Across the Heavens, Starting by Fighting Out of Training Camp

The description of the fighting is not very attractive. I suggest you watch the movie commentary of Station B's Martial Arts Apprentice.

It's hopeless. Now I can no longer write about many topics, and I can't read them anymore. I once read a book with a very exciting fighting plot. After defending domestically, I beat up a small G. His BB was a high G, and he was convicted by his uncle. He ran all the way, battled wits and courage, and then met in a narrow road and KOed several of them. Finally, I wrote that I got F when I was approaching the border 😭

I'm going to test the poison, and I'll let you know after I try it.

I've never seen the first world, so I didn't feel immersed in it.

No wonder not many people read it. Who will read the three series you wrote? 😅 Even if it doesn't make you feel involved at all, the description is not good, the copy is completely disconnected from the real world, and the sense of separation is too strong

Is anyone reading this book? It's really poorly written. This is my first time writing a novel. I may not be able to depict some fighting scenes. If you know how, you can teach me. Or if you see a novel similar to fighting, recommend it so that I can learn from it.

The author has made a lot of progress and is much better than this one. I hope everyone will support it.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

Will you continue to do quest worlds? Not written in reality? ? ?

It's not easy. It turns out that there are still people reading the book.