Immortality Begins from Marrying Ning Zhongze

What's the matter, Laudno's martial arts skills are low at this time, but he doesn't kill him, and lets others follow him. Is it the protagonist who has lost his wits, or the author?

I hate things like "hope is an illusion" the most. I feel like I'm deceiving myself.

I've read about twenty chapters! Basically just playing with Lauderno! I met with a county magistrate and wrote two chapters.

The protagonist is like a clown, with a worrying IQ. He goes down the mountain to seek death. It's because Huashan is not big enough or it's complicated. How many chapters does one Lodno write? Psychotic, rubbish protagonist. He really wasn't worthy of carrying Yue Buqun's shoes.

Do you have to go down the mountain just for the sake of water? You still have Feng Qingyang on the mountain, and if the noise gets louder, there are still people to protect you. A few bastards outside can kill the protagonist. What kind of brain does this have to think about going down the mountain and wandering around?

The author wants to be new and different, but he doesn't have enough writing ability, so he might as well write honestly.

Why is it written in such a twisted way? Brother, what you write is a web article!

Didn't you say that the protagonist should go out and practice martial arts first? What about a sense of worry? Is it really good to have the protagonist jump up and down? Are you someone who doesn't have a villain's IQ and puts your head in a cesspool?

I watched it for a long time and didn't understand it. That is not a cool article. It's not a developmental stream. But he was turned into a dog

1. I have never read the original work. Although the writing is quite smooth, because the protagonist is surprised from time to time, I am not sure whether it is directly filling in the original text. 2. Wouldn't it be better if the protagonist is just called Gu Fan? Why do I add a "" in the middle, but I don't feel awkward at all. 3. The writing is very good, but it is purely due to the mediocre plot. Even if a group of robbers suddenly appeared in the middle, it would be better than a whole chapter that is just like the manual, okay.

I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing the third chapter. The main character got sick.

The first few chapters are pretty good, but what kind of dick stuff is written in the back?

A very novel statement about sword energy! The art of protecting the Tao of the Sword Sect is the foundation of the Tao of the Qi Sect. According to the original work, the magical power of Zixia is really good at rejuvenating one's appearance. Lao Yue, who is almost 60 years old, looks like a 40-year-old scholar. If the Zixia divine power and Xiao Wuxiang power collide, then the Sword Sect can be disbanded. Establish the Quanzhen Huashan Taoist Sect directly!

A bit of a drama

Tell the author a secret: writing novels will not lead to immortality