Starting from Scratch, Batman Shattered My Dream of Getting Rich

It's time to buy the newbie benefit of 1 dollar of life recovery and send it to your friend's wife. This scene is very kind and touching, but also very outsider and player-like. The first scene that reflects the protagonist's pure kindness is when the robber robs the protagonist but finds that the protagonist's pocket is cleaner than his face. The protagonist in turn comforts the robber and gives him a coat. Apart from the protagonist, Super Chao should be the only one in this DC world who can do this, right? Don't take yourself seriously, but empathize with the "weak" who have no choice but to do so. The first is to sympathize with human beings, and the second is to give selflessly without thinking that one will be harmed by it. Although dark and cool male protagonists are popular in Qidian, it must be admitted that kindness, generosity, and friendliness are more powerful qualities. Not only on the psychological level, but also because of the existence of the dark and refreshing male protagonist, it seems that the kind-hearted protagonist is more than capable. If Superman does this, everyone will think that he is an invulnerable and omnipotent alien. What the protagonist does is actually the same. However, the protagonist's ability and cognition are still different from Dachao, because the protagonist is not a statue, not a happy prince, but an ordinary person who needs to eat, drink, take care of himself, get injured, and has system tasks. Although there is a system, surviving in Gotham City mainly depends on the experience of life. The author wrote this part very well, very concrete and true. Although it is a fantasy Gotham scene, it seems to actually exist. It makes people feel that the protagonist is entering the world. When a story heals a friend's wife, it is a kind of pure kindness and compassion. It is no exaggeration to say that it is natural to classify this unexpected miracle as divine, because we cannot think of a reason for Ma Zhaodi to do this. However, miracles are miracles after all, and readers just like this kind of miracles so they read the article, right? Personally, I feel that Ma Zhaodi has a bit of a player mentality. Use the newbie benefits as long as you use them, and he is not a hamster party. However, the combination of this kind of player mentality and the three views of normal people shows an extremely absurd comedy side when facing the city of Gotham. At the same time, there is enough sense of involvement to make readers think that Ma Zhaodi is a systematic, lucky and ordinary character. However, in Gotham, normality is a kind of madness. Normality is a maverick. If you don't obey the black turbidity, you will appear to be pure and clear. So I think it's well written! ! ! ! ! Come on, author! ! ! ! !

Early stage: Laba porridge, Gouzixia... Laughing with tears. Mid-term: Sorry, sorry... This is today's happy picture. Later: Sorry, sorry, I forgot to post. Sorry. You don't take us seriously at all.

It's not bad, but it has a lot of poison points, 1-press combat power, a beginner's pistol proficiency can't hit anyone, and it keeps buying useless things without improving itself. 2. The characterization was unsuccessful, causing the protagonist to look like a murderer at times. For example, the wheelchair I bought was robbed. I was unprepared and started showing off, and then it was robbed. It's too cowardly and unrestrained, just like the wretched supporting characters in other novels, which makes me a little angry. 3. There is no plan. The system sends tasks to him, but he has no way to improve himself. He spends more points just to complete a task. 4. He needs the boss to talk about his capital points. Why not explain it in advance? It is embarrassing to see that he is not prepared at all.

There is no doubt that this is a work that started out extremely amazing and then quickly collapsed, which is a pity. The gimmick at the beginning that the protagonist has to work a serious job in Gotham to get rewards, and the various sexy operations that follow from this are quite interesting, quite abstract and beautiful, and make people want to follow it. Then there was a sudden crotch pull. First of all, the author often uses inexplicable narration and flashback techniques, which makes the whole work look very tired, and it feels like the flow has been broken. The overly long gangster plot is even more tiring. I don't know how many people will be interested in the trivia of Gotham gangsters, but from my reading experience, it is quite boring, and it is not interesting at all. Secondly, the space for the protagonist to play is extremely compressed. There are often two, three, or even four or five photos without the protagonist, and you can only watch a group of unfamiliar gangsters talking about all kinds of boring and uninteresting things. Finally, I just don't understand why, out of a hundred pictures, there is only one Batman that everyone likes to see in DC? As for the Joker, Harden's series of character creations are far from exciting. After it was put on the shelf, boredom became the main tone of the whole book. I also expected the protagonist to do some tricks, which attracted me to continue reading. However, this idea was quickly wiped out in the boring reading. The author says that he was once a street rusher, and I believe this. Because in terms of this kind of plot control, if you don't fight, who will? From the beginning, if this work can be written well, I think it may not be able to become a classic among DC fans like The Psycho. However, the author's lack of strength has caused the standard of this work to decline rapidly, which is disappointing.

The previous chapters were well written, but when it came to The Flash, the style changed. It was not as smooth and natural as before, like water for water's sake, and the character of the protagonist was somewhat different from the previous chapters. And the plot has become very twisted since the system started to be personified, and there are always some bad jokes to force humor. There is a big difference between the cool points in the first part and the second part. Naturally, the first part is very awkward in the second part. The author has also been suppressing the protagonist's combat power, giving people the feeling of a child dancing with a sword.

Advantages: It's watchable, but there are constant minor problems, but the big problems are nothing serious. It belongs to the second-tier American comic quality, so meal replacement is no problem at all. Flaws: Although the portrayal of Bat is relatively inferior, Dark Wind is right. As for Batman, it should be a walk-off, but it was written as a 1. The reform is somewhat taken for granted, but at least the process is going forward, and the paper has been handed in. The mining of the strength system is quite messy. To put it simply, he is a person who has fun. If strength training is a ranking match, he should be good at replenishing troops and developing troops. However, the protagonist is like an assistant who goes shopping. He wanders around the jungle, goes to the high ground to make expressions, and occasionally squats in the dragon pit to scrape, but does not do the real thing. He uses whatever strength he has instead of piling up damage as much as possible. He digs the system and takes orders to increase wages. Although the advantage is that the power system will not develop quickly, the disadvantage is that it is a salty fish. I think the effect of cheats should be reduced at the beginning of the game, and then the protagonist should be set as a disaster star who wants money but is not mercenary. Disadvantages: The pace is slow, and the chapters are quite adequate, but the progress is like a small horse pulling a cart, so that sometimes on a page of a book, you can read the first half of the text, glance at the second half of the text, and turn the page if there is nothing critical. The second thing is that sometimes the painting style deviates from the realism style and some cartoon style. It does not mean that the setting deviates. Deadpool and Squirrel Girl are both funny characters, but the painting style is realistic. The protagonist's deviation is like partially using a five-dimensional drawing board with graffiti-like colors, such as Plants vs. Zombies. Even if the cannons on the magic side and the technology side are much better, the graffiti cartoon cannons are used. It's basically like this, but it doesn't affect the viewing. There's nothing special about it, and it's a little interesting.

I've read too many crazy criticisms, and suddenly I burst into tears when I saw an ordinary person doing something heart-warming... Automatic subscription has been enabled, I hope the author can work hard and continue to update🙏🏻

I don't know if the author is dead or something. Now he's either asking for leave or just messing up the plot. Arkham Knight is so bad that I didn't even want to criticize him. Now this Injustice is just not alive and he just keeps dragging him out. It's really disappointing after reading this for a long time, ugh.

How shameless. But flashbacks affect reading too much, so I don't recommend using this writing method. The update speed is fast or the viewing experience is unsatisfactory. It is not as good as normal writing, especially the updates are slow, and reading it is simply torture. The character design of the main characters, especially Batman, is very good. It is the best one I have seen so far. The combat power balance and some plots written according to the logic of the current story are very good. It's hard to say what will happen next, it just depends on whether it can be controlled.

Go ahead and copy the original plot. Don't harm Gotham City 😭. The male protagonist of your plot can't be broken down. I won't order it. You've ruined Gotham and the ones I ordered are no longer a joke 😡

After reading it for so long, I came here to recommend it. It's not bad. It's a good read. At least the three golden chapters are somewhat interesting. The plot is relatively chaotic and warm. The protagonist is a bit ordinary, and his personality should be on the orderly and kind side. Although he is afraid of danger, he sometimes musters up the courage to fight against it. The flashback written by the author in the early stage may dissuade some people (it is really confusing, and I was a little confused when watching it). If you can survive the flashback, it will be very interesting to see the later part (the disaster star protagonist, the boss destroyer, in the plot of riddles and jokes later, the protagonist gives me the feeling of El Cat, happy). If you can survive a few random perspective flashbacks, then I think you are almost into this book. Finally, I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs. If you can't write it down, please give it a good ending🙏By the way, I saw someone asking if there is a female protagonist. I can only say that there is currently no such thing, but the author has not given any confirmation. And my personal advice is, if you can't write emotional drama well, don't write it... I've seen a lot of authors who just mess up the emotional drama between men and women. If you write it well, I don't care if you have a harem... In short, it's interesting food, and it won't kill you for the time being. (I repeat, if you can survive the messy flashbacks, you will really be able to get into the trap.)

Gua! Why hasn't it been updated yet? 😭 My body feels warm after reading it. I haven't read such a good book for a long time.

For me who really want to read DC fics, this is a good book, but the update is too slow. I will let it go for a while and then read it. I will give you a monthly pass so I can update it quickly

But at the time, most readers and I personally were dissatisfied with the plots of The Flash, Looking for a Couple, and The Black Robe. Maybe everyone likes to watch Lao Ma being funny (instead of Mao and Santengzi appearing all the time, adding some forced comedy plots that I personally find a bit boring) The reason why I recommend it is: Lao Ma sometimes has a sense of sainthood in the plots. I really like the plots of tree planting, Christmas, and Constantine. 👍 I also like that sometimes Lao Ma solves problems like a fairy tale. For example, in the beginning of the novel, in a family that is seriously ill and almost in poverty and despair, Lao Ma tells a ridiculous story to save his seriously ill wife. The system ties money to Lao Ma's ability, but Lao Ma's good deeds are not restricted by this. At the beginning, everyone would lament that it is not worth spending this time on this treatment. What if you need it? When the time comes, there will be no way to treat myself when I am injured. This is also my subconscious thought, thinking that this is really not cost-effective. But Lao Ma just told a ridiculous and irrational story, which healed the pain as if by magic, without thinking about whether it was cost-effective. This lets me know why I like this book. I like Lao Ma's kind deeds of helping people without calculation. It makes me think of those people in reality who can help others without calculation. Of course, I also like the abstract actions Lao Ma makes when he is funny. After all, it is really funny👍

Did you write that Gotham Sheriff Simulator? I remember this one as my favorite DC novel among cats.

Although I haven't seen the latest chapter, I hope the author will keep it.

It's great. I'm too stupid to praise it, but it's great

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1. After buying insurance, Mr. Wayne will really pay the compensation instead of running away bankrupt 2. After calling the fire truck, he will really put out the fire. Although it may be slower, the fire hydrants really have water, and they will not let the fire burn everything 3. The crime rate is lower than New York Feel free to add.

Drinking and sex has actually made me so haggard. From today on, I will quit sex, and I will give it a thumbs up for one day▄█▀█●

Learn to love yourself first before you want to love others! , Starting from today! Quit sex! Do what you say, a thumbs up and a day off!

You see, the male protagonist has some magical gadgets that can talk to animals and plants, and he can also create a dream that makes everyone in Gotham have a happy dream (except for a certain night-time millionaire and the bald old man guarding the night-time millionaire). And when encountering an unsolvable crisis, there is also a hunk with eight-pack abs who comes to the rescue...

The comments were good, but it didn't take long to get addicted after reading the content. As an ordinary person who knows the situation in Gotham, wouldn't you buy a save point when you could? Surely life is the priority?

Why don't you scream? I started from scratch. The big man with the masked face smashed my dream of getting rich with three punches.

Recharge your batteries, start quitting porn, learn from the older guys, get likes for a day, and end it by finding a girlfriend

The plot is quite good. I feel that the protagonist is like a poor version of Batman. He lives a normal life during the day and goes out to the police at night to do some things he can (although it may be just a "master" task). It is rare to see such a Guang Weizheng protagonist who simply spreads goodwill these days, and this is still in a world like DC.

At the beginning of the second chapter, the protagonist feels that he is safe because he is penniless. In the third chapter, the title is How could someone rob a poor man? A poor man's safe Gotham, huh? How should I put it? It is indeed rare to find an author with such clear eyes these days. If you have no money, you will not be let go, but you will be stabbed twice (see Boston Round Face's rich experience of "being robbed" at Station B) If you have no money, you can be taken to the homeless rescue center to receive "rescue" and a "physical examination" (see Lecturer Ding's experience of "receiving assistance") If you have no money, guess how much your healthy, untouched body with a DP is worth?

Regarding the protagonist's current behavior, Constantine's first reaction after learning about it was definitely disbelief, because in the DC universe, magic requires a heavy price, so no magician will sacrifice his own interests to help others. Secondly, it was later confirmed that the protagonist is really a good person who considers others, and there is no price for doing magic. In addition to the protagonist's relatively young age, Constantine will only think that the protagonist has been deceived by a certain demon or god (after all, even if the protagonist confesses that he is a so-called system, others will automatically understand it as a disguise of Gao Wei's life). At present, the protagonist can use magic without restrictions, but the god behind it has not yet charged a price. Constantine, a scumbag, will admire the protagonist. After acquiring magic, he will never be able to be a bright and just person, but for his own benefit, he will only plan to take advantage of the protagonist. After all, the gods or demons behind the protagonist seem to be preparing a conspiracy to give the protagonist unlimited use of magic without charging a price. They can take this opportunity to collect a large sum of money and then kill the protagonist. This way, the conspiracy is prevented, and a large amount of benefits can be obtained. It can also allow this bright man to stay in his most righteous life, without having to fall into darkness for the painful price in the future. After all, he is a scumbag, and he always has legitimate reasons to carry out his own plans, thus moving himself

It seems like more than 200 people die in Gotham a year. If you can't survive, you can go to your grandpa's charity organization to beg for a meal. The villains only care about Batman and rarely attack ordinary people.

To be honest, the protagonist really looks like a saint (in a religious sense) who is randomly refreshed in some kind of folk Christian story Considering the protagonist's behavioral logic: receiving tasks and task props from a seemingly omniscient and omnipotent other, and then completing the tasks in exchange for blessings, he is more like ()