Survival Game: My Ability to Upgrade Is Unlimited

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The hanging design is good, but not perfect enough. For example, the wooden house is one life, two lives. The protagonist never thought of trying two lives three (even if there are restrictions, you should try it to let readers see what the restrictions are). In addition, the plot design is very ordinary and there is no problem, but this is the biggest problem.

The author said there is no outline. Have you considered the main plot of this book? It is not the main line of survival, but the main line of this survival game. In other words, if this survival game is really a game, then it must have an upgrade line. Whether it is the external survival difficulty or the upgrade of the internal player's personal ability, there must be such a line If it is just to simply write and improve the shelter. Then there may be nothing left to write if you write a hundred chapters And I personally feel that the most important thing in writing this kind of survival novel is to plan the difficulty of the living environment. First of all, the protagonist has a golden finger. The difficulty reflected in the protagonist is simple (there may be environmental factors and the like that cause some difficulties for the protagonist, but the overall difficulty must be simple) Then there are other people. The overall difficulty must be difficult, otherwise it would not be called survival, but those who are lucky People who have the ability to survive in the wild, people with strong fighting ability, the difficulty of survival for these people can be to maintain food and clothing As for those normal people (with ordinary luck, no fighting ability, no skills, and not strong hands-on ability), they are barely able to maintain their lives (survival rate is 50%?) Only in this way can it be called a survival game. If it is too simple, it is really a game. If it is too difficult, it is pure murder. And I personally feel that the problem of food and clothing can only appear in the early stage of survival novels. In the later stage, it is time to change to other survival problems, because those who cannot solve the problem of food and clothing are dead in the early stage As a digression, I have read a survival novel before. The protagonist in the starting territory has to find the core to activate by himself. It seems that the core must be killed by monsters or obtained from treasure chests. However, the probability of getting it is not 100%. Then some places where players land are still in an environment of minus one to twenty degrees. This is not a survival game at all. This is purely a game of luck. If you have bad luck at the beginning, you will die.