
Ah? Have You All Traveled Through Time?
啊?你们都穿越了?
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 177k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The author actually writes well.
In fact, the writing is okay, but the idea of hiding one's strength is really unacceptable.
In today's society, those who are not doing well like to read cool articles, and those who are doing well mean that you are not as happy as I am. Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is out of date
Author's words
In fact, I have received many comments one after another. Thank you all in advance. Although many of them are bad reviews and incomprehensible, to be honest, many of them are right. This may have caused some impact on my writing, so I will open a post to express my thoughts. The most common problems that people talk about are the leveling and the feeling that there are some things that are inexplicable. First of all, I am indeed a newbie, and there were some problems when I first thought about the direction. I do regret part of this setting, but I still said that I didn't look back, because my setting is to write group portraits (of course I may not have that level), considering that this is the level of the protagonist. On the other hand, it is my personal problem. I have read relatively few books, especially recent books. My ideas are relatively old, and I want to write something different (of course, I may still not be at that level), so I have this book that is very different from the fixed model. To put it simply, I don't know much about routines, and I can't write very well, but I can write long stories, and I'm also reading and studying. I predict that the follow-up will get better and better. Second point, people think that the protagonist looks like a child and has no character. Actually, in my eyes, he is okay. In fact, I think everyone has read a lot of books and watched a lot of dramas. They all have a template for how the characters should be, and how the protagonist should be. My starting point in writing about people is more traditional, that is, trying to be close to reality (of course I may not have this ability). For example, the protagonist has been hundreds of years old, but still has a young mentality. I just feel that if there are no people in the world, many things will be meaningless, and confusion should be the final destination. I can't say it is inevitable, but it is possible, which is why I set it like this. For example, when everyone returns to the world, the first thing they do is not to think that the time cannot be a few days based on the real environment, but to believe that the system said that a disaster has occurred. Because this is more in line with human nature, most ordinary people are unwilling to believe a conjecture that is incomprehensible to them when they encounter difficulties. This is the source of some points that you may think are inappropriate. I can only say that the starting point may indeed be a bit inconsistent with the Internet article, but it is not nonsense. Then, about some friends (very few hehe) who think I am okay, thank you. I think these contents are my problem, but it is not an advantage? So I have always felt that my biggest problem is rhythm. The only way to do this is to practice. That same sentence, thank you for seeing this. (Hey, if there are any bad comments, I will delete them (manual dog head))
One Punch Man, which made this routine popular, has cooled down. Why are you still writing it?
Could this be the long-extinct legendary trend of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger?
Hee hee, it will take a few days because no one will maintain the nuclear power plant. No one resets the launch time for the nuclear bomb. Dead hand system starts. A day of nuclear peace
No, Daodu gave me the cut-off book 🤔
It was good before, but now it is no longer popular, and there are many conflicts.
It's very innovative and the text is very fluent. Don't worry, more and more people will read it after reading it.
Well written
Keep following good authors with potential, keep paying attention!
Getting better
The introduction attracted me in. At the beginning, I saw the uncles and brothers in the village rushing back because of a whistle. I got goosebumps watching it. It was really good. Later, I dare not tell my family that I have lived alone for a hundred years. I am afraid that my family will be afraid and I will feel it. The family I miss so much is back and I still want the same thing as before. If I tell my family about their lack of understanding and distrust, it will be very uncomfortable.
I have a little question. Who has maintained the communication for hundreds of years?