Naruto, Start with Tenseigan and Corpse Veins

Shuiryu has really drawn a good circle for you. There are only one person who writes about the reincarnation, and no one is stubborn. It will always be the members of the clan who jump around in front of you. The people who were added before my awakening jumped in front of me, and the people who were added after my awakening are still jumping in front of me. Didn't I awaken in vain? Violence brings power. As long as your fist is big enough, Hinata and Hinata can only come and lick your ass. As long as your fist is big enough, Hiruzen will kneel in front of you and beg you to be the fourth generation Hokage. I'm almost immortal. I'm still a coward. Suiryu was the first. He got the crab. If those who come after don't change, they can only die and throw themselves into the street.

Shen Nong is here to talk about the advantages and disadvantages. If you can accept it, you can accept it. If you can't accept it, then retreat. Advantages: ① The author listens to the advice. Although there are many shortcomings, there are still improvements (although some have not been changed) ② It does not suppress the protagonist's combat power. The protagonist can fight Konan, Juzo, Orochimaru, Kakuzu, Scorpion and Hungry Ghost Road at the same time before the protagonist is released. The progress of combat power can be described as rapid. ③ There is no cookie-cutter system. The golden finger lies in plot advantages and talents. The research and development capabilities are comparable to Orochimaru. He developed the Kaiten Chakra mode at the age of 13, and developed a method to transplant the blood inheritance limit of others, and transplanted the corpse bone veins. ④Have strong subjective initiative, know what to do, do Danzo when asked, do Danzo, decisive and not irritating Disadvantages: ①The fighting writing is really not good, the writing is a bit immature, and needs to be improved ②The last two paragraphs of one chapter are copied and pasted to the beginning of the next chapter Bad habit (it seems to have been changed now, but it's just too late, it was changed a few chapters before it was released) ③ Calling the Fourth Generation Meimei Yongdaimei, the author likes to pop up Japanese words from time to time, such as being stupid, I can be weak, I am not used to it (not changed) 😅 ④ Combat Strength Progress It's too fast, I feel like I'm going to collapse, but it's hard to say ⑤ Washing Itachi (It's hard to say, it's a matter of opinion. After all, Itachi is only 5 years old at this time. The protagonist still has a certain affection for Itachi. He has become Itachi's life mentor. Itachi even opened the Sharingan for the protagonist's safety. , I feel that his status in Itachi's heart has been ranked first. By making Itachi his younger brother, the situation has expanded, no longer limited to one village and one clan, but with his eyes on the entire ninja world. Itachi's dream has become to help the protagonist unify the ninja world and bring permanent peace) and pass the responsibility for the genocide to Konoha F4. Considering that some people can accept it and some people can't, it is listed as a shortcoming. I personally can accept it. After all, there is an extra subordinate, and the Uchiha clan is not familiar with me, not related to me. In addition, it happened in the original timeline. With the protagonist around, it obviously will not happen. ⑥ A wooden person, with a low emotional intelligence, slow in relationships ⑦ Easy to have conflicts of temper, not very rational, unable to gain the maximum benefit calmly, some behaviors are too impulsive, leaving trouble for others. That's it in general.                               ：

I have always liked watching Suiryuu's Tenseigan. After reading it, I found that many of the other Naruto fandoms were System and Goldfinger. I couldn't stand it after reading dozens of chapters, so I wrote this book myself. There will be no system or cheats in this book. The protagonist's only advantage is that he knows the plot and the descendants of Kaguya. This book was also very easy to write. Although I wrote 6 to 10 hours a day, although I wrote 1,000 words per hour, and although I typed on my mobile phone, I really enjoyed writing it. I hope more readers will come to discuss the plot together!

The third chapter was really poisonous to me. In the first chapter, the protagonist said that he had poor talent, and he and Obito were both ashamed of being bloodstained. Then in the third chapter, he went straight to the opposite direction. Isn't returning to heaven exclusive to the Zong family? Neji is called a genius because he has developed Kaiten and the Sixty-four Palms of the Eight Trigrams on his own. At this moment, Ningji doesn't know where he is. You, as the first person in history to use Kaiten, are actually a shameful person.

It's very surprising. On the surface, it doesn't rely on golden fingers or systems. In fact, it is pure golden fingers. Is it called genetic engineering to manipulate cells? The Hokage said that apart from the usefulness of the eyes, few other blood stains could be transplanted, let alone such crude genetic engineering.

You are going to a completely different extreme than Shuilong. That damn Tenseigan and the third-generation Kazekage puppet configuration, Zona and a jounin tortured each other to the extreme. Now that you are 13 years old, you can chase and kill 5 people from the Akatsuki organization using only your clones, which is the ultimate level of defiance. I am completely speechless for you two. Is it so difficult to write about Naruto balancing his combat power now?

The jounin is already the core of the ninja village, and the ninjutsu mastered is basically considered a personal secret. Will there really be such a jounin exam open to all ninja villages and civilians? Aren't you afraid of leaking information? A ninja's intelligence leaks are easy to be targeted. The early stage of the attack was intelligence. Now is the era of Xiaoqiang, which has just ended after the Third World War and has been peaceful for more than ten years. How can this kind of jounin promotion be an open assessment?

I saw the plot of falling out with Hinata, plus begging to become a disciple, etc., So I can't understand the author's thinking.

Protagonist: Kneel down and be my dog! Otherwise, no one in heaven or on earth can save you! Hyuga clan: You are brave! Protagonist: Shut up, you are even meaner than a dog, you are only worthy of eating me💩

There are no big poisons, but there are constant small poisons, which makes me frown.

After reading a few chapters, I really wanted to complain but I didn't know what to complain about. The overall feeling was that I was cheating, but you can't do it to your heart's content, it just doesn't feel good.

Have an idea! I hope the author can adopt it! Using parts and armor made of reinforced bones, this is the real "Gundam". There is no need to retract the body like the Samsara Eye series, causing harm to the body every time it is used! You only need to form it once, and you can keep building up the rest! As for portability, isn't there a sealing scroll with a large space for the Ninja Army to carry supplies? If one is not enough, there will be 10. Anyway, just release them and connect them with abilities (modular)! Needless to say melee weapons, long-range weapons can be fired with bones or missiles (not to mention none, Yu Ninja's Six Paths fired a lot of rounds) The only disadvantage is that it cannot fly, it is too heavy and lacks energy supply. With this energy supply, Chatara can easily pinch the body of the Nine-Tails. There is no need for a "limiter" armor, and it will directly overwhelm the ninja world! The last thing is: wearing armor! Gundam, attack!

The protagonist is too cowardly to attack the Hyuga clan. They separate you into a clan and treat you as a human being, so you just kill 5 clan members? ? It feels like repaying evil with kindness At the very least, we have to treat the other person the same way as the other person. The protagonist develops a more severe curse to the clan family, causing them to endure never-ending pain.

Shennong is here, it can be read, but it needs to be optimized

The protagonist is completely driven by the plot, and has no bearing at all. The whole person is wrapped up in the general trend, like a puppet, and gets startled at every turn. His behavior is completely different from that of a time-traveler who knows the plot! ! !

I uploaded it on Douyin It seems interesting How about taking a look at the original text?

As a 30-year-old man, I have to go to work every day and code. Time is too tight. The blind date I met a few days ago has been out of contact and has become indifferent. The hand speed is so slow that I can only write 1,000 words in an hour. The author has to write 6 to 8k words every day, and almost spends all his spare time on this! Dear readers, please take pity on me and give me some monthly votes!

The author didn't feel that he was writing a book that would be read by many people. He was very casual, making some jokes that only he understood, and making some jokes that only a few people knew. The reading experience was very poor, and the setting followed the crowd, which suppressed the combat effectiveness.

Is there any Shen Nong? Is he from the Xi Zong family?

I have read almost all the Tenseigan novels before looking for related novels, but you are too anxious, and the first Kusanagi sword in the ninja world was kicked off casually? It's not the eighth gate of the Eight Gates Dunjia. It feels like a show

The author's horse riding is all based on his imagination. Can the kaleidoscope fully open the Susanawara? Let's study Naruto carefully from now on, Tenten Yun Hokage.

It feels a bit baffling. I wrote it so poorly that I don't even know what you want to do? As long as it develops, develop well, do it here and there.

The position of Hokage is indeed powerful enough, but if you want to say that it is impossible to unify the ninja world to help you collect blood successors, first of all... You still have a big name on your head. With this kind of deformed political structure, there is no way to unify the ninja world if you don't fight against it, then it will be against... The Akatsuki organization is easier to use than Konoha. Secondly, the blood successors in the Naruto world are basically only strong in blood. The highest achievement on his own should be Ohnoki, right? But it's also very ordinary. In addition, the protagonist is taking the route of returning to his ancestors. He just needs to find the target person of the bloodline without collecting it at all. Finally, I still have to affirm the author's determination to realize the dream of being a Hokage, but I'm a little tired of it. Maybe four or five years ago I would have watched the Konoha family and the like. Give me a small suggestion. I don't know if the author has written an outline, but the ratio between battle and daily life needs to be adjusted a little. If the daily life is well written, the protagonist's characterization can be made more vivid (provided that the writing is good, otherwise it will be watery). In this way, if you have more words, you can make more money (laughing) Come on, it will be better, give me a monthly vote!

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

I think it's better to improve step by step. With the reincarnation eye and 40 calories of chakra, there is no problem with 40 calories of chakra surpassing the Uchiha group of shadows.