Peninsula Snake Kiss

Can the author show his bestiality and update Chapter 50 with just one click on the keyboard?

The stupid and stupid foot-picking soldier——Jin Dongtian

Cool

Your turning point probably attracted a lot of people. If you didn't write it down well, those who were waiting and watching should also leave.

Send some pictures of pigs, pigs and snakes🤓🤓🤓

Lively Little Snake

It feels like you've gone high and gone low. Are you making your debut with this identity? Don't know

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Pomelo in the snow

I feel that I need to add two female protagonists to act as the loser group and write something about Shura Field or something. The male protagonist's starting point is too high and it feels like his career line has come to an end. I feel that the starting point is too high and it is difficult to write the protagonist's personality charm. Or is it that he will also debut as a star in the future?

The illegitimate son of the commander of U. S. Forces Korea?

When will Yoo Jimin regain his memory? It won't be until the last moment of the male protagonist's life countdown more than a year later. It will probably take another two or three months to write 😭😭😭

I personally think that we can change the front part and write that the protagonist's father thought that Yoo Jimin was a disaster when the protagonist rescued Yoo Jimin Then because the protagonist and the protagonist's mother temporarily accepted it, and then the protagonist's mother went to the hospital and was forced not to see each other, it was understandable, and then after the protagonist's mother recovered, let nature take its course and let the protagonist's father accept it, but what the author wrote is not considered poisonous. To be honest, there are so many Korean entertainments, as long as they don't eunuchs and don't engage in minotaurs, it's fine 🙂

The content in the early stage is very good, but in the middle stage, there are a lot of forced conflicts, many disgusting plots, and blunt turns, which makes it completely unbearable.

These three chapters today are worth two monthly passes

The male protagonist has also made his debut. . . Don't understand

Come on, author!

Rabbit

When I was doing my third refresh today, I discovered that the author had mentioned in a previous reply that there might be a plot where the male protagonist loses his memory and a pig, a pig, and a snake chase after him. I guess it could be that when the male protagonist got brain cancer, Piggy and Snake regained his memory, but because of the system, the male protagonist lost his memory even though he was not dead 😰😰😰

When will Yoo Jimin regain her memory? 😭😭😭😭😭 It's a bit cruel

These past ten chapters have returned to the same feeling as before.

New book inquiry about teachers

First of all, I would like to praise the author for the dialogue between young lovers. It is very interesting, real and vivid (like personal experience?), And it is also the biggest reason that attracted me to read this book. Very good However, success is Xiao He and failure is Xiao He. This book almost only describes two people getting along with each other and sss and fighting each other. In the later stage, the plot obviously felt monotonous. Some chapters were full of conversations between two people, and sometimes other people were present, but the two people chatted as if no one else was around. I understand that it may be to show affection or to show that they only have eyes for each other, but the impression is a bit strange. I suggest that the author can think of other directions to spread the dog food. I feel that if the dialogue between the two protagonists of this book is refined in half, and more other types of plots are added (such as participating in variety shows together, traveling to Balabala, or even more Shura fields), and then the plot is rationalized a little more, and the writing style is evolved a little more, then it can be regarded as a very good urban light novel. The advantages and disadvantages of this book are obvious. The relationship between Long Zhimeng and Jian Xinghe is very interesting, and the mutual criticism is very interesting (the author's creativity in this aspect can be said to be endless, there are almost no repeated jokes, and there are echoes before and after), the candy is very sweet, and the abuse is also very sad. The only drawbacks may be that there is a bit of knives and a weak plot (a very ancient background of Long Aotian, but I don't hate it, after all, sometimes deus ex machina is indeed the optimal solution to the problem) and too many dialogues, which are basically expressed in the form of one sentence and one sentence to each other (although the writing is very good, I even think the content can be enough for two novels). Finally, I hope the author can hurry up and write, write, write, write, write, write, write, write, write, write, write, write, write, write, write, write, write, not enough at all. The main purpose of typing these words sincerely is actually to express some thoughts and promote new books. Please, please write quickly, please please have a single heroine, please please please the author🙏🥺

Author, I advise you to be kind and don't let the male protagonist lose his memory and stop torturing him.

Why haven't you updated it yet?😭

I finished reading it fiuu... I still feel pretty good. Pure love is relatively rare in Korean entertainment, so I still cherish it when I read one less, hahahahaha. Except for the undeniable flaws in the ending, everything else is okay. After all, Korean entertainment is like this. It is best not to overly imagine and look for resonance with real people when reading. After all, sometimes it is much more comfortable to read without a little bit of real background and realistic character settings. I personally feel that the author is not very skilled in writing, but he does write well in daily life. The only shortcoming of this book is basically that the author has little experience in controlling turning points. When I read this book, I felt that it was a bit like the magic of the Queen of Tears' love that revolves around and around, but I personally feel that it is best not to set too big a plot twist. If it were a pure love story with less twists and turns and more sugar, I believe it would be this 👍👍👍. Finally, why hasn't the author started writing a new book? 🤓