Against the Flow of Eternity, Starting with Reincarnation!

It is different from other simulator articles. Generally speaking, the simulator is used as a system cheat, or to predict the future. It is a long story, but it is written at a fast pace. On the one hand, I feel that the author does not have the ability to control it. On the other hand, it is difficult to shape the characters. It makes me feel like I have not watched it. There is no emotional impact and it is a bit boring. It is better to write a theater and write it like a global actor, and focus on the key stories to shape the protagonist and heroine. Now it feels like the protagonist is just a passerby. .

First life

Come on and support you But I hope it won't be too long without a protagonist.

From Chapter 39 to Chapter 45 I felt boring. The protagonist has no sense of existence.

I suggest it be sweeter and not contain any sadistic scenes. How do you say it? It's just like your introduction. It's fine. Don't deliberately create twenty and let nature take its course.

The plot in the simulation is really too long, and the [ ] symbols all over the text look very funny. It's better to travel through ancient times and start the simulation directly... But the TM written by the author is a text simulation, and I am still outside the simulator. I don't know that when you read a text, you really stick to your face and regard it as yourself, right? Is the freely placed character really you? It's really narcissistic. Another twenty or thirty chapters have passed. Apart from the simulator, I don't even know what the protagonist's real situation is and what world view he has. Modern? Resurrection of spiritual energy? The era of high martial arts? Or something else, none of these are available. Just look at the plot of the first life I saw. It is equivalent to a fan version of the Legend of White Snake with some monster elements * Zhu Yuanzhang's Uprising * The Romance of the Three Kingdoms *. It is completely undisguised. The most important thing is that the real protagonist has not seen any scenes at all, and there is no connection between the simulated plot and reality. Even if it is You can't leave any bait for the readers, you have to see some bait, even a little bit, it is a false support, the pie is not shabby, but TM doesn't leave any pie, the whole article is a simulation of [], the reality is not considered at all, it is still a text simulation of people outside the screen... No, co-author I read the book in real life and the protagonist reads text simulation? Not to mention that chapters 20 or 30 are short, I read these chapters for an hour and a half. Each page of the chapter looks very long, but I can still read it. That's why I feel like it's like a delicacy with hidden thorns. It's delicious and edible. You can't ignore those thorns when you taste them carefully. The more you eat, the more troublesome you feel to eat and spit out the thorns (the thorns ignore the poisonous spots) Those who were deceived by the introduction of imagination slipped in and slipped away.

Brother, there's a typo in your introduction, it's the fourth life.