Hybrid Planting Xiu Xian Road

Seeing that there are 118 chapters, I am happy to add it to my bookshelf. After reading the first chapter, this sister-in-law immediately persuaded me to quit. Doesn't the author have any ideas of his own? In today's Xiuxian style, most authors are unable to write a supporting female character, but they have to arrange a vase, either a wife or a sister who needs to be taken care of. As soon as you look at the dialogue and description, you can tell what kind of supporting character it is. Everyone is thoughtful. You might as well arrange a beautiful full-time nanny doll for the protagonist, and it will not be so alienating.

The first picture is very poisonous... A virgin cultivator from a cultivating family. What does this female cultivator like about the male protagonist? Taking a step back, what did this female cultivator see in his ex? If it makes you sing and cry, you won't immediately be in love with the new and dislike the old. For example, the author's mother, Miss Qianjin, fell in love with the speedster Huang Mao, and then Huang Mao died in a car accident. A motorcycle repairman's grandmother who worked in a motorcycle shop became the author's father... May I ask what about this motorcycle repair moved the author's mother?

The next door is stocking up on guns and I am stocking up on food. I am the granary next door.

Let's talk about the biggest problem. Starting from Chapter 25, there are more and more typos and incorrect sentences. Didn't the author just proofread it after finishing the writing? I really can't stand it anymore, I can't even catch the insects, so I give up and say goodbye.

I thought I was following the farming stream, but in the end I was still the same aggressive and ruthless person, just wearing the skin of the farming stream.

Is this misspelled sentence a voice input?

I haven't even finished the first chapter. There are too many inverted sentences and the sentences are not smooth to read. I gave up on the small part to get a glimpse of the big picture.

The writing is a bit off, but the ideas are okay.

I didn't read it. Didn't Shen Miao fly a mecha? When did she go farming? 🙂

After I finished writing, I used the app to look at it. There were too many commas. In addition, it is popular nowadays to divide it into paragraphs, but it is not the way you divide it. The key point is that coupled with your ancient writing style, it is really different, like a primary school student who has just learned the alphabet.