Naruto, but Xiao Li Flying Knives

My feelings after reading the first two chapters: The protagonist is a person who has failed graduation and already has an industry that is not in the ninja establishment. Then it is unfounded to worry that he will be arranged to go to the battlefield. Then the author really wrote that the protagonist is arranged to go to the battlefield. Konoha does not have a standing army and the ninjas are almost dead. If it is the turn of people like the protagonist who are not in the ninja establishment to go to the battlefield, Konoha is already finished.

Xiao Li can't get through Naruto with his flying knife! If it were Xiao Li's flying knife in "Cun Mang", that would be enough

It's a bit weak. Others are covered by firepower. A shuriken shadow clone technique. Not to mention the most basic earth release. You may not be able to break through the hardened defense of the earth spear. It is just a skill in itself. In other words, the Byakugan God's perspective and the Sharingan are copied directly. Xiao Li's flying knife doesn't have much meaning. Unless it is given a rule that will hit, otherwise, magnetic release is your biological father. Generally speaking, Xiao Li's flying knife is meaningless.

The protagonist, a chuunin, told the young Tsunade that he would kill the third generation for rebellion when the third generation was young -.-Speechless

In a book written by AI, the protagonist cannot learn ninjutsu, not even the three-body technique, but he can learn the Rasengan and return to heaven. The Raikage's Jounin Water Release - Water Breaking Wave, the Third Raikage will have the Arashi Release Blood Succession Limit. Kakashi's father never got his name right once.

This kind of work eats a so-called "patriotic" meal. Because it is a martial arts technique in a Chinese work, it must be better than others. Skills that have been developed over decades and hundreds of years must be stronger than others' skills that have been developed over thousands of years and tens of thousands of years.

Unless a knife can ignore space, cannot be defended, and is a 100% sure hit cause and effect prop, otherwise a small flying knife is of no use.

What the hell are you writing? I've repeated it dozens of times. I'll forget about updating it.

The writing is okay, but there are too many unreasonable things. Xiao Li's flying knives actually need special throwing knives. Without the throwing knives on his body, he has no deterrence. Didn't the author watch the shuriken battle between Sasuke and Itachi? What kind of sword-hiding skills are there? He can only hide 300 throwing knives. This is a world with chakra, which is too low. Also, Xiao Li's flying knives can only be used with specific flying knives. This setting is also LOW. If Xiao Li's flying knives are known to be fired with shurikens and kunai, it won't work. In Chu Liuxiang's world, Li Xunhuan can kill people by picking leaves and firing them with Xiao Li's flying knives. I don't know how the author wrote the latest chapter. Danzo kidnapped three of your students without informing the Hokage and was fooled. This has nothing to do with whether Danzo did the right thing or not. The problem is that he overstepped his authority and abducted his own ninja without notifying the Hokage at all. If this is all right, I can also think that Danzo is harmful to Konoha and kill him privately without notifying the Hokage.

Xiao Li Fei Dao seems to be a character that has trapped the protagonist to death. He cannot practice ninjutsu. I don't know whether he is strong or not. It all depends on the author's description of how many people he killed. I just feel that Xiao Li Fei Dao is very strong but has little to do with the protagonist. Maybe it has something to do with my preference for watching TV dramas adapted from Jin Yong's novels (I have never read the original martial arts novels, but only watched TV dramas). After all, the division of martial arts realms in Jin Yong's novels is more intuitive. Although I also like watching TV dramas adapted from Gu Long's novels. Li Xunhuan is really handsome, but the martial arts in Gu Long's novels are too mysterious, so when I read the author's novels, I felt a little confused, and it felt very bland and watery. Of course, this only represents my personal opinion, and you are welcome to discuss it. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it.

Li Xunhuan's own flying knives couldn't break through the female Bodhisattva's fat flesh, but you still want to be invincible. . .

Hesitant, without focus, looking irritable

The idea is good, and the writing is okay, but the author seems to have never watched Naruto. It's not as bad as it is a little bit.

The condensed content of Chapter 14 is that Danzo captured the protagonist's apprentice and robbed the secret technique. The protagonist found out and the Hokage guarantor, the protagonist said harshly that he would kill Danzo if he appeared within 100 meters.

The protagonist is a brainless and reckless man who is hesitant and repetitive about his inner nature, and nothing has changed. If you kill Danzo directly, can you still say that you are decisive and decisive to the end, and just say a few harsh words and that's it?

It is Li Xunhuan who is stronger, not Little Li's flying knife. This is a general setting of the ancient dragon series. What is strong is not martial arts, but the person. In the original work, what if Little Li's flying knife is hit? The Great Joy Bodhisattva's fat body cannot be shot through. The dragon and phoenix double rings can definitely kill Li Xunhuan before Li Xunhuan takes action. But his curiosity makes him want to see it and wait for Li Xunhuan to take action first. So what about you, little Li's flying knife? Didn't Danzo's kunai hit Susana?

I also listened to the book and listened to more than 180 chapters, but I really couldn't listen to it anymore. The protagonist and plot arrangement of this work are very good. But Luo Libasuo's narration content is really too much, and the content becomes more and more as you go to the back. After 150 pictures, almost all of them are messy narration content. Moreover, many of the narrations are based on their own imagination, which is completely inconsistent with the original work. The author's self-imagination and private design are too messy, and the narrations are too weird and too watery, which is really disgusting.

Two chapters on anti-theft, this is really too much

It is okay to use martial arts in the world of Naruto, but you cannot use Jin Yong Gulong's low martial arts. You should choose Wen Ruian and Huang Yide's high martial arts. For example, for physical skills, use the Thirty-Six Luqi, for long-range skills, use the innate body-breaking invisible sword energy, and for comprehensive skills, use Senluo Wandao. Even your throwing knives can't break through Gaara's sand, and the Chuunin's water shock wall can't be broken, right?

Don't watch it, it's a waste of money! Repeatedly

What the hell? Can I still watch it? Anti-theft

It feels like it was written blindly without watching Naruto 😂

Sure enough, the anti-piracy protection is very effective 😅

Why can't I learn ninjutsu if I have chakra and can control it finely? If you don't know Ninjutsu, your methods will be very simple. Once you are targeted, you can only wait to die!

I don't know what to say. Writing a novel is all about narration and psychological description. Why write so many side stories and other descriptions? Are you trying to make up the word count? There can be half a chapter of narration and nonsense in the middle of a conversation between two people.

The protagonist doesn't even know the Three Body Techniques and hasn't graduated from the ninja school. And you're not like Matt Dai. In theory, you don't even have a genin forehead protector. You're not even a ninja. How can you be sent to the battlefield? You can only transport supplies at most.