The System Is Late

Uh-huh, uh-huh, you're already halfway to the 200-plus fan ranking, right? How many people are still following? ... The latest content can be described as follows: "The cheating male protagonist is tortured and tortured by the crazy criticizing female partner but can do nothing"... As a cool article for female channels, I guess everyone except SM fans will find it average. There is no need to say anything about "enjoyable" articles for male channels.

It's best to remove the punishment content, otherwise this system will be too cruel for a high school student. If the system hadn't arrived late, for high school students, it would have been hell-level tasks with only mediocre rewards. On the contrary, any failure would have resulted in the host being doomed, and the risks obviously outweighed the benefits. This is not a system, it's a curse.

I have read it to the latest, and the book is okay, but the system tasks have penalties and either intellectual or physical disabilities, so it can be said that this book will not go far. After all, we cannot think about it carefully. Otherwise, how can people who have been controlled by the system live a leisurely and free life?

He is in his 30s, proficient in everything, but unfortunately has no money or house. Do you think the protagonist has so much, and makes a lot of money? People have to be realistic.

You became an Internet celebrity and went to Shanghai to participate in an architect competition, and then you joined the family and asked you to withdraw from the competition... What kind of queen are you? What are you writing? ? ? I can't understand...

The early writing was good, but the last few chapters have been a bit artificial, subdued, and pretentious.

The latest two chapters are not good to read. I have to hold them back. I don't need to write them. The main character is very aggrieved. As a reader, I am not satisfied with the solutions. There are many ways to write them to give me some motivation. This makes people really angry.

The inner drama is too messy and pretentious, and it's also repetitive.

It's hard to keep watching anymore

I'm over 30 years old. I really don't need so many skills. I just need a healthy body and money. Who can I show the cup to? It's not like students hold cups in school to show to their classmates. In society, money is the best way to hold cups.

It's rare to have so many talents in one class.

RT I don't know how you feel. Personally, I don't feel as attracted as before. I feel like I can't stop.

The author does too many live broadcasts and is too famous. Still want to rely on the powerful. It's so boring. If you write about cities in your next book, don't write too much about Internet celebrities and the entertainment industry. When you write these things, you write them according to the persona you think they are. If you don't like this Internet celebrity or celebrity, you won't know how disgusting it is to look at you.

First person, holy shit, I haven't seen that in a while.

Too much, bye bye

Very good. Don't listen to others and just keep the current style. At least this is my personal reading experience.

A system with punishment is heresy

Okay, the good and the bad have an ending, hurry up and publish a new book

Alas, I've ordered dozens of chapters and I'm tired of reading them.

Has the author been cut?

Don't sleep, get up and start typing. Even the donkeys in the production team don't rest like this.

What do you mean? How many days do you update?

What was written was so messed up that I regretted ordering everything.

The author died after feeding himself a bag of salt😰