Ultraman: Giant of Light

It's been a long time since I've seen a book with such an Ultra spirit. I don't know when the Ultraman fandom began to lose the look that Ultraman should have. The whole circle began to be filled with jokes, fun, and malice. This book is a rare piece of pure literature.

I would like to express my personal opinion. Now, although the protagonist joins the plot, it feels no different from the original work. The addition of the protagonist does not produce any chemical reaction and create a new plot. To be more specific, Chao Ba originally awakened other human bodies because of Dagu's precognitive dream. Then the author's book is equivalent to materializing this precognitive dream, which is the protagonist, and then what is the behavior of the protagonist? Let Dagu and the others follow the development of the plot. I didn't see much of what the protagonist did on his own initiative relying on the prophet of the plot. Of course, this is the beginning, so you can be more tolerant. The author also has a very good unique point in this chapter. The part about the anti-gravity ship felt good, and there was a feeling of human beings fighting powerful enemies with their own hands. Generally speaking, it was okay. Then in the Tiga chapter, the perception dropped. First of all, it is still It's a plot problem. The plot follows the original work. Although there are some changes in the ending, the plot itself is a unit chapter. There is no unique point in the changes in the ending, and there is no foreshadowing by the author. For example, in the chapters of Kakuma, the protagonist clearly revealed that there are two monsters in advance. However, Feiyan 2 still stopped after solving one monster and was attacked by the second Kakuma. What is the significance of the protagonist's spoiler? Nothing has changed. Secondly, the protagonist's sense of existence is too low. I can understand that the author wants to describe other characters in the original work, but writing it down actually reduces the protagonist's sense of existence and fails to reflect the specialness of the protagonist. To put it simply, the protagonist does not feel that he has the aura of the protagonist, and he feels a bit lost in everyone. Then there is the fact that the whole plot feels uneventful, neither the growth of the protagonist nor the tension of the fight can be felt. It's a bit like the Invincible novel (although I don't know if you intended to write it as an Invincible novel, so I'll just say no, if there is a problem, just pretend that this point doesn't exist). The protagonist has gone through so many plots, and there is no increase in strength or maturity of mentality, and there is no sense of growth. The last point that is linked to the invincible novel is the protagonist's personal panel. You don't need a system when writing a fanfic, but I feel that a personal ability panel is necessary. In this book, it feels like the protagonist has all the abilities after turning into light. Just like Doraemon's Treasure Bag, he can have whatever abilities he wants. The author did not show the ability panel in advance, leaving readers with an abrupt feeling of "What? When did the protagonist have this ability?" Finally, there is a small personal feeling. Is the name Ultraman a bit too funny? This is a translation joke of the early Taiwanese Chinese translation. For example, Salted Egg Superman came from Hong Kong, Ultraman was translated by the Shanghai Film and Television Department of the Chinese record company, and Superman was translated from Taiwan. If the author is interested, you can find out. Mainland China more recognizes the title Ultraman. So most books just make jokes about Superman. In fact, the official name still has a very cool name, so I feel that the author is a bit too funny here. At least give him a nice name. The official name here is very funny. In addition, in the original part, Mu Zhen's part is well written, but why the Shadow Mage suddenly appears is a bit untenable, but this is a small problem. I feel that the author can lay more foreshadowing in the plot, and then call out in subsequent chapters. Going back a bit, for example, the two saved Gakuma brothers showed up to help when fighting conchs in the future. Any monster can turn into light. In addition to petrification, I, Gakuma, can also touch petrification and so on. Writing fan fiction itself is to participate in the plot of the original work. Relying on things in the original work to evolve into different endings. This is the beauty of fan fiction. It does not need to be a completely fantasy original plot, otherwise what is the point of fan fiction. The above little suggestion (dog head) is just my personal opinion. If the author feels that what I said is wrong, you can choose to ignore it. After all, you are the author, and this book should reflect your thoughts most. If you are lucky enough to catch the author's eye, I hope you can discuss and communicate with the author. I am quite interested in fan-derived plots, and I hope the author can write better plots.

The plot is too stupid. The Ultraman TV series is a sub-gongxiang, and you are also a sub-gongxiang?

The protagonist and Kirino joining the victory team have almost no effect. It has to be written according to the original work. If it deviates from the original plot, it will not be written. Really. . .

Does the protagonist have his own natal Opi? He is always supporting other Opi's. It feels like he is upgrading for others, and he keeps changing them back and forth.

The writing is very good, but the name for the transformation of the main character Mao is so fucked up. If you don't know how to name, you can use AI to generate a name at will. Could it be that you chose such a fucked up name just to fulfill Zongfang's dream?

This book is already broken for me. When I wrote the first Super Eight, I could accept the plot until the protagonist transformed into Ultraman. Some of them even felt like Ultraman to me, but when the protagonist transformed into Ultraman, I felt it was broken. The protagonist was too strong, and he could kill monsters instantly when he appeared. The key is that he became even better than the original Eight, and was the first to appear! This is like the rabbit race movie. Beria just left Ultra Prison, and the one who came to intercept was not Taro, but the damn Zero! 🤔 The appearance of other Ultraman in the later part of the plot seems very unnecessary. While the protagonist kills monsters instantly, Dagu and the others recall their experiences in parallel worlds. Can you imagine? That scene was so disharmonious. In the original work, it was the big bones fighting hard and even being deflated that inspired them to want to fight. What about you? It has collapsed! Anyway, I quit after watching the plot of Super 8. Didn't look back.

The right way to talk like Ultraman

Hello everyone, I am the author of the book Peerless Life. When I wrote the plot of Tiga in this book, I actually wanted to follow Tiga's original plot at first. But I saw many big guys saying that following the original plot would not be interesting at all. I was right when I thought about it. If I followed the original plot, everyone could just go back and watch Ultraman Tiga. Ultraman Tiga is much better than my crappy novel. So how should I make some changes? It suddenly occurred to me that we seemed to have solved a guy who said he would never die - let him come out and work overtime! Hahaha. I originally thought this plot would end quickly. When I first started writing it, I thought I could finish it in one day. However, after finishing it in one day, I realized that the plot seemed to have only advanced a little. Every day when I write, I feel that I will definitely be able to write to the breaking point today. But after finishing writing every day, I still only advance the plot a little bit, hahaha. So it has been postponed until today. When writing this plot, I thought that I should express the state of more people. This is not a battle fought by Yang Xi alone, but a battle fought by all members of the victory team, as well as the four surviving aliens. So there may be a little more description, and the chapters may be a little longer. I wonder if you like this kind of plot? I hope you can tell me whether you like this plot. If you like it, I hope you can tell me what you like. If you don't like it, please tell me what you hate so I can make corrections. Bow again, thank you all! Thank you very much for your support!

Hello everyone, I am the author Jueshi Life. I am very happy to write this book at Qidian. Of course, the happiest thing is that it can be liked by everyone. I have a lot of problems, including typos and omissions, poor writing skills, a preface that doesn't match the postscript, etc. It's all thanks to everyone's love that this book has come to this point. I really like Ultraman. Sometimes I wonder, what would a person who has been influenced by our country's culture do if he came to Ultraman's world? These are my thoughts, but my skills are really poor, and it must have caused some trouble for everyone to watch. I would like to apologize to everyone. I hope everyone can continue to support this work. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them. I will work hard to correct them. All mistakes are my fault. Don't be polite. I hope this book can remind you of those happy times when you watched Ultraman. Thank you for your love!