Ascending to Godhood Through Martial Arts

From the introduction, I feel that a war breaks out in all realms, and Blue Star actually has the ability to participate. I'm afraid your so-called all realms don't even have the Milky Way. There are hundreds of billions of stars and tens of trillions of planets. How many orders of magnitude do you have to write to reach the level of the Milky Way?

More than 200 chapters have been ordered. The biggest disadvantage is that while the protagonist's contribution to the country is written in a very impressive way, the country basically does not support the protagonist. Is such a big country really short of resources to cultivate the protagonist? Since you have written about your great contribution to the country, it is not excessive to have corresponding rewards. In addition, The protagonist is not a waste, he is also a genius. There is no such thing as a waste of resources. Is it difficult to supply the protagonist with unlimited resources? The stronger the protagonist, the greater his contribution to the country. As a result, the protagonist spends all the elixirs he eats. He has no money to buy them, so he has to borrow money to buy elixirs to practice. It is so funny.

I am an old reader. I have been reading Lao Huo's books since Confucian sage. Didn't the author notice that his grades are getting worse and worse? After all, The Confucian Sage is really cool. The full text has been released, except for the later release due to copyright reasons. The previous plot links are remarkable. Now take a look and see what is written? Frustrated and brainless. Some Confucian sages also sacrificed their lives, and some sacrificed themselves for the sake of righteousness, but would it be like now? The Mesozoic era is full of death, the grandfather watched his grandson die, and the master watched his apprentice die. You can write it all to death. With so many people criticizing Lao Huo, do you really not read the comments? No change at all?

I have carefully read more than ten chapters of Lao Huo's new book. Although I still can't see much, here is a short review of the book, including one advantage, one disadvantage and some doubts: Advantages: Long-reading This is actually a very rare advantage. Lao Huo's book should be among the top three slowest in reading speed among the works I have read. And Lao Huo's Storytelling has made great progress, and he has tended to use stories to tell truths, rather than using truths to tell stories. Especially now, we still need to spare some effort to dig holes at the beginning. The climax of the plot is far from coming. A readable sentence is worth a thousand words. Regardless of the performance of such a book, at least the readers will definitely buy it 🤭 Disadvantages: Missing memory points The first one is the lack of memory points such as realm😵 There are many realms, big and small, many realms of skills, and many types of skills. Especially after reading, it is difficult to leave an impression on me. Of course, this is most likely due to the fact that there is no fighting plot yet. I hope that the characteristics of various skills and realms can be better highlighted during fighting, so that readers can have an impression and a sense of immersion. The second one is the small flaws in the portrayal of minor characters. This part is more like a suggestion, because people like Dahuang, Uncle Li, various martial saints, etc. Can already be portrayed quite well in just a few chapters. However, themes like Gaowu have an inherent problem: if the upgrade is not fast, readers will be unhappy; if the upgrade is fast, the previous characters will soon be left behind, which wastes the readers' memory. I have no impression of many of the students in this class. They might just be like a supporting cast, just say a name or say a few sentences and then lose their role. Of course, they may be just supporting casts themselves 😏 and the protagonist seems to stay in a martial arts school or martial arts gym near his hometown, and there may be subsequent intersections. No matter what, I still hope to increase the interaction with the main characters, or concentrate on telling the story of a minor character. Doubts: Writing style🤔 Lao Huo still has a meaningful writing style as always. To put it nicely, it is literary and literary. The funny thing is that it feels like it has been poisoned by knowledge 😃 This is undoubtedly a bonus in previous books, but this one is a ten-level Stitch Monster World with high martial arts, technology, systems, western fantasy, etc. At present, it seems to be relatively harmonious, but I hope that the writing style and content style will not be completely different in the future. This depends on Lao Huo's experienced writing style 😁 Finally First update of the new book, or Zhu Laohuo🔥🔥🔥, I am very optimistic about the top ten historical quality of Lao Huo's impact on this type of subject 🤓

First of all, I was inspired by Chapter 240 and wrote it. I am a long-time fan of Lao Huo. Except for Xiaoyao Landlord, everyone has watched the finale and only rewatched it a few months ago. I should know Lao Huo well, hahaha Secondly, if Lao Huo has watched it, just watch it in your free time! Don't affect the coherence of your writing! (It's more about chatting, hahahaha, I talk a lot) In fact, I am also a creator, and I have also been very resistant to other people's "writing guidance". I was very entangled at first whether to write this long review, but I remembered Lao Huo's previous reply, and I thought: If my long review can help Lao Huo, it might be meaningful. After all, Lao Huo is different from many other authors. He is a person who pursues progress and writes books seriously. Some people may say, since you think it may not be good to say it, why do you say it? Then the contradiction lies in my own desire for expression and the feelings of the viewers. First of all, I am essentially self-interested. I think my own feelings are more important. Secondly, I also value the feelings of the viewers, so "how to say it so that the viewers can accept it more easily" is my goal. I think this is also a contradiction in expression when writing novels. At the very beginning, Lao Huo should have determined his original intention and ultimate goal of writing this book, right? Whether it is to improve one's writing skills, whether it is to cater to the public and write novels that everyone likes, whether it is to make money or something else, and the importance of readers' feedback... All need to be considered clearly. As the gods say, when the ultimate goal is clear, the subconscious mind will capture all factors that help achieve the final goal. But when I actually did it, I found that there should be one more thing, that is, it is best to set a higher goal than the goal you hope to achieve (because people can never do their best and often fail to achieve the original goal, so the initial goal and the actual goal they hope to achieve should be the difference between dreams and ideals (?) First of all, I know that Lao Huo wants to make progress in writing, but before pursuing progress in writing, I still hope that Lao Huo can clearly understand his own strengths. Because people are not perfect, then using strengths and avoiding weaknesses is definitely the first choice! Then I will start to praise Lao Huo! First, Lao Huo is very good at using dialogues to promote the plot, and many dialogues are very provocative (referring to emotions). As we all know, mobilizing emotions is a very important indicator for writing novels. Most of the time, reading novels is a recreational activity, which stimulates the production of dopamine. Must be the first factor, which is why Shuangwen has so many audiences. Second, the readability is definitely one of the best among the novels I have read. This is also very important, especially when writing long novels... How to guide and even seduce readers to read is a difficulty that every author must overcome. Tell me a very interesting thing. I once cut a chapter to a friend who has never read Lao Huo's novel and used dialogue to talk about the setting. After reading it, my friend was very surprised and said to me, "It's all about introducing the world." The world view setting is still a long dialogue, but I read it so smoothly, and I got into it." The third thing I must praise is that Lao Huo's world view setting is really cool! Each book is grand and interesting, and I have written one story after another. A wonderful and complete world, it is really attractive! (It would be better if it could be written in more depth 😭) Fourthly, Lao Huo's underlying logic is very reasonable and complete, and he can endure even small details. This is It is a place that reflects the cultural level (and the readers at the starting point are generally older, which means that the requirements for basic writing skills will be higher) Fifth, I feel that Lao Huo's books are a bit group portrait, which means that they will write many important supporting characters and give them highlights and their own stories, rather than simple supporting roles. In fact, this has surpassed some works, and I like this very much (so Lao Huo, should you consider trying to write group portraits 😏) Personally, Lao Huo's books are often thought-provoking and can give people a "sense of gain." This is more mysterious. Lao Huo's books often trigger my thinking, and they naturally make me think about myself, and then I feel like I have gained some kind of knowledge. Feeling. This "sense of gain" is different from fast food entertainment. It is a higher level of knowledge and ideological gain. (The following is my personal preference) Lao Huo, did you know that you are really good at writing about animals, and you write very cutely! ? It's really cute. It's a big regret for me that the protagonist of Life Hunter doesn't have a pet 😭 I really like the interaction between Zhou Leng and Dahuang Xiaoba. The cute thing is definitely killing both men and women (an exaggeration) And Lao Huo is so good at writing swords,,, I couldn't help crying several times 😭 And Lao Huo didn't just cut for the sake of cutting, nor did he deliberately trick readers into crying. They were all meaningful and logical. After reading it, it made people feel regretful but reasonable... (Off topic, I write story friends Friends say that I am the King of Swordsmen, and I learned it from Lao Huo 😏) Why do I have to be so serious and praise so much? Maybe some people think that this is not good and Lao Huo will drift away, but as a creator, I feel that at every stage? Support and recognition are very necessary. Enthusiasm will fade, inspiration will dry up, and energy will be exhausted, so every love is worth cherishing. Okay, the praise is over, let's give some advice~ As a reader and a newbie. The author of the writing hopes that his personal insights can give some inspiration to his favorite authors! Let's talk about what I feel is more profound recently... For example, the plot of the current novel is dull. In fact, the outline is definitely not dull, but I feel that Lao Huo has become "socialized", which means he has lost his enthusiasm... (Of course, it may also be due to the fact that my current job is very nourishing. XD) But this seems to be less common in the previous books. Personally, I feel that the atmosphere is not enough. Like many erotic comics, many of the plots are very ordinary, but they can be ignited because the atmosphere is there. As the saying goes, if the atmosphere is enough, you can write as much as you want, but you are afraid of forcing passion and excitement. Feeling in love and then being embarrassed That's the key point. In fact, starting from Confucianism and Taoism, there are several great knives of the gods, and Zhou Chunfeng has written very well. It feels like Lao Huoguang is struggling with the writing method, and the words presented are a bit too rational, but the emotional part is neglected (?) Literature Literature must have something that touches people and shocks the soul! 😆 (Some people may think that Internet articles are not literature, but as Su Ye said, "Only by demanding yourself to be a legend can you become a legend!" "Qi", in the same way, if you want to write excellent written works, you should try to demand yourself with higher standards - even if you can't do it) Then I noticed that Lao Huo seemed to have answered some people's doubts in the paragraph comments. Maybe Lao Huo also feels that in order to pursue an optimal writing method that is more easily accepted by everyone, feedback from readers is essential. Maybe Lao Huo has figured it out now, but I still want to say this - Lao Huo needs to distinguish between useful comments and useless comments! [F n=24] After all, human beings have species diversity, and those who read books seriously will definitely make mistakes on purpose... For example, if you are confident that you have written it clearly, then later readers will naturally help you answer it. If you look back and find that the expression is not very clear, then you can make improvements. Then, you can ignore those statements that are obviously not the target audience 🙂 Lao Huo is not originally a writer of fast-paced routines and cool articles, so those obvious ones are not. Those who like to read this kind of novels are destined not to like Lao Huo's books. I also saw that there is a lot of discussion about Xihai Wuhan University. Lao Huo's hints and foreshadowing have already pointed to the subsequent development and the overall layout. There is no problem! So why are there still so many people dissatisfied? I thought about it, except for those who are impatient, it is probably because it is too "hazy". Yes, it is not that it is not clear or buried too deep, but that it is in a state of uncertainty. It's so hazy. The heroic words of Confucianism, Daoism and Yizhou make it clear that the protagonist's goal is clear enough. The ingenuity of the gods and the last mouth shape of the life hunter are buried deep enough to make people unexpected. To sum up, either directly point out the long-term goal, so that readers know that the protagonist will definitely do it but it is not time; the time to reveal is relatively close, and then add a little foreshadowing to make it a logical conclusion. The climax; if the timing of the reveal is too far away, it's best to hide it so that many readers don't notice it, and it will be a shock when you put it back! 😁 I really like what Lao Huo said before, you must write what you like and want to write. This is also the source of the basic motivation and enthusiasm. Can you still find the passion and fun of writing? How much has changed in writing novels now... But no matter which stage it is, it is a precious experience in life, and there is no turning back. I remember that some authors said that to write a good novel, there must be something private. The only difference is whether the export of the private goods can be accepted by the readers. There are differences, but there is a saying that is well said and a well-written novel, even the controversial parts, will not make people uncomfortable to read (I have been pursuing this...) I also noticed that some people seem to say that the current plot of Lao Huo has fallen into a cliché, and everyone can guess the subsequent development. It's boring to watch. This is due to the lack of expectation. The reason why the counter-routine that was very popular in the past (and maybe even now) is because people want to see something different and are looking forward to how the author will "counter-routine". If I insist on it... Leave more suspense. More extensions and blank spaces? From time to time, some novel developments can catch the reader's eyes. To put it simply, just think of the readers as people who are intermittently fond of the new and dislike the old. 🙂 It is said that writing novels is to challenge the readers' habitual thinking, and it should not be too shocking and completely out of touch. The development is far from everyone's expectations, and it can't be exactly what everyone thinks without new ideas (Wow, it's really difficult to maintain at first glance jpg) I feel that a feasible way is that the general plot development should not be too biased (for example, the protagonist must take revenge), but there should be expectations in small areas. Other highlights (for example, this method of revenge is quite special) (Of course this is all theoretical talk, actual operation is another matter (eye movement)) As I write this, I realize that a lot has been said. As for other more advanced things such as rhythm and structure, I'm still thinking about it... I feel like it's hard to maintain a long novel. Maybe it would be better to break these into beads and connect them in series? It's "Don't think about being a baker when you are thirty-five, but think that you have not accomplished anything at the age of thirty-five, but you have become a baker." Finally, I wish Lao Huo can make progress and grow, become a better self, and successfully achieve his goals!

Come on, the new book feels pretty good. Although the subject matter is more classic and not as novel as the Life Hunter theme, it lacks a lot of rational narratives in the previous book. The narrative is coherent and the reading is much better. Keep up the good old flames and keep updating!

First of all, I admit that Lao Huo's book is indeed very good, and I am a fan of three books. This one fully demonstrates Lao Huo's writing skills. Then, I would like to share some of my own opinions on the latest chapter (I'm really not happy about it). First of all, the protagonist has been smeared by the entire Internet after being deposed. During this period, the Wu Mansion has not taken any action so far. If I remember correctly, Zhou Leng has entered a confidentiality sequence. They said that Zhou Leng's identity is kept secret to prevent assassination, but do we still need to worry about Zhou Leng since he has been deposed? Not to mention that he has already entered the assassination list of the Demon Realm, but your confidentiality sequence cannot only have the function of keeping secrets, not to mention that you can't publish some past achievements to help support him? For example, the Arrow Bearer from the Demon City Battle is already useless anyway. Others do not have the reader's perspective to know that Zhou Leng will definitely recover, and the announcement will not make Zhou Leng's situation more difficult, not to mention that it cannot be more difficult. There is also the device given by the Demon City Army. It is said that as long as you press it hard, a righteous warrior will come to help you. I am not talking about whether Zhou Leng has a chance to press it. It means that if there is no one around, you can only collect the corpse for Zhou Leng, right? Lao Huo, you repeatedly emphasized in your article how strong Zhou Leng's achievements were in the past, saying that he was the best in pronunciation of divine texts and so on. However, it seems that Wufu's reaction was average. You don't want to say that Wufu does not have the power to control public opinion, right? And Zhou Leng is the elder brother of the Furukawa Sect and the controller of the Starry Sky Ruins. Even if the Wu Mansion doesn't know how strong Zhou Leng's control is, can't he send a signal to the outside world? Or is it that the Starry Sky Ruins have not been registered with the Supreme Court. It seems that Wufu is still very strong. He was even willing to risk the ruins of the starry sky to vent the anger of sixteen families. There are also the title of the protagonist, the Giant Grand Duke, the Dwarf Grand Duke, and the Demon Master. I remember that the protagonist seems to have made great contributions to these races. Is it possible that it is so realistic that these races will turn against him when they see him useless? To take a step back, they didn't receive any news at all because of the occlusion of communication in the ten realms. What is the United Front Work Department of Wufu used for? If he died, how would you tell other races in the Humanoid Alliance that he committed suicide by jumping off a building after being raped by a female classmate online? Um? Are you saying that your race is not as good as a bunch of second-rate families in our country that you don't even know exist? Will this cause any dispute? Even if Zhou Leng has no real power, he is still a foreign duke. I remember that all the clans have reported it to the Wu Mansion. You are not even willing to warn those families for someone who has connections in the ten worlds and has made great contributions to the country and is still on the protection list. Why, you have to wait for someone to die before you post a fake condolence message, announce your identity, and then the whole network observes a moment of silence. In the end, the Wu Mansion is "furious" and vows to find out the truth and give everyone an explanation, right? I guess at that time, the Zhao family would say that people cannot be resurrected after death, so they should keep their lives to fight against foreign enemies, and then they would make a symbolic friendship, pretend to cry a few times, and then the matter would be over? The Zhao family might even cover up Zhou Leng's achievements for the sake of fame. The above are all my personal thoughts. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I'll save my life.

Ah! ! ! Old fire! ! ! I saw your book "The Supreme Sage of Confucianism and Taoism" two years ago, and I really thought it was very well written 😭😭😭 I kept re-reading it over and over again. Really, I think seven or eight times is enough. I like it very much 😭 Now that I see you publishing a new book, I came to support it. But I am still a student party and I really don't have much money to support it. I just wish you better and better!

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1. Style: Lao Huo's previous three books, the practice system is based on the combination of strength and learning, focusing on learning (principles, principles, laws) to promote the development of strength, and the improvement of strength for further learning. Unlike normal fantasy books, this high martial arts system is an innovation in Lao Huo's writing type, but I think it should not be the same as that of Lao Huo. The previous style is completely different, but the relationship between reason and power may not be directly related 2. Source of Civilized Struggle: In the previous two novels, Lao Huo's view of the world is from disorder to order, and the unity of all living beings (I think so), then I guess that the Civilized Struggle produced in Zhou Leng's world may be a development Different factions in the strongest civilization have different views on civilization. It may also be that they died due to internal fighting after the integration of different civilizations. Therefore, they wanted to select a new civilization that could lead and correctly solve civilization problems, which resulted in the subsequent story 4. Ending: Zhou Leng should meet with other civilizations Kill a cancerous civilization that believes in disorder (similar to the Mei mentioned in Life Hunter) and then create a new orderly world Finally, I am a Diaos myself, I really know very little, and I don't know how to post comments. If you don't like me, please feel free to criticize me. If there is any problem with this book review, I will delete it in the future.