Douluo Peerless: Helping Little Huo Niang to Ascend Mechanically

Little Huo Niang

My evaluation is that the author's level is difficult to control the setting.

For the battle armor, you can refer to the nano core.

Has the author considered making a side story where Huo Niang turns black because the protagonist dies?🙂 Destiny Child turns black, it's exciting just thinking about it

The author's book should be at least 1 million words.

Little Huo Niang

Congratulations on finding the treasure😍😍😍😍😍😍

Alas, I was reading a book in the middle of the night and found that I almost conflicted with the settings of my brother. It is also Xiao Huo Niang. However, the current idea is not to have a single female protagonist. Let Xiao Huo Niang take the path of psychic mechanical ascension. I hope not to be accused of plagiarism.

Since it is Huo Niangwen, we must pursue her

Why not let Yutong become Douluo Obito? The protagonist then leaves the Earth Reincarnation and the Sharingan behind and creates a spell collection similar to Jackie Chan's Adventures, which includes spells from the ninja world and other worlds.

It is not recommended for people with basic knowledge of firearms It is not recommended for people who have the ability to conceive of the visual sense It is not recommended for people who have a better understanding of the abilities of soul masters.

The heroine of the author must have Qiu'er. If you see it, please reply.

{"NickName":"Sharkirilang","UserId":378975061} It's been six months, why haven't you written a new book yet?

Dude, listen to my advice. There are really too few people with themes like yours. Don't be like other unfinished eunuchs in fan fiction. You must stick to it.

Do you want to join the fight against Double Pamish's Glorious Marcher?

{"NickName":"Sharakahiro","UserId":378975061} It can only be said that it is a pity. When will the author open a new book? If he opens a new book, there should be more female protagonists. It is best to be like other fans. The protagonists are all the ones who have just started to awaken the martial arts and then directly practice the martial arts. They take all the opportunities they should have. There is no need to leave everything to Lao Huo. He can change his gender to grow old. Damn, but don't write it as licking. You can go and read those two books called Peerless Tang Sect: Undead and Peerless Tang Sect: Sun. The first book is a pure nanny, but the second book is the opposite of what was promised, and the result is double licking, licking Huo Yuhao and licking Meng Hongchen. The author is also capable. He wrote a lot of dog food plots and was scolded by a large group of people in QQ. If you open a new book, we will write it happily 😁

I beg you, the author, please don't be a eunuch. I finally found a fanfic with an interesting setting.

Author, please don't be led astray by that guy in the comment section.

Little Huo Niang

It's pretty good. Although the protagonist's setting is a bit cliche in the early novels, the original plot is quite interesting, but the age gap between the protagonist and Yuhao is almost ten years. I'm currently reading 14 chapters and I don't know how to write it after keeping up with the rhythm of the original. I like the protagonist's background experience and personality. Overall, it's the most satisfying work I've seen since watching Dou 2, but it's a bit short. I feel that with the author's ability to create original plots, it's perfectly fine to write 3,400 chapters. Maybe he has lost his enthusiasm? This is a great start

The style of this book is very unique and unusual. I like it very much. I like it very much.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Question: The Holy Spirit Church will not go offline. I hope it will. After all, the Holy Spirit Church can hardly do anything with personnel.

I like this book so much, it's like an if line woo hoo

Fully ordered😆😆😆😆😆

I want to see the blackened Huo Yutong. 😍

Some settings are very subtle, such as a panacea that can make mechanical products out of the void and a mecha-powered soul-killing saint? The panacea may be something from which work that the author used, which I can't understand. The technology-side mecha is considered the author's second design, and with Zhang's Douluo basic setting full of mistakes, it can barely come to terms with it. Then there is the classic writing problem of new authors. When I read a book, I usually read the first six chapters to see the general background setting, the characterization of the protagonist, and the author's writing skills. The author's setting of the protagonist's character is very novel, but it is obvious that the writing power is not enough to control it. The first six chapters are like a brief summary. Instead of portraying the protagonist's character, he basically explains the protagonist's abilities and background. What's more troublesome is that the background of the protagonist is not outstanding among Douluo fans. After reading the first six chapters, I have no clear idea of ​​the protagonist's personality. I personally think this is putting the cart before the horse. Finally, there is the author's writing habit, one paragraph per sentence, without periods, which is very recognizable in a sense 🤭. Although it is an online novel, you should pay more attention to this basic punctuation standard.

Douluo, when Tang Wulin meets Little Huo Niang?