Xiaomeng of Red Mansions

I read a lot of Red Mansions fan fiction. Personally, I think the writing and the coolness of this book are excellent. I think Red Mansions fan fiction should focus on descriptions of emotional garden dramas and other aspects, rather than the kind of official fiction about power struggles, which are fake fan fiction using official cover, which is disgusting to read. The author's writing is very attractive, but the updates are too slow. It took me a long time to read it again before updating dozens of chapters.

I've read a lot of Red Mansion fanfics, both those that have been on the list and those that haven't been on the list, and I find that the author's writing skills are all top-notch.

After 450 chapters, if you make no typos in 10 consecutive chapters, all monthly tickets until the first month of next year will be given to you 😎

If you don't include Jia Mu and Grandma Liu's Red Mansions, it will look dull and boring. You can only make up for it by the number of updates. Why doesn't the author update more?

I already feel that after reading this fanfic, unless the author opens the Red Mansion again, other Red Mansion fans will really not be able to stand it anymore 🙂 Although there are some uncomfortable parts, there are more outstanding places, and the flaws cannot be concealed.

In the beginning, Qin Keqing was nothing but a white flower. No matter what, she had committed adultery with her father-in-law, so what kind of thing could modern society be?

"Wan Tian Qing" is over, and this work that looks like shit can still make it out of the entertainment industry! I feel like the author's research is not as detailed as the author!

The writing and plot are all passable, but the male protagonist is like a fanboy, always submissive to women, and can be controlled by anyone. Baochai is almost written as a control freak.

Come on, author, I have read more than a dozen Red Mansions fanfics. This book is really the best in terms of writing and plot. You should be careful when writing historical articles for your next book. Try not to care about reviews when writing a book. Come on, I hope I can write more.

Hurry up and write, Mrs. Wang, Li Zhi and Jia Mu will all accept it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Doing a dojo in a snail shell, scratching your eyebrows and beard

It was well written but I felt that the focus was off-center. Baochai, Daiyu and others had too few scenes, and other characters I didn't like much had too many scenes. It was really boring to watch the protagonist and these people fighting each other. For example, Mrs. Xing, although I have no objection to taking her away, I feel that her position is unclear. She was originally a lover, but she regards herself as the main palace. She is jealous of this and that, and she is coaxed by the protagonist. She is still a loser. Are you really not afraid of being discovered? There are also characters such as Mrs. Xue and Second Sister You who are not popular and have no charm in this book, but they have a lot of scenes.

In the dozens of recent photos, the protagonist has money and connections, knows that someone is going to harm him, and then waits for the other party to take action. Is this a joke? Decreasing intelligence for the sake of plot?

Author, please stop using pictures. It's too ugly. Please leave some fantasy in my mind. The main thing is that your pictures should be included directly in the text. I can't even think about it without reading it 😢

Write more scenes about Daiyu 😭 I really like Sister Lin

I strongly request that Sister Lin's role be strengthened. The script is very good and I like Sister Lin and Shi Xiangyun very much. Especially the chapters about the Crab Feast were my favorite, I was moved by them when I saw them.

The women of the Jia family can't be on the stage, they are all drags and have to be whipped. Being a big wife will bring harm to three generations.

This is not a fanfic of Red Mansion. Is this a fanfic of Jin Pingmei? After all, Red Mansion is a biography for her daughter, you...

I hope that Qin Keqing will not be given any royal status. The original book actually makes it very clear that the Qin family is very poor, while the Jia family has an eye for wealth. Logically speaking, these two families will not get married. It was only because Qin Keqing was born with a romantic personality and had an affair with Jia Zhen that she was able to marry Jia Rong. Jia Rong doesn't care about this either, after all, Jia Rong and Jiazhen father and son have long been used to getting together! Original text: When she grew up, she was described as graceful and charming, and had some connections with the Jia family, so she got married and promised to marry Jia Rong.

So far, I have read Red Mansions, which is an absolute masterpiece. However, I saw that the author said that the results were not very good, so can anyone tell me what the results of this book are now?

But I personally still prefer this one. Fuyao's book has writing, content, garden play, plenty of food, and occasionally water. It's just that the protagonist is too "perfect" 😂. Not only is he omnipotent in terms of plot, but the emotional scenes with each female character are also mind-boggling, as if every one of them is in love. Moreover, the author is very smart and prefers to create several unique female characters instead of being involved with the controversial female characters in the original work, making the entire writing style more "bright and pure". The protagonist is always wise, strategic, and emotionally pure, and the female characters involved with the protagonist are also smart, kind, and dedicated. At first glance, there's nothing wrong with it, it's quite sweet. But after watching it more, I realized that the characters are very "fake". 🤭🤭 But this book is different. Although it is short and not enjoyable to read, and there are some minor flaws in the logic of some plots, the description of the characters is very realistic. The protagonist has wisdom and ability, but also has shortcomings such as occasionally being clever and lustful; there are "lovers" who treat each other sincerely, and there are also friends who have a playful attitude and satisfy their desires; among the female characters, there are also "good girls" who are smart and kind, and there are "bad girls" who collude with interests and entertain people with sex; the plot includes both sunny garden dramas and dirty and bad things. It's very comfortable to watch😁😁😁

The last 30 chapters 😜👍👍, especially the postscripts 1, 2, 3, and 4 👍, I advise readers, even if you can skip ahead, you must read it carefully at the end. It's very interesting😀, except for the Red Mansion text from the starting point, which is really rare

The author should open another Red Mansion. The current Red Mansion is unreadable and has no logic at all.

Conan in a Dream of Red Mansions 😅 Speaking of which, the protagonist really doesn't want to do something serious. You have to be hard-working. Dream of Red Mansions looks at the snow in the spring. In fact, it's not about those scandalous things. If you are not hard-working enough, I'm afraid you won't be able to protect so many sisters in the future.

The writing style is the best I have ever seen in Red Mansion novels, bar none The concept is clever, and there are no flaws in the plot. The biggest problem is that the author is too imitative or something. All the foreshadowing between the lines is to accept women, accept women, accept women. It is a bit too much, and it makes people feel a little bit same. It becomes less and less interesting as it goes on.

But after reading the two books, I found that the character of the protagonist is still a bit flawed. It's not about character or anything, it's about the positioning of the protagonist. The protagonist is not the Jia family, nor the descendants of the clan, the princes and nobles. Naturally, there is a sense of alienation from the Jia family. . And in terms of plot, there is very little content about the court, which may not be a strong point. Most of the content is about house fighting, and there is a story about science and technology in the middle, so I did not continue to write in depth. The content of the house fight is actually quite well written, but it always felt a bit far-fetched for me to take on the perspective and identity of the "protagonist". A large part of my mental journey was "It's none of my business. I'm not a member of the Jia family. The Jia family quickly ransacked the house. I took in all the girls, started my garden show, and raised a few children happily." . Unexpectedly, click, it's finished for me. . . If I change my armor, such as the children of the Jia family, or the children of the princes, what I think is "it is our duty to rebuild the glory of the four kings and eight princes". The standpoint is different, and the angle of reading is also different. .

This book is much better than the previous Red Mansion. To watch The Red Mansion, you should watch the courtyard drama! Don't write too much in court, as it's easy to miss the topic! This is very good, the only slight problem is that I have less time to interact with my older sisters! Next time, you can play Werewolf, Three Kingdoms, Mahjong, etc. With the heroines. You can also make milk tea, cakes, and ice cream that girls like to eat, and interact together! Teach 12 young actors to act in stage plays such as TV series, such as The Legend of the New White Snake! Let your sisters be more happy and less troubled! After all, the original work is miserable enough!

However, I suggest you delve deeper into Red Mansions, and don't change the subject matter casually and write about fairy tales, fantasy, or the like, as it is easy to get lost. The theme of Red Mansions has a huge audience, and it is common to order tens of thousands of dollars. This track alone can become a god. Another nitpick is that the author is a bit of a literary youth and is restricted in the garden. In fact, the plot could be more exciting. If this book adds some court drama, the subscription will be higher.

This book is very good, both the writing style and the plot are good. Why is it so unpopular? Incomprehensible.

This Red Mansion fanfic is one of the few that I can read to the end. There are some flaws, but they do not hide the beauty.