Losing Control Since the Ming Dynasty

I can understand the author's thoughts, but at the moment, the writing is not strong enough to support it, it is too messy, and the character descriptions and content have basically no depth 😥 The battle scenes are as close as a running account 🤤 Some fans seem to be able to read it through emotions and so on. I hope to see the author's progress as they continue reading.

Talking about expelling the Tartars and rebuilding China, these are too far-fetched for ordinary people, and they stand too high. As long as the people in power give them a bite to eat, ordinary people actually don't care who is above them. The greatness of Zhu Yuanzhang is that he is the only one - to this day, even if the more ancient Xia, Shang and Zhou are included, he is also the only one who gave land to farmers? As long as you open up wasteland, this land will be yours. After you die, you can be buried in the land you have worked hard for all your life. Do you know how powerful this temptation is? Go back and ask your elders, when was the last time your family distributed land? Your land belongs to the country! Based on this alone, looking at the people in power from the perspective of ordinary people, Zhu Yuanzhang can stand on the altar and look down on everyone, including Emperor Qin and Wu of Han. At the end of the Yuan Dynasty, everything was in ruins waiting to be revitalized. Zhu Yuanzhang said to the people: The country is newly established. Go farm. The people couldn't believe it: Those landlords just ran away temporarily, and they would come back! Zhu Yuanzhang: As I said, the land you farm belongs to you. The common people tried to do it... When the landlords of the Yuan Dynasty came back, they shouted that they wanted to kill these untouchables! Then Butcher Zhu swung his knife. So the Hongwu Dynasty had the so-called 194 "uprisings"...

Does anyone really read this kind of book? The Ming Dynasty died. Then shouldn't Lao Zhu reflect on it? So many fan kings. Pig policy. How much money did you eat? There are also those nobles from the founding royal family. Cannot travel through time. There should be no reflection. Lessons learned. Everything is written. Pure mindless pretense. Not interesting.

Looking for Zhu Yuanzhang in the late Ming Dynasty? At this point in the late Ming Dynasty, Zhu Yuanzhang was already behind the times. It would be better to replace it with the Northern Expedition Army two hundred years later, which would be more interesting.

Mainly just casually spreading rumors about what to do with your logistics. And soldiers will be homesick. Not to mention. The timeline is so messed up

The writing is pretty good but a little messy. I suggest you number the world and give it a name. Each time you switch the world number, start with the world name.

The idea is good, but the writing is a bit messy

The subject matter is really attractive, but it's so messy that it makes my head spin.

Write a serial number for the world, and fix the time and number of people traveling through it appropriately. If it is too chaotic, the author will not be able to control it.

The problem at the end of the Ming Dynasty was that since the Wanli period, grassroots organizations had collapsed, water conservancy facilities were in ruins, and natural disasters in the north had shut down production for many years. Even the gods could not save them. After all, people have to eat. The Manchus were able to conquer the world because there were ten houses in the north and nine empty houses. The army went south to rob and kill all the way, so there was no need to worry about food. But the Northern Expedition will be a big problem. You have to provide disaster relief, and the army also has to eat.

Well, you can't invest recklessly. This kind of first-class writer has no professional standards. He can do whatever he wants without even saying a word.

If the author of this kind of novel is very high-level, it is recommended to write a kind of fusion novel, Ming Dynasty, Tang, Song, espionage, TV series, animation, the long history from Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors to the present and the future, including animation and TV series, such as the three bodies are integrated into a world view, while integrating The ball is constantly expanding, historical elements, animation elements, such as Qin Shi Mingyue, Bad People, Bei Moting, etc., Modern TV series Begonia Still, Three-Body World, espionage, these are all growing in one world and slowly appear, and finally a mysterious future organization called Shuwei appears, in order to The detachment of human civilization has changed the concept of human beings from pluralism to unity in all time and space latitudes. From now on, there will never be a species with the concept of human beings, nor will there be the same experience. The same choice is like poaching the concept of human beings from the entire real time and space, just like the mythical version of Daluo in mythology.

It's such a mess, it gives me a headache just looking at it

The idea is very good, but the timeline is added too fast, and another timeline comes after only eight chapters