Douluo: You Evil Soul Master, Charity King, What the Hell?

The previous article is quite good. Although it follows the route of the Holy Spirit Cult, it is not like the Great Love Immortal Master. I really don't accept the route of the Great Love Immortal Master of the Holy Spirit Cult next door 🤐 But when I saw the chapters before it was put on the shelf, I felt that there were some problems. , It feels like the author deliberately downplays the aspect of martial souls and soul rings, but in fact, when writing about Douluo fans, martial souls, soul rings, and soul bones, I believe this should be the most enjoyable part for most people. In the free chapter, the origins of the protagonist's several soul rings and soul skills are not explained clearly. Especially after I met Tianmeng and entered the main plot, it became even more confusing. I believe that there are many people like me who didn't understand where Tianmeng was attached when they first watched it. At first, I thought that the protagonist majored in the Blood Eye Martial Arts, but a few chapters before meeting Tianmeng, it just happened to be written that the protagonist uses the five-ring (purple, purple, black, black) Sun Martial Spirit to fight in the game, so I thought the protagonist majored in the sun. Later I found out that what the author meant was that the sun had five rings attached to it, four rings to the blood pupil, and then Tianmeng had the fifth ring to the blood pupil, which is (purple, purple, black and white) My first reaction was "Huh?, Two martial soul fellow practitioners...", They are all written by Douluo fans, so it is better to explain the martial soul, soul, ring and soul skills clearly. Point😥 But the author did not hold back on the emotional line. At least the female character did not fall in love with Shi Lezhi after meeting her, and she only had her own ideas on soul guidance technology. If she could write better about martial arts, she could learn from the book next door about Holy Spirit Teaching or Angel Glory and it would be the same as fairy grass. Come on, author 🙂

To be honest, I really can't understand Chapter 145. Tang San's self-destruction situation was released without any treatment. I don't understand why it wasn't dealt with. It felt very abrupt. Although he turned 11 years old, it's not like Tang Ya didn't understand. Tang San even called him Senior Sister, and Tang Wen also acknowledged it, but just letting him go without dealing with it was disgusting. He couldn't understand it. He dealt with the soul fragments in the auspicious beast very quickly. This really means that Tang San didn't kill, torture, or curse, and just let him go. This is what he planned to do.

Well done

The evil soul master must ultimately put people first and use them for their own purposes.

I think the best and most affordable good deed for Dou Er is to awaken the martial soul for free.

I suggest changing the title of the book. I saw this title and persuaded me to read it four or five times. I didn't open it until the book shortage forced me to read it 🤔

The title of this book is so misleading. If it weren't for the book shortage, I wouldn't have clicked in to read it. It's a good Douluo fan, at least it's much better than one written by elementary school students!

Which martial soul does the protagonist attach a soul ring to? I have used Taiyang's martial soul, five soul rings, and soul skills before. Now Tianmeng has attached a fifth soul ring to Xue Tong. If both martial souls are attached with purple, purple, black, black, and purple, purple, black, and gold, isn't that just stupid?

Well, don't pair Tianmeng and Ice Emperor. In the main original work, Tianmeng is a bit disgusting (Qiankun Wenqinggu rapes Ice Emperor). It's so disgusting that the natural enemies get together.

What kind of trash is this protagonist? The 11-year-old plug-in directly rewards the level, and the task is so simple, it is only 30. According to the capabilities of this system, I am not surprised that an 11-year-old can reach level 60, but the result is only level 30. What pure waste?

As long as you don't give away your daughter, your grades won't be too bad no matter how you write them. Giving away girls is the biggest poisonous point in fan fiction. Especially in recent years, there have been too many films with only one female protagonist. The author must believe that there are still many normal men. ()

If you don't want a female protagonist, don't want a female protagonist. If such a protagonist also has a female protagonist, it would be too embarrassing.

Like the title, what about the main plot? What about the Sun and Moon Empire? Where is the throne? Isn't the main line an all-junior line? The more I write, the more biased I get. The ones at the beginning are okay. I accept the slow pace. But what do you mean the more you write, the more biased you get?

No, the protagonist has provoked Shrek so much, and the author actually plans to arrange for the protagonist to go to Shrek? The so-called knowledge of martial arts won the war, isn't it yours? Just like the Wuhun Palace, otherwise where does the author think the Shrek collection from ten thousand years ago came from?

The name is terrible and misleading. I suggest you change the name. Also, there are too few updates every day. Please update more.

The protagonist is a good loser, but he has a system, and both martial souls have soul rings attached to them. You can only reach level 30 when you are 11 years old, and you can become a soul king only when you are fourteen years old. Each soul ring is absorbed beyond the age limit, and one of the normal cycles is level one. The protagonist's is a two-level one. 9 Soul rings can provide at least 18 levels of soul power. Including innate soul power, the total is 28 levels. In the beginning, helping a little girl find a cat can increase the level by 0.5. So even if the main reward of this system is about soul guides, it will not be given to you in 8 years. Provided level 8 soul power, then there will be level 36 soul power, which is not obtained by your cultivation, plus some pills to assist, so the protagonist has only cultivated about level 15 soul power in the past eight years Tang San is 14 years old and 44th level soul sect, (the fairy grass he eats only slightly improved his soul power, more It is to increase the physique, about two levels) (Tang San obtained the first soul ring and reached level 13 or 14. I forget, but he was able to achieve such a high soul power because he had been practicing Xuantian Kung even though he had bottlenecks before. Although he did not obtain the soul ring, his soul power kept increasing) Then Excluding Tang San's four soul rings and the fairy grass, the soul power increased does not exceed level 8 and level 10 innate soul power. Tang San has cultivated level 26 soul power in eight years The protagonist and Tang San are 10 levels apart (although it is more difficult to practice later). This does not include the fact that Dou Er is easier to cultivate than Dou I in the early stage.

The first chapter gave me the feeling that the protagonist is a waste. The protagonist is rewarded with 0.5 Level soul power for completing a task of finding a cat. It turns out that the twin martial arts are only level 30 at the age of 11. Upgrading Dou 2 is easier than Dou 1. Is this the case with a system?

To put it bluntly, I laughed at the sentence about eliminating aristocratic dictatorship in the introduction. Can a soul master who has embarked on the path of evolution still be no match for ordinary people in political struggles? Moreover, political struggle itself requires a strong focus on oneself or a strong enough backing. Otherwise, it will be difficult if others do not support you and you are not convinced by the public. For example, when a soul master can easily crush his boss to death, he can be more afraid of the other person than willing to accept him. And when a conflict occurs, the pressure of soul power can make the boss tired of dealing with it, so what can you expect. Moreover, soul masters have all-round advantages over ordinary people. Does it matter whether a soul master is a noble?

The plot is a bit awkward... The writing is so-so... I can only say that it's food -

Xu Cheng

I'm checking the information and writing a book. I said that the Sun and Moon Empire has a level 10 soul guide. That's where it comes from. The logic is too confusing.

I used too much force in the early stage of shaping, and Tang Ya's part of the plot looked a bit awkward.

Honestly, after watching so many Douluo games, there are very few protagonists who simply do what they say and have to make some calculations. The protagonist needs a background and strength, and yet there are so many calculations. Now Zhang Lexuan is doing it like this. It's really boring. Douluo has unparalleled talent. The protagonist with extraordinary talent simply wants to grab Yuhao and go to the Sun and Moon Empire to grab him directly. He himself also said that there is no difference between him and Tang San with so many calculations. However, the protagonist here is also the prince. It feels like playing house. Does the protagonist still feel that he is weak? Previously, I went out with my girl just to play, not afraid of anything happening.

The new book is about to set sail, please give me a follow-up reading!

Encourage the evil spirits to follow their good deeds? Do you think Dufan won't need to take bullets if he does a few good deeds?

I'd better choose Ice Emperor as my soul. Nothing new

After reading Chapter 182, I suddenly came back to my senses. Why did Tang San treat others as pigs, dogs, and slaves? Because he is a slave himself. For example, if his father is not good to him, he will also treat him well. If the teacher does something wrong, he will also defend the teacher, saying that he respects the teacher, but his behavior is obviously a slave's flattery to his master! It is precisely because of this that after he became a master, he would enslave others! Because this is his worldview and his concept!

Wait, wait, wait

Meng Hongchen

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