The Uchiha's Gun Demon

Good news: not a studio AI, bad news: the writing is too ordinary

Looking at the introduction, the purity of your gun demon is wrong. It also has a tank bomb and a nuclear bomb. The bomber is Lesser, and the nuclear bomb was eaten by Pochita.

It feels like reading a detailed outline

Isn't the Gun Demon immortal? And automatic locking

After reading a little bit, I feel that the author's writing is very raw, a bit like the task flow of a one-click game. Moreover, the author writes about guns to spread fear. If he is awesome or wants to directly use the title of "Gun Demon", then he must at least have a resounding record, like not showing a trace, one person holding a position with one shot, or you have to use your trump card to resist every shot on the other side, after collecting the last glimmer of hope to lock the position and make a desperate move, and then be taken away by the gun, and this description can be crisp and fast at most with one shot. Let people know it is a gun when they hear the sound, and someone of us may be dead now, becoming the spokesperson of the gun. When you show up in person, the greatest terror of the gun is reduced. Super long-range strike, one-hit kill, not knowing the enemy, the character is bad after leaving the factory You write about killing the four members of Danzo's team, and even the conflict is very clueless And the gun angel form, you should at least describe it on that kind of special battlefield, right? It seems outrageous that in the Ninja World War, you find that the Suna Ninja Camp directly launched the "gun and bullet speed" at 3 kilometers per second to instantly withstand the wind pressure of the local camp and crush some people into pulp. Come on with a cool line, such as "I'm tired of finishing you in 10 seconds", "I have to go home for dinner and I'm in a hurry" The next second, spread the gun wings and all the muzzles to make some settings in seconds (copy the part from Devilman) "Penetrate 1 within 700 meters .3.5.6.7.10.12 Target bullets penetrated the heart" "The next bullet penetrated the head of a male around 1000 meters away" "Penetrated the target aged 0-12 within 1500 meters" Then you make up any name. Leave some survivor information at the end "Uchiha appeared at the Sand Ninja camp at 14:20 and destroyed the camp in 10 seconds. The number of survivors was xx. He is a demon, a demon of guns." He claims to have never been better than what others have said in person.

Long-range attacks are awkward. If you're far away, it's easy for experts to dodge. The fire coverage is too wasteful. If you're close, you have to consider whether the hand-held weapon is powerful enough. It's better to train yourself and train yourself into a human-shaped nuclear bomb, which is more flexible and powerful.

Is it history💩I will know once I eat it😤

I think of these pictures

The last few pictures have the feeling of a bunch of unknown players coming after finishing Wutou.

Whether you can read it or not depends on whether the author can hold on. After all, the data is too bad, the writing is mediocre, and the story ideas are okay, just feed it.

It's okay, at least I'm not playing house in Konoha 🙂

The introduction is a bit confusing. Commander of the Ninja Alliance: Madara?

This novel can easily make people confused, and you need to stop and collect your thoughts from time to time while reading it!

Why do I feel like some sentences are missing a few words?