Cultivation: I Seek Immortality in Two Realms

The introduction is very domineering, I hope the content is the same as the introduction

The world view from the introduction is too grand, and I'm afraid the author won't be able to grasp it.

The author writes as if he has never seen a woman before, and is indescribable once he meets a woman.

This is a eunuch 😡

Please 😢😢😢 I love you, okay.

The writing is smooth, and if you still want to read it after reading it, it means the writing is very good.

I've finished reading. I haven't seen such a normal novel about cultivating immortals for a long time. If the quality is still the same, I will order all the next ones.

Forget about eunuchs, the writing is okay. Although the sudden appearance of the woman in the first few chapters is indeed not very pleasing, it can still be written, right?

The last few chapters have not been well written. As a person with secrets and abnormal strength improvement, who comes from a lower class and is not so naive, it is impossible for him to be so high-profile.

Starting from Chapter 28, the writing becomes more and more cliche.

Isn't this well written! ! ! !

I just read the first three chapters, they are well written.

The names of the characters in the novel should be three characters as much as possible. In ancient times, the names were all three characters. The names in the articles are basically two characters. The two characters were simplified by some people in pursuit of fashion after the reform and opening up. The author has also been influenced to blindly stick to the rules and hopes to correct it.