Starting from Making Talismans, One Can Achieve Immortality Step by Step

After reading Chapter 12, I have good and bad feelings. The good thing is that it can be seen that the author has a solid foundation, whether it is character creation, dialogue, character description, etc., Or some settings and plots are okay, not as anti-intellectual as some novels. As for the shortcomings, this type of novel about the harsh environment of cultivating immortals has indeed become popular in the past two years. The living environment of low-level immortal cultivators is poor. This can also be explained by the temptation of cultivating immortals. But generally the world of cultivating immortals is separated from the environment in which mortals live. The author, a mortal, is not separated from cultivating immortals (I haven't seen any separation in Chapter 12). In the environment in which the author writes, disasters like the cold disaster not only come every day, but also come every once in a while. Take the cold disaster as an example. The low-level immortal cultivators are in trouble, and those ordinary mortals suffer heavy casualties in one go. I just want to know how this thing reproduces, and has it evolved to reproduce as fast as mice? There is also the issue of survival materials under such conditions. You can imagine how precious crops that can withstand cold disasters are. Where can so much food come from? There is also a second, similar novel. The protagonists all started in shantytowns, but they also made some small protective measures in the shantytowns. Judging from the description written by the author, it can be affixed with talismans except for cold disasters, but this thing can only resist cold disasters. At least up to Chapter 12, I didn't see anyone being defensive. Jie Xiu can kill you at the door of your house. Why doesn't he wait until midnight to go inside and kill you? Don't tell me that we all agreed not to enter the house?

Fox, you have to finish your book. Your book is not a masterpiece, it is not a good book, and reincarnation is not the solution.

If you don't take it out, old book friends won't dare to read it, so they will just keep it.

I would like to make a suggestion: go back to the books you have written and find one with the highest degree of completion, the most substantial content, and the most rigorous and interesting worldview, and seriously think about writing a book with a similar theme. Your accumulation is so rich that you have dabbled in everything from Cthulhu to Chinese ghosts. You should make good use of it. Especially now that folklore is a craze, folklore also values ​​accumulation the most, which is suitable for you. I think I can try to write the last one based on the one I am satisfied with. Finish writing it. Coming from the Soul Resurrection Scroll, I feel that your level is not bad, and it is impossible to reach the top in one step, but I don't think there is any problem with Shang Sanjiang. To be honest, I think your writing is more interesting than the earliest works of Squid, and the characterization and writing style are also better. It is recommended that you don't think about getting to the top in one step by reading a novel, but use novels as a way to make a little money. No matter how good the book is, there is no point in not finishing it. Moreover, when the average number of online books per capita is more than 600 chapters, if it is not particularly outstanding, 200 chapters will not be written at once, and only three white chapters will get to the point online. You haven't written a few books yet, and you still want to make money?

Coming from an old book, I discovered the eunuch before I even read the first chapter 👍

How can I put it this way? I've cut out so many books that said the eunuchs were not eunuchs. I didn't expect that some people would still believe them.

As expected of you, eunuch king, you always have an excuse

Hehe! You need to repay your reputation if you don't finish the novel. If no one reads it, cut it off and no one will read it... It's stuck in an endless loop. Either open a new account that no one knows about and start contacting the old account again. The supervisor may get up, or you should find a class and don't cheat people at the starting point. Goodbye, I will never expect anything from you again

Next time you're writing a book, look at me as a dog!

Can you finish writing a book? I have been pursuing cyberpunk for so long and it is still a pity that I have pursued it until now. Only after you finish writing a book will people read it. If you keep writing and reincarnating, where will the tickets and money come from? . . Just write according to the cyberpunk that you are best at. Even if it doesn't work, find a job to support your life first. If you really feel that your situation has been adjusted, then come back and write a book. It's hard to do something well, but you must persist.

In fact, many of the novels you have written are good, and the plots and writing style are much better than many novels. Unfortunately, you are always in a hurry to make it popular, and you will cut it if it is not popular. If you cut it too much, how many old readers will continue to read it? If you really want to make money, don't find a class, then use your free time to write a book, and then publish it one after another. If it becomes popular, you will resign. If it doesn't, you will at least finish the book, and then continue writing the next one. Really, you can count how many books you have read. There is no problem with your ideas and writing skills, but there is a problem with your patience.

Let me see where your limit is, Deep Blue, top it up!

There is no doubt that you have the writing style of a great master, but what you lack is the mentality and height of a great master. One book after another can only prove one thing. If you don't change your mentality, even if one book becomes popular, it will be difficult to continue.

Suddenly I thought of the fox. The eunuch just came over and didn't notice.

Well, it's probably too difficult to advise you not to cut. Please write more before cutting 😍😍😍

Lao Deng, please finish writing, please. The first online article I read was yours, and it turned out to be the only one you ever read that ended with a political chapter. I have been a eunuch for six or seven years😢😢😢

If you cut it again, you will be blocked. Even if you are no longer in prison in the future and you see it, you will avoid it.

I heard that your previous books were full of eunuchs... So maybe you had too many eunuchs and others didn't believe it, so they were afraid that this one would end up being full of eunuchs. .

The book is not bad, but if you insist on finishing it before you become famous, there should be changes.

Fortunately it's not my favorite subject matter. Didn't read a word. 😃😃As long as the themes in the previous two books were read from the beginning, I recognized them. After all, I just like to read the first few hundred thousand words. There's nothing wrong with having less.

My favorite western fantasy cyberspace, apart from Lord of Mysteries, is Fox's Tide Evolution. The writing is clean and crisp, but it's a pity that Fox's other books are always eunuchs.

I don't know if Fox will end suddenly, but I still support it 👍