Science Students Practice Taoism

This is my first novel, and I got the idea to write it after reading it a lot. If you think the writing is good, please leave comments. Even if you criticize me, you can feel the attention of readers! Thank you everyone!

What you write, the author, is about using scientific thinking to practice cultivation. What are you doing in the first few chapters? Your previous pictures are not at all consistent with your introduction to the topic. It is also mixed with coveting beauty, the lower body really controls the brain.

Like the title, In the first few chapters, some people may think that the protagonist is too detached when facing the dilemma of death, like an outsider, but there is an explanation later. I think this explanation is quite reasonable and self-consistent Others, the writing is smooth and the plot arrangement is reasonable. But I have only read nine chapters so far. As long as it doesn't collapse, let's start with food and grass.

What kind of writing is this? The plot is cliche and borderline. The protagonist is just a bastard. How could there be so much delay 🙂? It's tacky to keep people under the sword 😅

The content is good, but the formatting and sentence fragmentation problems are very big, which greatly affects the reading experience. Determine whether it is immortality or fantasy There is no system in these two categories, and the early plot progress is very slow. A self-rescue takes seven or eight chapters. Very few people are willing to read so much in a layout like yours. The story of the book I signed last month was not as interesting as yours. Adjust it. Come on, according to the previous level of writing style, as long as the writing power is not broken, at least it will be high-quality!