Douluo: Lying Down and Writing a Diary, Wuhun Taixu Kun

I haven't read the original work at all, but I have read a lot about the torture of Tang San. I really like to watch this kind of torture of Tang San Yu Xiaogang. It's not just stupid, it's just speculation with a certain basis. It really suits my taste to find out the unreasonableness in the plot of the original work. Old rule, let's talk about the advantages first. 1. Sophisticated. Although it's not the most sophisticated book I've ever read, it's almost the same. It's out of the category of "black". I understand the original work, and each one will add some settings. Many of the settings are inconsistent with the previous ones, which has led to great differences among Douluo fandoms. The style and settings are at two extremes. Moreover, the original work is said to be very different from the manga and anime in its uncut version. It has been beautified for the sake of being age-appropriate and censored. So this is actually not the problem of these authors, but the problem of Sanshao. So far, the torture angle of this article still suits my taste. 2. The diary complaints in this book are written more naturally. I have read many diaries before. After reading dozens or hundreds of pages, there is nothing else in my mind. The word "wife" is used throughout the whole article, which is extremely obscene. Or maybe it's a common problem among many Douluo fans: creating a big Tang San to punish little Tang San. That's okay, but being more double-standard than Tang San is a bit disgusting. At least this book has not committed this problem so far, which is pretty good. Let's talk about the shortcomings again. I don't mean to criticize. After all, I'm just a bad reader. It's just my personal thoughts after reading so much. 1. Realm and skills. Fast realm is not a problem. It's true that you can write well even if you are invincible at the beginning, but there are too many skills. It's a bit dazzling to see, and I can't remember them. I only know that they are very powerful. I don't have a real feeling about them. At least in my senses, more skills don't mean that they are powerful. The way of heaven cannot come out, destiny comes first, time is king, space is emperor, fate cannot come out, cause and effect is king, and further down there are five elements of yin and yang. Anyway, that's the general meaning, but this power system is obviously not sustainable in fantasy sewers. I think the author also intends to write about multiple worlds. At present, the skills are a bit complicated, and each skill is not very impressive. I feel that it can be integrated. 2. When will the protagonist know about the common problem of diary spoilers? If you know it too early, you don't know how to write the follow-up diary. If you know it too late, the protagonist seems stupid. This is really difficult to balance. I personally prefer to keep it secret, but it requires good plot control to make some obvious "revealing" situations reasonable. 3. The emotional description is not delicate enough. Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing give it away a little too quickly. This kind of giving away too quickly can easily lead to a phenomenon, that is, when the Kawenka plot does not know how to write, they will subconsciously indulge in large-scale meaty dramas. After tasting the sweetness, they will not know what to write, and they will lose their rhythm, resulting in a break in the rhythm. There are really many such situations, so we can only say that we should learn from it. 4. This is my personal reading experience. The cupping is unnatural, a bit like the ancient Dragon King's strength and slap in the face. It feels inexplicably out of character. And this is also where the writing of Invincible is difficult. The small characters are not a big problem with the plot, but the god-level strength is still compared to that of Ma Teddy, which is a bit cheap. It's a book that suits my taste, but it's a little updated. As a student party, I'd like to support it with some money as early as possible. I hope it helps. At least I'll try my best to continue reading it.

I think this author is very unnecessary. Some points are very confusing, but some are very unnecessary, okay?

I hope this one will be better than the previous one. The previous one was too imaginative and took too many steps. The rich background of the hidden world can easily make you collapse, or your combat power collapses. It is better for the protagonist to create his own story, step by step, and readers will have a sense of immersion.

I think it's okay to write a protagonist who is lustful. There are so many Douluo harems. Everyone understands the male author's fantasy, but don't explain it with a bunch of reasons. It seems like you have double standards like Tang San and it will ruin the impression.

The protagonist's character is garbage. The diary flow is cool but not written down. There were not many emotional ups and downs throughout the whole process, [plain] There was also some nonsense. Live streaming has long ceased to be popular. The diary content at the core of the Poison Diary stream and the reactions of female characters are poorly written. The first plot actually lasted 12 chapters. Every word the protagonist says is particularly disgusting, the quality is extremely low, and it makes people sick. As a person who has traveled through two lifetimes, he feels like a gangster and his words are particularly disgusting. No mature temperament at all.

Know best? 😓💀

Am I a woman? With that one

I recommend the author to read the perfect diary.

The core joy of diary streaming lies in the content of the diary and the reactions of women who read the diary. What you write is not good.

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Can we players defeat Tang San and destroy several countries

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

I wonder if no one has written a novel that incorporates the characters and their respective powers in the Legend of Living Heroes, especially the Tang Sect of Living Heroes. I think it would be very interesting 😁

If you write this at Qidian, no one will read it.

Recommend the book, Douluo: The Miracle of the Peerless Tang Sect: The Brilliant Lord, click on the profile picture to see it, and I wish the author will become more and more popular. (Can be deleted)