Why Are You Crying When I Break Up? the Fake Daughter Leads a New Sect

Finally finished the update! ! ! I can finally kick this book off my bookshelf! ! ! I won't mention the many wrong words and sentences, it's still bearable. But this plot is really ridiculous. What readers want to see is not shown to readers. What readers don't want to see is written as a running account. What should I write? Will readers buy your book because of those bad jokes? This book is not popular because the author is not good enough and wants to make money. If you let me read it for free, I would think it was a waste of my time. If you write it like this and you still have to pay me to read it, what are you dreaming about?

No, how can you continue to look at this feeling of frustration?

There is a trend now in Qidian. The male protagonist is as happy as a mad dog, and the female protagonist is as aggrieved as the heroine in the sad drama of the era. She has a heart attack.

Not enough! The author is great and I strongly request that 5 chapters be updated every day! ! !

Like! Can the author update more a day😍😍😍

I feel an unknown fire when I see it , those guys from Feiyun Sect are just so crazy, they don't care about the situation, Ling Xiao is the one who pisses me off the most, Bai Mumu has so many scenes, the cost of the heroine saving the world of cultivation is too miserable, although the ending is resurrected, but it makes people feel powerless, I really didn't expect that I endured to finish it, I wanted to give them a slap after watching, the ending felt so rushed, but the advantage is that the heroine did not fall in love, it would be very boring to write about love.

Author, how could you be so cruel?,,

This master is really disgusting, he has a weak heart, he is blind and blind, he cannot see his own problems, and he can even turn around and say he is being kicked out when he invites himself to leave the master as promised.

Why let Zhu Miao die,,,😭😭😭

God. I admit that the front part is quite beautiful, and the heroine's character is perfectly created. The description of how desperate she is before victory is really heart-wrenching. But the finale feels a bit sloppy, especially Shen Daochen's death... Although the ending is satisfying, it is not very happy. In addition, at first glance, the plot development has no problems in details, but it is indeed delayed. I can only say that it is quite satisfactory.

I think the writing is very good. The plot progresses quickly. Maybe it's just that the senior brothers are a little too remorseful, and a group of grown men are regretting and repenting again and again, making them less and less cute. Bai Mumu is quite cute (except for the murder part), I want to see the red panda🐻

I quite like Bai Mumu, the black lotus needle who makes a career for himself by gaining favor with others 😆 Love watching

So-so, so verbose. I keep emphasizing how the heroine is, but I feel that the heroine has no merit other than a nice name.

Is it a daily update? Is it a daily update? Is it a daily update?

Beautiful! But it would be nice if the plot was more compact. Woohoo.

The update is too slow. The audience likes to watch quick and refreshing posts that slap Piapia in the face.

Are you used to only updating two chapters a day?

The author's writing is good, the plot is well prepared, the emotions are stirred up well, and there are many areas for improvement. After reading it, I still feel that it is very interesting. Very interesting😭😭

This synopsis is exactly the same as the plot of a novel I read last year

The abuse of the heroine in the front is a bit mindless, but the plot in the back can actually keep up, but don't you think it's a bit baffling? There are also some character creations that are difficult to describe. I feel that several people have similar images. The language is also very simple and unpretentious. In human terms, the writing style is actually not very good. There is no good description. However, the middle section at the end really made me happy. However, the author seems to have forced the heroine's former master and senior brothers to be intellectualized in order to bring out the ruthlessness of the heroine. It's like having no brains. There are also descriptions of the gap between cultivation levels, but it does not make people feel very strong. I didn't say it was very touching, because I feel that the author's focus is entirely on Bai Mumu and the heroine. If you want to be better, don't leave anything else behind. I can see that it is still readable, and the image of the old wizard is maintained at the front and falls apart at the back. The author's writing is really incomprehensible. Can the connection be made more natural? Hey! ! This book has a lot of flaws, but it is really exciting to read. It is said to be a female channel. There are a lot of training buffs for the heroine, but I don't feel that there is anything very special about it. There is no specific image of what the heroine looks like. It may be that the author's writing is not very good, so there is no detailed description of the heroine's appearance. You can read it, but the ending is a bit unsatisfactory. What the author needs to change may be to improve his writing and the connection of the plot. There are also some sentences with grammatical errors (because I think they are really baffling). They are just suggestions. Or are they really over the top? . If you don't like it, don't criticize it. This is the first time I've read this kind of content. It's quite novel to me, but the author's writing style is really unsatisfactory! !