War Lord: General Soul Entry, Swallowing the World

Your starting point as a protagonist is too low! The protagonist must at least be a noble!

Author, is your extraordinary power too weak? The protagonist, a newcomer who has just joined the battle, has participated in three or four battles in total. Facing a Sequence 7 Extraordinary and a battle-hardened Assassin Sequence Extraordinary, it took a long time to defeat him, and this Extraordinary sword stabbed Anthony in the chest, but he did not die (although I did not want Anthony to die, but is this a bit inconsistent with this setting?) Moreover, the Extraordinary did not make people feel that there was any difference between him and ordinary people. Ordinary people who feel that their faces are better at hitting are inferior. For example, if a professional boxer who has been training for four months beats an ordinary untrained person, even if there is a difference in weight, it will basically take only one or two minutes to resolve the fight. The difference between an extraordinary person and an ordinary person is not as big as that between a professional fighter who has undergone professional training and an ordinary person.

The extraordinary nobles saw that the Jackal's abilities had failed and ran away. The protagonist who had not changed jobs and brought the serfs won the battle. The nobles came back to snatch the fruits of victory. The extraordinary abilities were back.

The first story seems that the author has no culture. But it's still okay to pass the time.

The protagonist is a melee-type profession. I really didn't expect it. Looking at this introduction, I thought the protagonist was hiding in the rear and not on the front line. When it came to the six major professions, I also thought the protagonist would choose a mage. Unexpectedly, he would be a knight. This kind of melee-type profession, has the author learned about military strikes? If you know a little bit about military attack, it will be more realistic and better to describe the battle scenes. Because the battle of knights is closer to reality when there is magic. Unlike wizards and mages, who only rely on imagination to tell each other the names of dishes. If there is no foundation, the written content will look awkward. But the author has never spoken or answered questions from book friends, which makes me feel a little panicked. The author doesn't just want to write a few chapters and then just add a few chapters to the eunuch. It's rare to see a book that suits your taste.

Goldfinger is quite interesting, but the early pacing is not very good. Weird. However, when writing about talent attributes and legion characteristics, it is most important to write the skill effects and copies well. It is more of a game type, so the writing can actually be more backward.

If nothing else, just finish the book. My investment cannot be wasted.