Red Mansion Elegance

Just a personal opinion, in order to integrate into the garden life and lengthen the rhythm of the story, only young children can be brought in. However, the original owner is an adult with modern education, and his words and deeds always feel awkward. As a reader, it is difficult to assume the image of the protagonist. I recommend it to friends who like Red Mansion fandom but do not read much. Otherwise, it is inevitable that some common routines will be repeated many times and it will be difficult to come up with new ideas.

From a personal point of view, they all have an excellent start, each has its own characteristics, and the level is much better than the previous batches of Red Mansions. However, there are too many Red Mansions that are lost to everyone after writing hundreds of thousands of words. After all, Yuanzi Opera tests the author's skills. Bypassing Yuanzi Opera, whether it is about imperial examinations or military plots, is too easy to make dramas, and will lead to a large number of plots that do not contain Red Mansions characters, and the motivation to pursue books will naturally decrease. The current book, The Scumbag Next Door, is worth waiting for. Not only is the author's writing skills on the line, but he is not a serious author in any way. The Red Mansion is inherently vulgar, but anyone who really can't think of writing about The Red Mansion in an elegant and fresh way is really a bit upside down.

It was okay at the beginning, the writing was excellent, and the scene in the garden was just okay... But suddenly there was a flood, and it was for the country and the people Have you forgotten that the protagonist is 10 years old, has no official position, and has no teacher to support him? The garden hasn't been finished yet Thought it was grass jelly, but it turned out to be hay

The title of your book is "The Third Master of the Ring of Red Mansions". It will absorb twice as much.

It's a vulgar stereotype. The protagonist first sells novels, is appreciated by nobles, and then takes the imperial examination. It is estimated that some princess and princess will appear later. What's even more routine is that the protagonist is hated by everyone and everyone wants to kick him. Is it interesting to write like this? All the elders hated him and suppressed him desperately when they saw his potential. Just like those protagonists in fantasy who have a halo of ridicule, the elders spent all day thinking about suppressing the protagonist. . . . . . It's okay to say that Mrs. Wang suppresses the protagonist, but it's nonsense to say that Jia Mu is afraid that a promising person will overshadow Baoyu. The title has nothing to do with the protagonist, and a bastard will be separated when he grows up. These elders were at best indifferent and indifferent, and they had just started studying, as if they all knew that the protagonist would definitely have a future, but the protagonist himself did not have that much confidence. The vulgar Red Mansion fans are all elders who want the protagonist to die, but the golden hairpins all like the protagonist and are speechless! Fanfics should also have something of their own, they all follow fixed routines to simply and crudely attract hatred and then slap them in the face.

Personally, I feel that choosing Jia Huan is a failure. Although he is a concubine, he appears a lot in the original work. Although his status is not good, he is much better than Jia Cong and his like. Can you avoid Mrs. Wang or Mrs. Jia? You can never escape from the shackles of feudal ethics. It is best to write a side story when writing Red Mansions, and you must be in the fifth server. Otherwise, how can you get the twelve hairpins? How to cut off from Rong Ning's Second Mansion?

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave dazzling traces.

Is the imperial examination useful? Even if you are a genius, even if you are admitted to the first place at the age of 15, how much power can you have and how much influence can you have on the court? The Jia family will still be destroyed.

Very red house! The courtyard drama is also good. Many names and words in the book are quite interesting. Zhang Guan, the words are consistent, are they consistent? Shen Jun, the words are Duanping, they are all in line with the scholars at that time. As for the poem, it is a matter of opinion. But next time the author can avoid such controversial poems. Some readers directly criticize it, which still affects the mood. Haha, the author needs a strong heart. Come on, I am waiting for your thousand chapters!

It's just that the number of words tends to be too long, although the advantage is that it's easy to make money with literature. Refer to the movie next door, "Wan Tian Qing", which has so many words. . I have to say that the book must have obvious advantages, but if someone can learn from each other's strong points, I really won't mention it. For example, this book, Qin Keqing will definitely accept it depending on the situation, but if it is written normally, there will definitely be readers who criticize the protagonist for being both cool and independent. , People will feel that it is the right thing to not accept it. This is the way it is written. . I feel that each golden hairpin can take up too much space and make people remember it forever. I can't imagine how many words and energy it takes to write it. .

Why do you have to write about Red Mansions with Jia Cong (Jia Huan)? Lin Daiyu entered the government at the age of six, died at the age of seventeen, and then the Jia family was confiscated. This means that you have to conquer everyone in the Jia family within ten years, and then get a title on the gold list, and then climb to at least the third rank. Not to mention whether you can pass the exam, just because of the exam time, you may not be out of the novice village and then you will be banned, and the younger you are, the less you can do. In this case, you might as well cultivate hybrid rice, but here comes the problem again. You are small, have neither money nor people, and can't leave the house. So what do you do? Even if you do it, how do you hand it over, who does it go to, and who gets the credit?

No, bro, when did you resurrect? I didn't notice it at all.

The protagonist is only nine years old, so don't focus on the color. It feels too inconsistent. Qin Keqing and Li Wan. Just describe it in terms of lust. How horny are you?

I don't like the Red Mansions novel with the surname Jia. Anyway, in the end it's a nanny novel. The nanny novel = a suppressed novel 🙂

It's a new book. I would like to give the author a suggestion. When writing about Red Mansions, remember to explain less. Please, there are so few explanations, especially the long and straightforward psychological descriptions. The third-person protagonist should explain less about behavioral motivations and deconstruct the relationships between the characters. Don't explain if you can use actions and language to highlight the characters. If the author explains clearly, then why should readers read it? Readers who write novels now generally have a problem. They are afraid that readers will not understand or misunderstand what they want to express, so when they write about what an important character has done, they can't wait to use long paragraphs of psychological description. Everything the protagonist does must be explained clearly. The writing is not like a novel or an argumentative essay, but there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people. If a thousand people only read one Hamlet at the end of the writing, the readers will definitely run away without enthusiasm. A novel is a novel, it tells a story, and the author is the narrator. Don't output a certain point of view directly. What the reader can understand depends on the reader himself. What fantasies can satisfy the reader's fantasy, what kind of thinking can it arouse the reader, what kind of entertainment can it provide, and what kind of conflict can be generated under what framework. Only in this way can it be topical, retain people, and attract more comments. This is my personal experience after reading a lot of history-oriented fan fiction such as Three Kingdoms and Red Mansions. Many authors have this problem, and I don't know why. My humble opinion, it would be great if it is useful.

The author is outstanding, and his writing skills are excellent, but the logic of character creation is flawed. A time traveler, a quasi-uncle level, having an affair with a twelve or thirteen-year-old lolita, let's not consider this truly perverted behavior, a quasi-uncle, how can you become mentally tender! Time brings tempering, no matter how high your acting skills are, no matter how good you are at pretending to be 13, even a first-class actor will not be able to perform well without a script!

I hope you don't marry Lin Daiyu. It's really perverted that a bunch of Red Mansion readers like incest marriage.

When the protagonist was still a weakling, he named himself Jia Ruzhen. Is there anything more brainless and disgusting than this? Because in the world of Red Mansions, the most disgusting person is Jia Zhen. What's more, Jia Zhen will definitely be unhappy with this name and will cause trouble for herself. It's too dissuasive. Some people say they pay tribute to Cao Xueqin or imitate Jia Yucun's name. It's simply inexplicable.

If the author wants to write a serious historical article, he should not write a vulgar pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot. Just like the literary meeting in the previous chapters, any little Karami who dares to make trouble inside will probably be kicked out regardless of right or wrong, not to mention a group of businessmen and nobles. In front of those poetry and book houses, what is the difference between the two and 🐶? Being able to come in and rush you to give money or say some auspicious words to me is to give you face. In short, it doesn't seem like a big problem, but it feels like it lacks a heavy feeling when reading it. This may be related to the author's writing style and the age of the protagonist. The above represents my personal opinion.

Just like an old lady from a wealthy family, she has always been a flower in the greenhouse from young to old, and she has been well protected. He has some political acumen, but not much, otherwise Yuanchun would not be sent to the palace. And what this old lady does depends on her preference. There is a saying that describes her very aptly: After I die, I won't care about the flood.

How could the author of this book not bear to update it? This book and "Qingyun Road" are my favorites at the moment.

I've read thirty chapters. It's really well written and very to my taste. I'll vote for one monthly ticket first, and at the end of the month, I'll double it to 3 tickets. The subscription is also arranged for the first time!

It's in line with the taste, and the garden is full of fun! Overall, it's more warm and less hostile. It's suitable for reading slowly. I skip most novels. I can't bear to give this one up.

Many Red Mansions fan authors will be vague about age, exaggerating the age appropriately. Furthermore, when choosing the protagonist, they will choose someone who is slightly older. Even if the age you wrote is consistent with the original work, it would be quite inconsistent for such a young protagonist to be a trendsetter of the era. The huge sense of violation will make it difficult for readers like me to continue reading. Also, I would like to give you a suggestion. There are already characters whose appearance is described in the original work, or there are characters in the 1987 version of The Red Chamber. If you choose them as the protagonists, don't describe them as handsome, with a golden hairpin that will make you like them at first glance, etc. Most readers of Red Mansions fan fiction have an impression of these characters, and they have a foundation for fantasy when reading fan fiction. If the appearance depicted conflicts seriously with the characters in their own impressions, the sense of immersion will be almost gone.

The writing is very nice and comfortable.

Doesn't this book have a golden finger? How could modern people survive in ancient times without a golden finger?

There is no golden finger in this book, so I can only jump to read it.

Red Mansions, I may just like to go to war, and no one will dare to bully me when I come back! This book has more than 60 chapters and has achieved nothing, but it topped the list of children's voices in the exam! Nothing can protect you, it all depends on the halo of the male protagonist! To be honest, either the author's writing style is not good, or he just feels that such gentle and elegant writing is not suitable for appearing in Red Mansions! The top has been suppressed, and it seems that a few insignificant servants have been dealt with, but what has been the impact? To put it bluntly, if you have no prestige at all for someone who focuses on recruiting a harem, why should you collect her? Do you rely on being thick-skinned? 🙂 If the male protagonist makes the family feel powerful, then maybe it would be better to just wear it outside the Rongguo Mansion and rely on his own abilities, right? I kept waiting for the male protagonist to do something, and then no one dared to bully him, but nothing happened! But it's not without reason that there are so many good reviews. The author's writing style is really good! I feel aggrieved because I don't have the patience to wait for the male protagonist to be supported by the Rongguo Mansion after hundreds of chapters. I like to watch male videos because most of the male protagonists in male videos are crisp and domineering! I haven't read much. I hate that human nature is so evil. It's so evil that you have to put it into the house in the end, and it's even more evil that the final result is just letting it go after having no choice. So the grievances you suffered in the past are just for the ending of being a nanny? Just to be told by evil people, "I can't afford to offend you, just support me!" This is female channel style!

If this were the ninja world, I would have nothing to say if you saved the world at the age of nine.

Now that I have written about Jia Huan, does Caiyun Caixia have a role?🤓