines of other Red Mansion novels.

Please support me by voting for both monthly and recommended votes. Carrots and cabbages, everyone has their own preferences. There are not many outstanding ones with the theme of Red Mansions. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I still like this book. Let's make up for the regrets in my heart. I hope the author will continue to work hard 😡

Anyone who has watched Red Mansions knows that when a thousand reds cry, thousands of beauties share the same sorrow, so in the early stages of development, I wanted to write more plots that were better for the girls. Have more interactions with NPCs so that you won't end it in the future dryly after death&... Of course you think it is too watery and too routine. Secondly, the more joy I wrote in the front, the more sadness I felt when the dynasty fell and the world was in chaos. In the end, when the protagonist rebuilds his kindness, there will be a sense of pleasure that the turmoil is over. This is the main line of development, war, and ending, roughly like this. When it was finally put on the shelves, I said that I was at a street level, that is, just working hard, but I didn't know how to be a eunuch, and I planned to write a few million. Finally, I don't mind if you watch the island version, you can wait and see for sure... I will at least be diligent and punctual in my updates.

Author, please put yourself in the reader's perspective. After seeing your introduction, do you still have the desire to read on?

Open such a big hook, and the materials will be automatically replenished when they are used up. The old man will go to farm and engage in construction? What magical logic

Forget about opening a harem, Li Wan will come! What the hell!