Swallowing the Starry Sky: Starting from the Great Nirvana

The writing is very good, but later on I decided to become a licking dog, already at the level of a planet, and even went to live with Luo Feng's parents as neighbors.

If you want to be funny and genius, don't come to Mahanirvana Why do readers want to see Mahanirvana? It must be for the sake of civilization that will fall and martyrs shed their blood If you want a genius to travel through the past, the soldiers will become clowns, the warriors will become clowns, the readers will become clowns, and the author will also become a clown If you want a funny genius, change the timeline

Has the author not read the original work? Isn't Isadore the Speaker of the HR Alliance? When did you become a powerful member of parliament? ? 🥵

It's not that you can't lick Luo Feng, after all, Luo Feng is a really nice person. But this protagonist is completely a nanny. She is really afraid of melting if she holds it in her mouth.

Don't start making points when practicing writing, it's a waste of everyone's time. . . Just show it to your relatives and friends.

The plot is no different from the original work, the writing is sparse, and the fighting scenes are too stretched.

I really can't stand it anymore, such a self-righteous and boring mastermind!

When writing about Maha Nirvana, write about Maha Nirvana carefully. After writing only a few chapters of Maha Nirvana, you will write about Luo Feng's connection with the universe. It's because there is no material for Maha Nirvana or there is no way to edit it.

It's useless for you, the protagonist, to be reborn so early. You just practice killing monsters. How will it change the world situation? You might as well be the same age as Luo Feng.

There is no cure for ideological problems. For example, hating the ZF is problematic in the first place, but changing it is even more problematic. Goodbye.

The identification is complete, the author has not read the original work

Nirvana or nirvana, which one is right?

Low-key development, currently unable to compare with Lei and Hong,

I looked at the book title and introduction. The book chapters are not listed in the comment section. Hmm, it's a good book.

I haven't spent the time or energy to read it, but I will know if this book is worth reading after reading the discussion forum. This dog-licking nanny article is straightforward🔪🔪🔪

Write the outline and let AI polish it. Very poorly described

Recommend a fan novel "The Eternal God Brain of the Swallowing Star Sky" [Single heroine·Ai Chen] The protagonist travels through the Swallowing Star Sky and obtains the Eternal God Brain. The Eternal God Brain can integrate all things and turn into its own clone. It has its own innate abilities and can evolve infinitely! Integrate with computers, gain computing talent, and evolve into the most powerful brain in the universe, capable of performing calculations tens of trillions of times in an instant. Integrate the immortal-class spacecraft of the mechanical race, obtain the talent of mechanical creation, follow the path of mechanical style, and create mechanical treasures that are better than those of mountain riders. Integrate with the Zerg Mother Queen, gain the talent of genetic analysis, and integrate various powerful bloodline genes in the universe to create a perfect divine body. ...................... Zerg: Damn it, how did this human Li Xin create warriors that were so much stronger than my Zerg? Mechanical Tribe: We are the worst off. Originally, we had the most advanced technology in the universe, but now human technology is even stronger than our Mechanical Tribe! Yaozu: Let's not talk about other things first. Why is the gene multiplier of human beings now higher than that of our royal family? Human: We don't know these questions of yours, you can ask him yourself. Each alien tribe: We sent people to ask, but every tribe member who went to ask died and could not even be resurrected! Li Xin: Why didn't I find anyone asking me?

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Basically, those who hold guns are cool. Long weapons and heavy weapons are only used by supporting characters.

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