I Asked You to Make a Copy. Are You Going to Make a Copy of the Chinese Succubus?

This introduction reminds me of the last disaster of becoming an immortal.

The author completely exaggerates the characters in history. People in history are ordinary people without extraordinary powers. Of course, strategy can play a big role. But this is not the case in the extraordinary era. Under absolute power, conspiracy and tricks are useless. Also, ordinary people who become heroic spirits have very powerful extraordinary powers, which is too speechless. Then the original gods and gods are not as good as the people in history.

1. The author's cultural background is not good 2. There are various bad jokes interspersed in the article, and there are more jokes than the article 3. The world is poorly created, and the characters are poorly created 4. The writing has poor connection and transitions 5. The storyline is like a child talking in his sleep 6. Even if it is read as a bad article, he will not feel happy Be careful when reading, or you may be poisoned.

The subject matter is 100 points, but... Alas! Disappointed😔

What rubbish. Everyone came here just to see your gimmick. You still have to slowly make this copy, integrate FGO, and write about novice reality. I just wanted to have a good time watching it, why should I drag on the rhythm?

What nonsense is written here? The Prime Minister called himself Shuhan. The Prime Minister is about to die and is still in a funny mood. It can be outrageous, but not this outrageous.

It doesn't matter that I picked a topic that was hotly reviewed on the Internet and wrote about it. Unfortunately, the writing style and setting are not very sustainable. It is not exciting enough, and it is not immersive enough.

The idea is good, but the writing wastes such good material. I only write a little in one copy, but then jumps to another copy. What is presented is fragmented and the writing is messy. Everyone who comes in wants to read the copy, but as a result, you don't write the copy very much. Before you start writing one copy, you change it to another one.

Alas, the subject matter of the introduction is very good, but I feel that if you can't write half of it, it may be lost. That is the sun of New China. I really want to see if you, the author, can jump directly to Jianguo.

What on earth are you writing? It's a mess. One sentence to the east and one sentence to the west. Write a sentence that comes to mind. After you finish writing, don't you even read it yourself? The preface does not follow the sequel. It seems like there are more than ten chapters missing between the previous chapter and the next one. It's so chaotic that it's hard to watch.

Old friends, don't keep reading and click on it to catch up. Today and tomorrow, let's test the waters😫😫😫😫

A novel created based on a short essay, a short sentence Write according to the standard of catering. Only if you can write well can you be successful.

First of all, the general background is the high martial arts mode in the troubled times of demons and monsters, and there is a popular plug-in heroic spirit mode. But the current ones are just like urban leisure flow, and the rewards are not only available in the current copy, but in the whole background? Why not simply click on the entire Shu Han dungeon: dedicated to the stories of the Shu Han, the Eastern Han dungeon: various stories throughout the Eastern Han period, etc. The main line also says that you need to ensure your own safety. Just specify a passive: immune to damage, or invincible. That's enough, and there is no systematic protection! And since I have fixed my base camp, shouldn't I be the biggest in the base camp? Especially when you have to charge a manual counter to enter the copy? One or two is fine. From now on, it's basically the same as an online game. But if there are thousands of them, can you stand in a room? Or do you want to go to the square? So it's best to use games. Even if you open an antique store, it would be great to use the antique as an entry point like a gaming helmet! I have so many questions right now! I hope the author can see it. Is there any chance of patching these problems?

What Gouba's writing style is so bad, the writing is unclear and I can't stand it at all.

No way, it's too poisonous. It gives me a headache.

Take a look at the article, why don't you go there? Your style is suitable for that place. It's a subscription system. No one will read what you write like this.

The subject matter is okay, I guess it all comes in along with the introduction. There are a lot of bad sentences in the book, and they won't be changed even after I say them. It's not that I don't let you play tricks, but the way you play them is too embarrassing. The rhythm of writing this kind of article must be controlled well. What do you want to do by writing at a faster and slower pace? Shuangwen lets you write it as a novice, go and settle down.

There has been no update for five days. Is this because I just added the bookshelf and stopped updating? Slip away, gone away

It is recommended that you practice your writing on Tomato first and then come here.

I think it was written by AI, there are a lot of typos, and I didn't even make any corrections even though I mentioned it in the comments. The writing of "Three Visits to the Thatched Cottage" was embarrassing enough, and it also made jokes. It's okay to just copy and paste the original text.

This guy is not an ordinary Mi CCP. Not to mention other issues, just say that his painting style is abstract at one time (the divine gold Lu Bu is a man and a horse) (ten red rabbits = one horn), and at another time he has the protagonist pretend to be a master (a casual breath will make the entire imperial capital tremble). The painting style is very contradictory, making people seriously doubt whether the same person is writing this book.

I want you to update. It's either raining or a typhoon.

I entered the palace before I even saw it

Water, too watery! I was excited after reading the introduction. Even though the reviews in the book review section were too bad, I wanted to read it. As a result,,, This is a vast ocean!

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

If I don't update it tomorrow, it will be taken off the bookshelf.