Martial Universe: Rising from Humble Beginnings!

Your Lei Xie family will be solved in three chapters. This way, you can't go far in writing. Two hundred chapters will almost reach the finale. You don't have any plug-ins and don't use stone talismans. Even if you get the swallowing ancestral talisman, it's almost as good as Bo Xuan's. Moreover, you also plan to play a fan novel without a female protagonist and little character interaction. I really don't know what you mean by writing this fanfic.

When will I ascend to the world?

If you write like this, you might as well just delete the first part and write it with memories. In order to avoid being superficial, you just cover it up with a simple sentence. I am also confused when I read it. Even if I have read the original work, the biggest shortcoming of this book is that it has no content. The protagonist has no growth experience. It is purely a verbal account and the content is written in one stroke.

You can add a little bit of water appropriately, too fast is not good, you have to control the degree

I just found out that this book was written by you. You should continue to update the book Doupo. Don't stop. 😭

Come on, it's not bad, but it's a bit unsatisfying. It's too little.

Does the author have a group? It would be better to create a group

Will Lin Dong's strength become weaker without the ancestral talisman?

The author will update Doupo and I will give you a monthly vote 😭

The protagonist has forgotten all the resources in the Great Wilderness Sect. You have taken the Devouring Ancestral Talisman. There are so many spiritual treasures, demon spirits, spiritual plants, elixirs, martial arts, Nirvana Pills, Xuanyuan Pills, and the Nirvana Gold Qi accumulated in the Nirvana Dan River from the Great Wilderness Sect's extermination of the sect.