Immortal Cauldron Immortality

The author must be mentally prepared. Since there is no plot in the early stages of this kind of traditional immortality novel, and there is no eye-catching highlight at the beginning, the early results of the book are destined to be poor, and the book needs to slowly work up the word count. Personally, I feel that if I stick to it, I can achieve certain results. I haven't found any problems with the quality of the article, so I'll continue to look at it. The author should also have creative experience.

Do you have to create your own cultivation realm system? Isn't it better to focus on the plot and character creation?

In addition, the portrayal of the protagonist feels like a native (mainly in response to various events), rather than a time traveler (a bit clumsy and clumsy, a typical example is Han Li, which is definitely not likable now, but then again, if you click on it to start this kind of story, you should be able to accept it). Most of the time-traveling protagonists in the current starting point are super rational and intelligent, almost inhuman.

It's too much of a risk. You can obviously escape safely, so why bother caring about other people's external possessions and what kind of skills you don't have when you enter the inner door.

Yao Lang's body is like a jade tripod, with medicinal fragrance. It can be used for cultivation and breakthroughs. It is a rare elixir in the world of cultivation. Sects often give it to female golden elixir cultivators from other sects as gifts to build connections. There are also a small amount of it circulating in the black market, which is very popular. The contribution points obtained by Yin Ji when completing sect tasks can be called "floating capital" and are used to supplement expenses. 😁

The chapters so far look good, keep it up! ! !

In an ancient setting, it is best not to use modern adjectives. Regardless of the plot, you will appear to be a reliable person. Falling off a 100-meter cliff and climbing more than 40 meters. It happened twice in just half a chapter. It was really unbearable.

In some respects, I still prefer bad women and bad women. There is no need to worry about any emotional entanglements when getting along. It is purely an exchange of interests. As long as the interests are consistent, we can work together without being secretive. We can get along with each other neatly and without any sloppiness. There are no twists and turns of emotional entanglement, it is joyful and joyful, it is really free and comfortable. In comparison, the innocent heroine who is beautiful and kind-hearted, or the holy immortal who is unattainable and untainted by the mortal world, these are a bit off-putting to be honest. I can only look at it, but I can't eat it. To be honest, even if I eat it, it doesn't taste very good. Between the unattainable saint and celestial being with a peerless appearance, and the second-rate evil viper with a second-rate appearance, I choose the latter.

It's very well written. Come on, I'll order everything once it's on the shelves.

Isn't there a lot of space in Xianding? Regardless of whether the mysterious liquid is useful or not, just put it into the space and study it slowly later. Like a fool, he did nothing but squatted for those few hours. The same goes for the crystal sand. There is no need to pick and choose carefully. The efficiency is a bit too low. The key is a waste of time. Collect them all in the space, return to the cave and slowly pass them through the sieve. (I came up with an idea, just put a wind spell, whether it is grass, stone, earth or wood, directly sweep it all into a pile of earth and mountains, and then use a fire spell. Everything that cannot be burned is good stuff, and then put it into the immortal space. This is efficient, and you have to pick the crystal sand one by one with your fingers. Immortal cultivators don't have this time. Isn't it valuable? ) There are still some functions of space that have not been fully utilized. For example, if you put a few boulders in the space, you can take them out as a defensive shield at critical times. You can also use them to hit people when necessary. The materials are cheap and easy to use. You win by quantity. I don't believe that a low-level monk can bear it.

Don't be conservative, you have to destroy the Lu family with overwhelming force. It's boring to see how the immortal industry can crush the same family.

"Kun Yin Jue" is too careless. Take a look at Dao Zhengfeng's earthy Xuan Gong "Kun Yu Mochen Gong", and Xian Ye's earthy Xuan Gong "Bao Guang Xian Miao Zhen Jing" and "Kun and Bao Lu". Be careful with the name of the exercise

I feel that the writing is quite good. There are not many people following it in the early stage. Maybe some people cannot accept the new cultivation system. If you can stick to reading it, it actually feels like nothing. It is nothing more than replacing Qi refining, foundation building, and golden elixir with Jing Yuan, Qi Evolution, Shen Cun, and golden elixir. Some of the elixirs that break through the realm and increase cultivation are replaced by a kind of Taoist treasure of heaven and earth.

It would be better to directly change it to indigenous

The author has ordered more or less. The traditional fairy tale has a small number of words in the early stage and it is difficult. The content is not bad. Keep at it.

I can't stand it anymore. If you are Long Aotian, I won't say anything. You say I want to keep it secret, but in fact you are a fool. It's not dangerous to let others designate where to send it. I won't say anything if I can't refuse. I've obviously completed the sect's mission and it's superfluous to assign me. And since I'm very strong, I'm going to show off. Treat the protagonist as a fool to advance the plot.

The character of the protagonist is indeed selfish and ruthless. Most people would never be able to kill an auspicious beast with their own hands.

Is there a female protagonist? If there is no heroine, I won't watch it.

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In the first realm, you learn to draw talismans, learn formations, and learn to make alchemy, and then your qualifications are not good, will your life be enough?

Spiritual energy, spiritual power, Jingyuan, what on earth are they used? It's all messy and changing.

Before I started practicing, I said it was too difficult and I would never reach the third level in this life.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

How to say it! It feels very strange. If the plot can be optimized, I can barely watch it! (It's not the fantasy dragon Aotian, why write it like this)