There's Something Not Quite Right About This Shooter!

The evaluation is that the author knows something, but not much You can watch and play, but you can't use your brain. Some common sense is wrong. For example, the author actually thinks that field dry food is delicious.

No, bro, the identity of the protagonist is a flaw. How do you write about it after graduation and joining the army? And I see that the first incident you described was about foreign troops. Are you planning to write it into a national-level game later? Then why don't you report it now? At least take the initiative. It will be very troublesome if you are discovered😡

Crisis management game🙂

It's so stupid. This setting of a bounty on the plunderer means that no matter where you go, you will be targeted. A team war game makes you play a lone ranger superman game. This makes a lot of sense. I'll regret it if I subscribe to it.

The protagonist does not show the background of the character, and even violates it. He might as well be a military fan.

It's not good. Some of the skills are too high. Whether it's forced control or dodging bullets, they are too frivolous. They are completely incompatible with the cruel reality and gravity brought by war. I can only say that it is quite good to watch without thinking.

The setting suddenly collapsed and subscriptions dropped like crazy.

You should tell the leader about your identity and background and what happened in reality. It would be interesting to write about the confrontation between the major factions Otherwise, it is just a game. Don't interfere with reality. Or change the year band or change the background to a foreign country or something else. The more you write like this, the worse it gets.

If the protagonist is an ordinary person, then forget it. Why don't the military cadets report it immediately?

Rather than saying that Su Chen is the protagonist in the author's mind, it would be better to say that Su Chen's skin and 02's heart are the most perfect protagonist in the author's mind. To me, a crooked butt means evil intentions.

I can't bring myself to think about this book at all.

If you are killed, you can be plundered. Then after the protagonist enters the game, he will inherit the title if he is killed in reality. There is no solution to this pitfall.

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Military students, will this kind of thing be reported to the country?

Fan Tianlei's pig teammates, the protagonist will become a martyr sooner or later, He Chenguang's father will be next

The game doesn't seem to be off-site, and there's no kryptonian feel. The game is not prohibited from playing outside the game. I didn't see it mentioned anywhere. If I missed it, please remind me. In this game, he has shown his power, he can create extraordinary people, and he can also affect reality. At the same time, the missions often involve big countries. There are many people in these big countries, and the players also have their own countries. Since Dongda is involved, other forces will join later. As a result, no one is on the sidelines. Using external forces to attack the opponent clearly only requires a phone call. For example, on the Palestinian-Israeli battlefield, the quick-thinking people just ordered artillery from outside to clear the ground. How much is artillery worth compared to extraordinary strength? Not to mention the Russian-Ukrainian battlefield, NATO can be affected. If these countries also participate, but do not help their own players on the sidelines, it is really unjustifiable. And the money for redeeming game skills is too little (based on the prices offered by players in the book forum). Is this an extraordinary power that can make people crazy? Even extending life is not impossible, so for those who are rich and powerful, they usually spend hundreds of millions on medical treatment, and progress is slow. Now there is obviously a more direct and more effective way. For those who are dying, it is difficult to understand that they spend all their worth, enter the hospital, and buy C-level skills to save their lives? I wonder how the author dealt with this?

The hook is too big, and the writing is a bit funny, and the hook is not very good in reality.

If the cadets do not report the matter, even if they report it later, the superiors will find out about the concealment. As well as the emergence of extraordinary abilities, I'm afraid it won't end with a few groups of human beasts fighting with cold weapons.

Yuan Hua

I don't feel that the protagonist is particularly special or outstanding. Even having a main character doesn't feel out of place.

Did the author forget about the protagonist's return?

The first of February

There are several points in this book that lead to the collapse. First, the power system is acquired too quickly and too strong. Second, the army is the group with the strongest organizational and execution capabilities, and the game does not show the advantages of the army. Third, there is relatively little written about the scalability of the game world. For example, adding various infinite flow, doomsday flow, monster flow, natural disaster flow dungeons, or adding dungeon (limited time or real) invasion links, etc. . .

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You kid, use DeepSeek to write the last few chapters, right?