Become Invincible from Steel and Iron Bones

The three books in the picture are my favorites. Arrangement order: Lottery panel > Martial Saint from another world > Chivalrous. If you can still write such a work, I will continue to support 🙂

I have been paying attention to you since you started writing books. You have the talent to write mindless, violent and exciting articles, but you are too pursuing the current results. I have read many eunuch books. You are wasting your time. There are several eunuch books that I, as a 20-year old man, couldn't stop reading, but you ended up cutting them. Have you ever thought that many people read books written by authors before when they have no books to read? If you finish the book well, you will attract loyal fans who have clear goals and are here for the fun. After reading it, if you are not satisfied, you will read the books you thought were not good, so the income will not be too bad, and it is better than wasting time by cutting books. You have to understand that not everyone likes a certain type of book. I think you still have your own style when writing books. Write according to your own ideas and don't be affected by external influences. You won't just achieve the results you have now.

Stop being a eunuch, otherwise no one will dare to read your books in the future.

You were very popular at the beginning when you wrote Chivalrousness. But since you got to the middle of writing Chivalry, wherever pig's feet go, people will chase them with red eyes. It's no longer interesting now, and you keep writing like this! I just don't understand. There are two people in this book who have had a blood feud for hundreds of years, and they want to extinguish the hatred between the opposite families. Why do they not fight when they encounter a pig's foot, even if the two families get together, but they insist on chasing the pig's foot and killing it like a dog? ! We can still cooperate! If you can write this kind of plot, do you think we will subscribe? To end up in such a great situation, I don't know who I learned from.

The main character is too ugly, dark and thick, I can't stand it anymore

Wait until there are 1 million words, then check to see if there are any updates.

The previous book had only 130,000 words and was cut, but even if I posted a comment, it was blocked. Go home and play by yourself, what is this JB thing?

What rules are set for red envelopes? You can't snatch them alive or dead.

It's too rough. It's considered dry food. It's still soaked in water. There are no details or plot. You can just glance at it and see it in ten lines. The rest is just water.

The more you go on the street, the more you open new books, one after another, over and over again, and you won't look back until you break the wall, right?

What is the equation of infinite force and speed? Then what else is there to practice martial arts and body skills? Just practice strength without thinking.

No matter how much I write, I still can't get platinum. Should I change my style?

Recommend books outside the building, delete + ban

Conflicts are created too bluntly

What's going on? Isn't this a discussion? Why did you delete my comment? And I don't even remember what I said. Why did I delete it?

I really like reading your books, but I can't stand it. Reading a million words can lead to a subscription. If not, I won't lose anything. (I did the same for the last book, but I didn't expect it to be cut after about 50 chapters.)

Not as chivalrous as the lottery panel

The protagonist should be more realistic and stop playing bad jokes all the time.

In the first chapter, you didn't hold back to lift 8,000 pounds with one hand. With your body strength, you'd probably be fine even if you were hit by a small cannonball. You could even swim in the lava.

This is the first time I heard that steel and iron bones are very fast. The author is really awesome, and the readers are even better. I can't understand what it means. Speed ​​should be related to strength, technique and body weight, right? As long as I come to you, it will be the same. Have you ever heard of the word stupid?

Eunuch again, don't write books anymore. No one will read them. Spend money to read them and feel lonely.

Let me tell you a shameless statement. If you don't know how to write it, just copy it. If you copy it too much, you will be good at it.

You make enough money to stop writing, right? You TJ

When writing a novel, you must grasp the key points! When you are learning martial arts, you have to learn everything, but in the end you don't even know which one to improve. This needs to be dealt with, and you can recycle it a little bit. Even if it can only be turned into 1/10 of the experience points, it is better than having to learn everything, but not being good at anything. To learn martial arts, you don't have to learn the best. In the beginning, your internal skills are not as good as the top ones, and you can evolve many times! For example, three acquired martial arts books can be upgraded to innate martial arts.

I saw the main character's nickname "Bao Dazhu" before, and I knew that the author's level has dropped too much. He can only play some vulgar jokes and has no real character at all.

What the hell? I was excited when I watched it, but then I cut it. Damn it.

Write a book like the endless darkness game

I think there is no need to insist on writing a dark style if you have this ability. Such brutal protagonists have indeed been popular for a while in the past, but now everyone wants to see a more normal one.

The subject matter of your book is good, and the beginning is good, but the plot is not developed enough. I plan to refer to your book and other (not good enough) books like Muscle Iron Fist, Arhat Fist, Vajra Fist, Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu... Nine Turns of Mysterious Demon Kung Fu.

The big muscle tyrant is invincible in horizontal training and uses invincible violent punches to destroy all monsters and monsters.