There Is a World of Cultivating Immortals in My Sea of ​​Qi

It's too dense. Everything happens one after another without any gaps in between.

Always rushing, always anxious. Being pushed around all the time, this is not the way to give away treasures and experience. It was very tiring to read, and I can see that the author has a lot of designs, but if you rush it too much, it will look very rough, and the reading experience will not be very good. I don't know where to jump after one or two chapters, and I feel like I have no direction.

What if our earth is like this, he controls our lives and thinking

Emmm, what can I say? It's not the kind of story that you imagine that can use plug-ins (Qi Hai) to perform cool operations. It's a traditional big conspiracy fairy tale. I'm a little disappointed, because I've read too many traditional fairy tales and wanted to read something new, but it turned out to be old wine in new bottles. But the writing is good, so I'll talk about it after reading the free chapters. I hope that the following content will not overwhelm the combat power for the sake of plot. This will make readers take off early 🙂

The people inside practiced magic skills and were forced to become possessed.

Chain set? Many things I looked at earlier were confusing and unclear. The author can see the first 1 to 3 chapters by looking forward to the back.

This plot point is too dense, one thing follows another, it feels like the previous plot has not finished yet, and the next plot comes immediately

I hope you can provide me with a follow-up reading. Just stay at the last chapter for 20 or 30 seconds. Those who like reading can also follow-up. If you participate in the test push, there will be corresponding updates 🙂

The writing style is similar to the cultivation novels of earlier years. The writing style is good and the main story is well laid out. There are a few typos, the flaws in the details are innocuous, and the comments are compact and the whole article is indeed telling a story. This depends on the audience's preference. It's a pity that the popularity is too low, I'm afraid it's difficult to stick to it. It's a shame that the rubbish in the daily guide can be recommended. All I can say is that I will continue to subscribe and read, watch and cherish it.

I have read Chapter 33 so far. The plot is too dense and not exciting. In addition, the plot is like a slap in the face. This makes it very tiring to read. It's not that it can't be so dense, but the next plot comes again before I can take a breath. It's too fast.

Because the Immortal Dao is weak and the Heavenly Dao is not manifest, the longevity of the monks is reduced by half, as follows: Foundation building: 200 years old Golden elixir: 300 to 400 years old Nascent Soul: 500 years old God transformation: Thousand years of longevity If you find any problems with longevity in the article, you can post it here and I will modify it. I'm sorry that the problem has greatly affected your reading experience.

It's really good, why are there so few people watching it?

It's like a suspenseful crime drama. Before one case is finished, the shadow of the next case appears.

Many book friends have said it to my heart, too impatient, I still like to read

What I'm writing about is the latest chapter on the issue of control over the world of mountains and seas. According to the author, the authority in the world of mountains and seas can only be held by one person at the same time, and there is no distinction between high and low levels? Normally, the setting can give the black shadow control authority, but his authority comes from the protagonist, and the protagonist's withdrawal is only a matter of thought. Since you, the author, don't have this setting, why would you accept a foundation-building spiritual creature that you can neither control nor trust that has self-awareness? Do you want to suppress the plot or disgust the readers?

At present, the performance is stable, but the popularity is limited. You may have to concentrate on writing, so come on!

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