I Pretend to Cultivate Immortality at Kindergarten

Sure enough, only a chick can write about this kind of sweetness. Even if we talk about it once, we can't write about it.

Sure enough, only the author Xiao Chunan, who has a beautiful yearning for love, can write such a sweet love plot.

This makes me laugh so hard, what kind of books do you usually read?

One for kindergarten, two for elementary school, and three for junior high school (Han Wenwen guarantees the bottom). I can't imagine how abstract the protagonist's life will be in high school.

After reading Chapter 141 about the career line, I thought, "Oh, don't forget it. Author, your talent is not there. It's okay to let the male protagonist be a freeloader. The career line will definitely be a stumbling block for you to write a love story. I felt very unfamiliar when reading the career part." If ability is to be quantified, a perfect score of 10 points, and if 5 points are passed, it should be like this: 9 points for Qingmei's love scene 4 points for the love scene falling from the sky 7 points for daily life scenes 2 points for career scenes Why should we write about something we are not good at? Don't make it difficult for yourself, and don't make it difficult for me. Those three little ones are pretty good. , It's good to focus on writing and their daily life

After reading it, the ending was a bit abrupt, but it was to be expected, after all, there was nothing much to write about. To be honest, it felt a bit like starting high and going low. The power of cultivating immortals was not used many times in the first place. It turned out to be a gimmick, but at the end, it felt like it shouldn't have ended like this. However, just looking at the first half can be regarded as a masterpiece of sweet rebirth. Finally, have you ever been reborn? Just scribble and take it for granted.

When I think of a bunch of kids having sex here, I can't bring them in. It's so awkward to start in kindergarten. You even use jade hands to describe a child's hands.

It's boring to start pushing. The most interesting part of this kind of writing is the ambiguous part.

In fact, it would be better to just focus on the three characters at the beginning, or add one in the university. The writing of the three plots about the Jiang family is really average. It's better not to write.

Now there are fairies, knight-errants, and demonic witches. I hope there will be more goddesses, saints, and the like in high school. Only three of them are not enough.