I, the Son of the Qingyun Sect with Double Pupils, Have the Appearance of an Immortal!

What rubbish! Giving the protagonist such a powerful talent turned out to be nonsense, and the protagonist would have become invincible if he devoted himself to cultivation! He always has a romantic relationship with some girl, do you call this cultivating immortality? It's better to write a romantic drama, which can compete with some of the current costume dramas. It's so boring, I came here to watch the protagonist kill and ascend in Zhu Xian. You and I are acting in a romance drama about cultivating immortals. I'm really speechless!

You wrote the beginning very well, but after reaching Xiaozhu Peak, I felt that the plot became more and more uncomfortable.

Author, one update a day is too little. Can we update twice a day? Moreover, the progress of the protagonist's cultivation seems to be a bit slow. Although not much time has passed, a lot of chapters have passed.

The writing is really rubbish, no real character, just a loser, no double pupils, just that character, SB

What kind of rubbish book is this? The main character is a fool.

Don't write in the future. It made me feel uncomfortable. It was the first time I read a novel and I felt so uncomfortable. Since you chose to cheat, you shouldn't write your character in such a disgusting way. You can tell yourself that you are invincible in the world. How can others bully you without any response? What Chong Tong wrote for you is worthless and has no real character at all.