Lead the Family to Rise, but After Death

After reading the comment area, I saw some book friends mentioned some ideas on how to improve the protagonist's presence. I feel that this aspect can be introduced step by step in the subsequent management of the territory. According to the description in the book, the protagonist is quite concerned about the education of his children and has also taught them. In this case, as a pioneer knight, it is impossible for the protagonist not to talk to them about the issues of development and governance. Since the background is like this, without considering those ideas that are divorced from reality, the protagonist who has been bombarded by modern information has a natural advantage in the most basic aspects of pioneering, development, and governance. This advantage can naturally lead to recall and description in the subsequent development of the territory, and provide a reasonable explanation for the speed of territory development. After all, compared with the ancients, there is no obvious difference in intelligence or emotional intelligence between modern people. The biggest advantage lies in the independent absorption and passive acquisition of information, and the ability to know some success or failure cases. It's hard to say in this aspect in actual practice, but in teaching, it is inevitable to teach it actively or unintentionally. Through this description, it can not only increase the protagonist's sense of existence, but also describe the basic abilities and cognitive sources of the three children, and the description of territory development can also be more reasonable and prominent.

It's very well written. I'll say it again. I feel like I'm still exploring family novels right now. There are no such good works. I'm going to talk about some bad points that I hope the author can avoid, which can be regarded as some suggestions. 1 Don't turn it into a physical thing, such as a clay puppet that possesses and speaks, and then keeps interacting with people like this. Why can't it be like this, because this kind of novel only looks good because the protagonist's lack of interaction ability is good. To put it bluntly, the protagonist cannot be a human! What does it mean to be a human being? In some novels, gods appear in front of humans, talk to humans, manipulate objects, and practice tm, and then say that they are just puppets. The author did a good job here, and the posthumous understanding between the protagonist and his wife was restrained and very... Posthumous. In short, don't write the person behind the family's death as a monastic who will live forever, behind the scenes, behind the scenes. 2 The protagonist does not have to have many powerful abilities, but he must have a sense of presence. For example, the second son in the book mentions the knowledge taught by his father. Whether he has the ability is the setting, and the sense of presence is for the readers to see, because what we are watching is not a Western fantasy family story, but the growth of the family in the presence of the protagonist 3 What is lacking now is the internal circulation of the protagonist's golden finger mechanism. I think the protagonist is still on the verge of disappearing. This means that the protagonist's efforts and rewards are not cyclical. It is like playing a game and building a hospital and people will go to see the doctor. The number of sick people will be reduced. Building a financial facility will increase the data. However, the protagonist's current situation is that he will die at every turn. As a result, The protagonist is still in the role of a lucky undead father, rather than the soul behind the family. Of course, as the plot progresses, this feeling will definitely change. This change of identity is also a point that is difficult to write well, because usually it is because the protagonist's wife and son are dead, and the protagonist's connection with the world is weak. If it is not written well, readers who assume the role of the protagonist may stop reading at once, so, The first is to create a close connection between the protagonist and the subsequent bloodline, and the second is to start from religious-like teachings and create things like family rules, which is a spiritual continuation.

Very good, unlike other novels that focus on magic, but on the Middle Ages

Will there be a plot in which the dead are resurrected? In a critical moment, the ancestor (protagonist) is temporarily resurrected and supported by other martyrs, similar to Warhammer's Green Knight or Curse

Ever since I stopped updating that time, I thought this book would be a eunuch at some point, but I didn't expect it to be so soon.

It feels very good-looking. I want to keep it for a while and then turn to eunuch 😭

Data, data, you have nothing on this panel, not even an introduction to abilities. You can't even say what you are looking at. It's a standard data panel, and there's no introduction to abilities or anything like that.

It's quite interesting, the only drawback is that there are too few

It's well written. Now that I've seen it, the plot is okay, and there aren't any strange characters or villains. It feels like watching the history of another world.

The writing is good, but it could have been more exaggerated and more like a chivalric novel. The data characteristics should be written concisely and clearly, and the growth rate should be doubled or twice stronger. If you do these three things, you will definitely have no problem buying a high-quality product.

It's so rare to find this book about The Kingdom at Qidian, so how come it's gone to death? Speaking of why books related to CK are basically in the palace.

In fact, the main problem of the recent chapters is that the update is too slow, causing the big plot that should be coherent to be too scattered. It is recommended to update more quickly to solve all problems 😌

Didn't you say there are no eunuchs? Why hasn't it been updated for so long?

Has the author played the game "The Life and Sufferings of Sir Brant"? It fits the theme of this book very well, the struggle of a small aristocratic family under the tide of the times.

. . . I had time to tell my grandson his name, but he couldn't convey other information. It felt like he didn't say anything important. Everything depends on guessing, I am speechless. We cannot directly say that family growth and legends can make ancestors last forever. Moreover, the awakening system is still half-dead all the time. It feels like a running account, and the protagonist is never awake. It's been almost ten years, right?

I hope this book won't collapse. If you have any suggestions, please let me know.

I saved up for a few days and read it all in one go. Please support me and update soon

It would be good to support the writing style

It's because I'm busy that I can't write anymore. At least there's an explanation.

Dead? No, I bought ck3 after reading this book 😢

The monthly pass is given to you, ah!

Very good, keep up the good work, author

Come more

Maybe it didn't work because the pace was slow and not exciting enough, but the writing was pretty good. It's a pity.

I didn't realize it was cool when I saw the charges. Oh, I really shouldn't have expected it.

The writing is so good, why is it a eunuch?