From a Small Paper Worker to a Taoist Talisman

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The protagonist's understanding is so powerful that if you have a hammer, you might as well have some strong qualifications. To be honest, one is for the early stage and the other is for the later stage, but the premise is that you can survive and not die halfway.

The writing was okay, but it didn't make me want to continue reading. It feels like reading an urban business article. Moreover, the writing is a bit complicated. When explaining the runes, I would scroll down and read ten lines at a time. 😅

There is nothing poisonous about it, it is slow and steady, and it is written specifically for talismans, so there is still more ink about talismans, and it is not as rigid as the popular talismans. It's probably driven by spiritual power, and the carrier is not limited. The patterns are all Taoist characters, spells, etc., And then the runes driven by spiritual energy are modified and drawn.

It's very beautiful. Come on, support it.

It's well written, but it's a bit sparse and not enough to read.

The writing is pretty good but the updates are too slow. Although there are 5,000 words, you are not a great author and do not have that many fan bases. Before 500,000 words, there was no guarantee that there would be more than 8,000 updates per day. How many of you have survived? Nowadays, there are few new authors and everyone will be a little tolerant, but it is limited. I can only say this.

All the time, lingering, too little pleasure, like an old lady's foot-binding cloth

It's too bland, and there isn't much about the talismans.

The author's idea is quite good. In ancient myths and early immortals, everything in the world comes from the changes of the five elements. Since the talisman is also divided into the five elements, it can also be generalized by the five elements, such as water and fire explosion, water and wood healing, water and earth collapse, and metal and earth defense. If the author has an outline, forget it. If you don't have any clues later, I recommend a novel, Sui Qiu's Immortal Road Supreme. You can refer to the magic advancement in it.

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I write about urban immortality. Now the conflicts are centered around sales channels, building houses, and feuding clans. I am a bit philistine and have no immortality. I can rely on cooperation and rely on a big tree. If the big tree is too small and it falls down, I will lose part of the profits. In exchange for time and the essence of hundreds of schools of thought, I can integrate hundreds of schools of thought and practice a few things. I will not occupy the world of mortals. Once I become enlightened, I will be a big tree.

Not quite a fairy tale, the writing is good, but not attractive

Two monthly tickets for encouragement, the author understands!

It's well written and tastes good 🍷

The last few chapters have been averagely written, very watery, just keep it up.