Start Practicing by Swallowing Demons

Forget it, there is no passion in the fighting painting. Although the divine power is not turned on, the protagonist's performance is the same as if the divine power is turned on to reduce intelligence. Is it still very literary and pretentious?

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It's too gamified. The five senses should be called talents. You said that the skills are seriously gamified. All kinds of consumption are just to suppress the pig's feet. It's even more gamified! It's painful to hear!

Can you write faster? Two chapters a day is enough for anyone to read.

The writing is okay. A young man with revenge goes up the mountain to slay demons. The pace is not slow and it is more interesting than those in the top ten.

Why did Ye Yun's IQ become so low later? ?

I think the author's introduction is okay. In the atmosphere of this book, don't write about the protagonist's "wry smile". This is a poisonous point