I Dug an Abyss in My Backyard

I have read Chapter 3. This kind of subject matter is quite interesting, but the opening is too scattered and not very logical. Why continue after you have already called the police? There is also a problem with the description of the underground environment. After reading it for a long time, I only remembered the big mushroom and nothing else came to my mind.

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The writing is very loose, but I still suggest the author to work hard on writing, at least take a break. Take your time to feel the problem. If you love or want to make money with this.

First! ! ! ! The introduction looks good, but I don't know what genre it is. The hope is that everyone can explore various items and professions, and the protagonist can slowly develop through the golden fingers in the backyard.

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The subject matter is novel, keep up the hard work and look forward to the follow-up

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!