American Comics: Arkham Begins, System Batman

The writing is very good, and I am very familiar with Gotham. It looks like it was written by Batman himself.

In fact, the protagonist can be more Batman than the newly minted Batman, because there is a real Batman beside him. I looked at these recent pictures, maybe they are slower. Batman Mentor rarely shows up. And you haven't reached the climax of the plot yet, you are still living in a daily routine. Although I can watch it, I don't have that much desire to continue watching it. Based on your theme, I mainly want to see Batman's mentor help the protagonist grow, and then have some interaction with the newly minted Batman in the middle. After reading this book, the most comfortable part for me was when Batman possessed him and then used Batman's fighting skills to beat up the villain. I still have a little bit of imagination about catching Bruce Wayne later, and I thought you would write like this. It's the mentor who lets you know the location of the Batcave, and then you put on the Bat suit and show up to save Bruce Wayne. Separate the two of them by the way, and then make Batman look confused. Although I don't know how to round the back, I think it's quite interesting.

It can be seen that the author really wanted to write this story well. But as an online novel with an infinite flow and a multi-universe world view, it actually needs a charming and stand-up protagonist as the core axis. Even if you travel through parallel worlds and come into contact with various superheroes and villains, the protagonist should be the fulcrum to connect all plots, allowing readers to have a stable perspective and grasp the internal logic of the story. You need to have a charismatic and strong protagonist as the core to tie these stories together. In this way, readers who project their main perspective on the protagonist can naturally feel the inner meaning of the story. Although it has been fully determined so far, seeing the copy of Buyi Chao was like a dream, and I can no longer watch it. When the story was limited to the original world before, because there were not many characters, it was not obvious, but in fact, this trend was already there at that time. It's not that you can't write group portraits, or that group portraits are bad, it's just that even if you write group portraits, you still need a protagonist who is independent enough to participate. At the very least, you must be a participant, not a bystander, let alone a camera. Once the map gets bigger, all kinds of characters pop up like mushrooms after a spring rain, and the author cannot perfectly adjust their relationship. It is the importance of such elements in the story that leads to the whole story, the protagonist basically has no sense of existence as a camera. I'm not saying that I want to watch the kind of protagonist Long Aotian who kills gods and Buddhas, but you have presented such a powerful clown, so shouldn't there also be a positive character who can rival him? Otherwise, it will inevitably appear chaotic and helpless. After falling into the Pond of Dionysus, traveling through the world should obviously be a breaking point, but the author created a feeling of walking around before death, and suddenly came to the world of Injustice. There should have been a smoother connection here. As a result, the whole article is filled with psychological activities of various characters and inexplicable descriptions of the environment. Because readers lack a perspective that they can substitute into, it will lead readers to think that the protagonist does not receive the treatment he deserves here. Not only does the protagonist have no template for his own superhero, he also doesn't know what his goal is. Without his uniform, all he can think of is glasses, a cloak, and a mask. So what does the protagonist wear to fight? What are you wearing underneath? Is the protagonist constantly fighting with others? Even his hero code name Z only appears a few times. As I read it, the biggest feeling I feel is confusion, chaos and helplessness. Both the protagonist and the story are swaying without roots, just like duckweeds floating on the water. I write so much just to put forward some personal opinions and suggestions. There is no malice. I sincerely hope that the author can adjust the rhythm, strengthen the protagonist's creation in the future, and write the story better and better.

Will there be a female protagonist? Single and more than nothing? , I don't really like American comic novels where the main character doesn't have a woman but all the male supporting characters have official supporting roles.

I read it patiently. One of the reasons is that the protagonist, a disciple of Batman, has too little bat element, and there is no guidance. The mission system also has no sense of existence. As for rewards, the rewards that make no sense are quite interesting. Then the main character has come and gone for so many chapters, and has always been a foil, with no fighting scenes at all. Although the writing is very detailed, the details are all about daily life. In my impression, he only beat me twice, once in a mental hospital, and the second time when he beat the company boss. I have read a lot of American comic novels, and your subject matter is actually quite interesting. The ones I mentioned above are actually not that important when there are a lot of words or when there are explosive points. For example, when I first started reading, there were many chapters.

I have a full understanding of the original work, and that's not the case. This is the highest praise I can give as a fan of the original work. All in all, non-toxic and recommended.

Come on, it's good to watch. The protagonist's behavior is a bit like that of Lao Ma. He brings hope to people or things that were originally hopeless. He has upright views and conscience. It's very good to watch.

I actually quite like this article. It can be seen that the author has carefully read the original comic instead of Chun Yun. What a pity, one is that the update is too slow, and the other is that your protagonist has no core goals, no pursuit, no motivation, daily life is not daily life, and getting stronger does not make him stronger, no I know what the protagonist is going to do next, and I feel the same way when writing it So it's not surprising that it's unfinished now. I used to feel that the situation was not good when I followed the update every day and found that there was no reply for the whole chapter Sure enough, alas, it's a pity

So, is there a Batman in Gotham where the protagonist is now?

I've seen enough of the daily routine, let's quickly get into the plot. Too bland

Brother, I'm afraid you'll be cool. You should have a small orgasm or a full explosion before putting it on the shelves. I no longer had any desire to pursue it. The 8 chapters on the shelves have wiped away all my desire to pursue it. I can read the four or so photos on the shelf sentence by sentence, but I can skip the next few photos. Then the scarecrow came out, and I had to scroll forward to understand his causes and consequences, which made me not want to read anymore. The subject matter and writing are quite good, but I don't have the desire to continue reading.

You might as well take a day off to compile some manuscripts and adjust the updates, otherwise no one will read it.

It's a very interesting DC fanfic so far, no OOC at all, highly recommended! ! ! Will order if it's on the shelves

The little update has made my grades worse. I have saved more than 20 chapters since the end of last year.

Okay, okay, another high-quality DC novel

The writing is very smooth, the writing style is good, and the plot is smooth. Although it is only 90,000 words, there is nothing I dislike after reading it.

It looks good, and the plot is very clever. It uses the system to connect the protagonist with the parallel universe he lives in to enhance his abilities. However, the wonderful items the protagonist gets are a bit too random, which requires more plot. After all, the protagonist's combat ability is very fascinating.

Superman's medicine is also too useless. It feels like the protagonist has finished taking it and his values ​​are not as good as Captain America's.

How's it going? After it was released, I read Chapter 14 and the plot was very bland. What about the rest? Is the protagonist's bat smell coming out?

The author should adjust the update time.

It looks great, but it's not easy to find the original character.

It looks good. The author takes good care of his health and will update slowly.

The pressure is a bit harsh. The double superposition of Superman potion and Killer Crocodile's physique makes me feel so weak.

In fact, I quite like the rhythm and content of this book. It has a good ending, not an anticlimax. I hope the author will continue to work hard and open a new book. I hope you will continue to support me.

🤔Is it over? Looking forward to the author's new book, I really like it

Looking forward to the next book, the subject matter is really good.

The tasting is over, and it feels a bit unfinished. The follow-up to Injustice World has not been explained, and the main world has also been completed in a hurry.